A Hundred Solutions to the Dark Makeup Under One Person

Does the protagonist really have no temper? He has been called a yellow-skinned monkey. Can you please stop writing plots about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? If you pretend to be a pig too much, you will really become a pig.

There used to be a book with the same name, but it was later cut. I don't know if it was written by the same person.

Does the protagonist really have no temper? They were all called yellow-skinned monkeys

After reading forty-one chapters, my personal feeling is not very good, but compared with the previous book Baijie of Yinzhuang, it is indeed much better. I personally think that there are several points in this book that need to be improved The first point is that there is a gap between the plot at the beginning and the introduction of Yinzhuang Mask. The beginning is very good but it is not suitable for introducing Yinzhuang Mask. There is some sense of fragmentation in the middle, but the problem is not big Secondly, for the sense of characters The design of the plot seems stiff. The four supporting characters introduced for the first time and several playboys are obviously not qualified. It is recommended to refer to Wu Da Shao in Jiang Wen's Republic of China trilogy. The first female supporting character who appears is obviously abnormal for the protagonist's emotional progress. It is recommended to design a childhood patch. The two Fujiyama girls have the same problem. They are superficial and lack logic (including the setting of Fujiyama). The storyline on the ship is also reasonable, but it is The emotions of the characters under the hint are obviously off-line. As of today's latest update, some foreshadowing can be added when describing the victim. The last paragraph of "like being struck by lightning" is too abrupt and affects the emotional brewing. You can change it to a slightly gentler description and add another paragraph later to fully brew this part of the emotion and break it up before taking action The author's story description is good but the emotion is much worse. If not To make up for it in the short term, try to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses, and then make in-depth arrangements when writing is smooth. Some other ability settings still need to be quickly optimized and cannot be framed in Wu Nuo. It should be more about faith, and it should not be made up for the shortcomings of dual cultivation of life and life at the beginning. This is not only unreasonable, but also gives up the introduction of some subsequent events, and cultivating seven souls does not mean cultivating life If you feel that there is still two points of truth in what I said, you can refer to it as appropriate.

I'll read the first 20 chapters, but I don't know what to write in the next 30 chapters 🤫

Two chapters of a barbecue are gone, that's outrageous

I went to a birthday party and wrote more than twenty chapters.

The water is real water. After two or three chapters of talking about a fox, we still haven't gotten to the point. I mentioned that I'm still on the way to Lu's house.

High-quality food and grass. Advantages: Decisive killing, no licking of dogs, no awkwardness in pretense. Disadvantages: The plot is very dragging, and some of the exciting parts seem inexplicable, such as the part about killing bandits and fighting foxes. These two parts seem a bit draggy. But here comes the important point. He was going to the Lu family to show off his skills but was seriously injured on the way there. It's hard not to think that the protagonist's strength is undervalued! The summary is that it feels like it is in the middle between good and average, but neither good nor bad!

The evidence is as follows: I have been reading Chapter 50 and don't know what I am writing The first few chapters are very interesting and interesting On the way to the Lu family, I could write hundreds of thousands of words... What about being molested by the Japanese on the boat, what about meeting a female ghost on the boat, what about meeting a bandit What do I rely on to write?

I don't understand why the abilities of the protagonists in many supernatural novels are some ancient low-level things, such as carrying corpses, sewing corpses, and applying makeup to the dead. The key is that you still make it look very high-class. . .

If you mix the pig for a long time, you will turn into a pig.

From a visual inspection, it seems that you have to put it on the shelves before you can get to Lujia, which is too watery. . .

Logically speaking, the master who adopted him is a cultivator, and his job is a matter of life and death. How could he be named Xie Bian? Can you afford it? As long as his master is a cultivator, he will never give him such a name. It is illogical.

I'm super, the name Xie Bian is a bit destructive of Yangshou. Isn't the protagonist's destiny a stormy one?

It is best to major in alchemy, and the best way is to practice both life and life.

Why write about a person who is either Longhushan or Wuyou?

To be honest, the knife has been too sudden in the past two days, and I can't accept it.

The fighting strength collapsed. Unless you go to the infinite plane flow...

The damn monsters are out, what are you writing about?

Haha, although the combat power is really low. And the writing is finished. But there is one thing to say. The author wrote it very well.

What is written in the first few dozen pictures?

The author's updates are unstable 😴

The latest chapter seems to be a bit jumpy. First, Zhou E and his master got back together. After a few chapters, a Japanese onmyoji came and cut off Zhou E's limbs, and Jiang Wu also lost his left arm. I just lamented the author's sudden knife attack. After two chapters, the protagonist came down to earth in the real Bai Wuchang, and his combat power exceeded the standard. Zhang Zhiwei, the first person of his generation to achieve immortality, felt like he was instantly killed. In the last three years, after the protagonist neutralized Bai Wuchang's divine power and the Japanese monster's demonic power and reached a balance and regained consciousness, his cultivation level was even more incredible. For example, he was reborn with a broken arm (Jiang Wu), and shrunk to an inch (Longhu Mountain opened a portal directly to Jinmen). It felt that the protagonist was completely detached from the entire one-person fighting system. It felt like you were cultivating Qi and I was cultivating immortality. You must know that the protagonist has only now reached the third level of the fourth level of the Yin Gate...

This is my number one. I hope you don't give up.

The rating is average, the plot is dragging, and it's quite embarrassing.

In fact, I feel that even if the true god descends to the earth, he will not be the opponent of the Celestial Master. Although Zhang Jingqing is not Zhang Zhiwei, Mi Er is set dead. The strongest existence under one person is the Celestial Master, and there is no one stronger than him. According to this setting, when the fan fiction is written, even the immortal god coming to earth is definitely not the opponent of the old Celestial Master, because there is an ascended existence under one person. Since Mi Er wrote this, it proves one thing, the old Celestial Master is stronger than those who have ascended.

The author, I advise you to be kind😒

The more I look at it, the more outrageous it becomes. I can't complain.

Author, you are a bit awesome, you wrote 4 books together