Comprehensive Martial Arts: Young Ranger Xiangyi Taijian

After reading a few chapters, there are a few things I want to say 1: Typos. The author of the protagonist's data should have recorded it separately. In the weapon column, it is Shaoshi Sword. But in other paragraphs, Shaosi thought it was a recording problem with the input method. 2: The use of words and numbers. In the description of the degree of mastery and imitation in the article, one uses numbers + %, and the other uses percent + numbers. Personally, I am not used to and like the same description expressed in different ways, especially when the two often appear at the same time, which gives me a feeling of being neither Chinese nor foreign (description) 3: Map issue, the author has arranged a total of 6 countries, and the national power rankings are also arranged. Personally, I think the author could make a country distribution map and put it at the end of the chapter or within the text to enrich the background setting. Personally, I felt a little awkward during the reading process. Let's not mention that Liyang is fictional. The other five countries seem to have historical shadows (after all, Temujin's grandson described it this way). If this is the case, is there a certain conflict between the basics of the Qin, Tang, Ming and Song Dynasties? Therefore, I kindly ask the author to provide a rough map and mark the protagonist's action route to increase the sense of involvement. 4: Regarding the character design, the following words are a bit offensive, please forgive me To be honest, I find this paragraph about the imitation of the protagonist uncomfortable, even a little disgusting. What does it mean to conform to the character template and be called Li Xiangyi to the outside world? And what does it mean that imitating him is not a bad thing? I have read the novels and TV series of Lotus House, and I feel that starting from this paragraph alone, the original intention has been lost. Lee Sang-yi is not Lee Sang-yi. If we start from the original intention of the book, I think the degree of integration of Li Sang-yi's template will not increase at all but decrease. This system is called the Ranger system, regardless of whether the meaning of Ranger is good or bad. What we are saying is that we were given a template, good guy, and after looking at this system, we almost changed its name to the imitation system. When I started writing reviews, the ones that got me fired up were all imitation systems. Furthermore, imitation is also about imitation. The opening sentence calls himself Li Xiangyi. When I think of this, I feel a little sick. Just by saying this sentence, my desire to read is greatly reduced. That's all for now. It's getting late, so I'd better go to bed first.

It's not that the plot of Lotus Tower is boring. The most interesting thing about Lotus Tower is that it's pretentious and slaps in the face.

No harem stories, no harem. . Either a single girl, a couple of girls, or no girls. But, farewell to the harem, farewell to the harem, farewell to the harem.

Li Xiangyi is a genius among geniuses. He became the best in the world when he was just a teenager. With only one or two levels of skills left, he beat to death his senior brother who had gained the skills of his master for decades. You can imagine how powerful Li Xiangyi is. If the protagonist cannot show it, it will be a big poison.

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If it were Li Xiangyi's template, it would really not be suitable to learn the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, as one can move with clear energy and flexibility. The Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms are obviously strong and fierce. It is better to become a disciple of Huang Laoxie.

Zong Wu, just travel through the world well! But you chose to be integrated into one world! Done! Go take a look at the full attack that combines all the dynasties.

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