Martial Arts Song

Asking for a lot of leave, and deleting it as soon as you finish asking for it, is fine, but this behavior. Really 6

The front looks pretty, but the back feels a little watery. I jumped at the chance to order the back.

It's not bad, I can still read this book. It's just that I thought it would be better. The writing method is particularly subtle, 1. I like to write in detail that some parts are not important, and may even be wrong, but I will skip the things that are written in detail. It's okay to write some points in detail, but there must be some extensions, or some explanations in the follow-up, but some things written in detail will not be followed... Then why write it, and what is the meaning of that paragraph? Furthermore, the reactions of the characters are very strange, they are not stereotypes, they are some special reactions... Well, how to put it, if you interact with people a little more, you will know that this kind of people will not have this reaction. The description of family is also very strange. Just like 1, it over-describes unimportant things, but the reaction that should be written is not written. To put it simply, the problem with this book is that it is the same as the number 0. Xxxxxxxxx. For such a long number, there are several subtle changes at the end. Who will read this seriously? It can be replaced by something simpler and more intuitive. You might say it's useful, and it does have some effects, but is there a simpler and more intuitive way? Yes, there are many. But the author disagrees, and thinks it is a good idea. Just... Hmm😐When I read the middle part of the book, I felt "Huh? Something is wrong somewhere" but I couldn't explain it. In fact, it was the reason 1

I decided to abandon the book after reading Chapter 137! The protagonist and his parents actually used their wealth and life to protect an unrelated girl (the daughter of the protagonist's mother's employer). If the villain hadn't looked out for the protagonist's master, they would have almost lost their entire family's lives! What kind of brain circuit is this, the whole family bitch, so poisonous! Abandoned

I gave up and saw that Tang Hongquan died. I felt that the protagonist was a clown. Tang Hongquan was even more stupid. As a local overlord, any passerby was ten thousand times smarter than this overlord.

When it came to the defense, I worked hard and practiced so many limit-breaking techniques to get to 5.6. The master made a few injections and got to 10. 😰😰😰 Are you sure you haven't changed the outline? ? ? ?

There are so many bg. I had an ominous premonition from the time I saw the former Ouchi master, the protagonist who had been practicing martial arts for twenty days, and none of the four could beat him. Next, the central government can do nothing about China's super masters. He surpassed it after being trained by the protagonist for ten days. The protagonist's family fights tooth and nail for a little girl whose name they don't even know The super awesome person that was previously rendered, the super master in Zone Z turns out to be just little Karami! But this is the most awesome existence in the city. With less than a hundred pieces, it has become a consumable item like a big soldier. The internal training of the five internal organs is even more outrageous. The kidney training relies on drinking alcohol and massage. The golden finger of the protagonist has no effect. As a result, the effect of one month exceeds that of other people's geniuses in ten years. If you want to fuck me, I won't say anything. Why are you just drinking and getting a massage? All in all, there are too many flaws

Starting from Chapter 100, the protagonist actually wants to start a newspaper. We are also preparing to serialize martial arts novels. Author, you can't find anything exciting, can you? This is a fantasy upgrade novel. If you don't improve your own strength, what's the use of engaging in these heresy? Short of money? There is no shortage. Do you need fame? What's the use of fame. What I want to see is how you can improve your strength and use force against firearms. It would be better for you to play a bad street trick like Wenzhaogong and prepare to copy the Condor Shooter. Subscribed to about 30 chapters. In vain

Chapter one hundred and forty finally went from rubbish at level 5 to rubbish at level 12 through cheating 🙂 Then after a hundred chapters, it has just reached level 15. This kind of progress is really disgusting. It doesn't feel like the protagonist is making progress at all, but the opponent of the senior brother is written in advance. Based on the current progress, let alone 3 years, let alone 30 years, I won't be able to catch up with my senior brother. It is estimated that the author will have to make temporary enhancements in the end. The novel is pretty good, but when I think of this, I suddenly have no desire to read it 😒

I sincerely suggest that the author just write in the style of being violent and reckless all the way up. This book is not reckless enough. It seems that any conspiracy, cleverness, or even caution will have nothing to do with you. Also, your cultivation system is extremely unreasonable. There is no problem with the parallelism of energy, energy and spirit. The key is that there is no setting like spiritual energy at present. There are extraordinary energies such as heaven and earth vitality, spiritual energy and so on. Everything is easy to say. Now the source of energy depends entirely on eating. When the energy is turned into energy, it needs to be eaten by an ordinary person's body to replenish energy. I am afraid it will take three days and three nights. And how can a weak body support powerful energy and spirit? As far as your Qi changes are concerned, whoever practices the body of ordinary people will die. If you really want to practice it, you can only advance to the three realms of essence, energy and spirit step by step.

When I started practicing Tiger Claw, my strength increased quickly, which is understandable. I really don't know how to do the lung training so fast. When it comes to kidney training, it is even more incomprehensible. It is completely assisted by others. Also, the other party obviously doesn't want to help you, but they immediately help you after a whole palace drama. I think it's really embarrassing. Also, if the newspaper Shendiao becomes popular, it is better to find someone else to write it. Doesn't the author even know the reasons why a book becomes a classic? Generally, good works are composed of many very classic nouns, and then the nouns resonate with the plot, rather than simply telling a vernacular story.

The writing is not good, but the posts are deleted very aggressively. I deleted it without saying a single curse word. . 🙂🙂

The leveling down is unreasonable. It's not that it's impossible to level up, but the reason is wrong. When you get started, you will be taught one bone kung fu, and you have to find the other five visceral kung fu by yourself. How can you say that your name is not targeted by others? Then he went to the main hall and became one of the four hall masters, but ended up learning kung fu and still having to do tasks? Moreover, the master himself must have learned how to practice Qi and Shen Shen, so he has to let others teach him the orthodoxy? In short, there is no difference between joining a division and not joining a division. The five visceral trainings are all obtained by doing tasks for the official, and the bone training can also be obtained.

There are so many plots in Shui that it wouldn't work without a backstage, so I drew more than a dozen pictures. Back and forth, so much money was spent to buy a backstage, but in the end, others still dared to shoot directly in the street. This backstage is useless The key is to save the fighting until after it is released, but also forced a break test and dragged out more than a dozen pictures, which gave people a particularly bad impression.

Judging from the protagonist's series of actions, the author feels good and moved by taking on the role. However, when a rational reader reads the novel from an objective perspective, some of the protagonist's actions are quite...? The author has been away from society for too long, and the underlying logic of society in the novel is derived from obscenity.

The latest plot is not an ordinary retard. In order to create a conflict between the protagonist and Tang Hongquan, the protagonist is forced to intervene in the fight between Tang Hongquan and the mayor. He really respects the protagonist. Tang Hongquan is about to wipe out the family and the protagonist still intervenes. What kind of great kindness does the protagonist and the mayor's family deserve to do this? Just because his mother wanted to protect her employer's daughter? As long as the protagonist makes it clear to his mother, his mother will never think about protecting him again

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that the building I was fighting with that old master was destroyed. He was so pretentious and so stupid that I really regretted paying to watch it!

Damn it, you really turned into an anti-Japanese novel and gave up.

It's a really poisonous novel. I haven't been able to sustain it even with twenty years of skill. The plot is so fucking fucked. It forcibly lowers IQ. I feel like the author is underage.

The masters are all back. . Why not ask in advance about the remaining training methods for the five internal organs? Do you have to look elsewhere on your own? There is no visceral training in Huxingmen? It's impossible. Isn't your master from the Huxingmen Jingmai? Qi meridians and divine meridians do not care about the five internal organs

I just started reading it, and I was a little overwhelmed when I saw Chapter 24. At first, the supporting character swore that the protagonist didn't practice extra that night, but the protagonist asked him to stay with him for one night to see if he practiced. Then the protagonist went to the supporting character's house, and then slept all night. The protagonist didn't practice, but the supporting character believed it: you really didn't practice extra... This is a bit hasty, isn't it? The protagonist takes it for granted, does this prove it? The supporting characters are so innocent that you believe them in one night?

After watching half of it, I really don't understand some of the settings. Since there are many masters who are stronger than Jingzhan, why would a piece of trash named Tang be fighting against the government? There is no one behind him. Wouldn't it be enough for any expert to kill him, and then keep him for decades?

Anyway, Chen Qing doesn't look like the protagonist. Tiantian emphasizes that he is not from this world and has no good impressions of this world. He suggested that Chen Qing be killed and Lu Tianyuan, a lunatic, be the protagonist.

Don't always say that this book will be about eunuchs or something else, but have some confidence in the left and right. The last book, Super Dimensional Killing, can be considered completed. Although it is only part of the content, it is also completed. This is an improvement! Even though the last book was Dark Super God, although there were some unpleasantness, although there was a long time interval in between, although some people did not agree with the ending, and although many people thought it was very short, it is undeniable that it is indeed finished and has an ending. I think this is a good phenomenon and a situation that is making progress. Previously, Zuo Zuo had been writing books while changing IDs and numbers. Although The Wandering Taoist and City of Swords were finished, I actually think that it should be considered a novice's work. It was written when Zuo Zuo had just entered the writing industry. It was not until the book Super Evolution of Gods and Demons that Zuo Zuo started to slowly touch the threshold. But after all, he had just touched the threshold, so the subsequent writing was a bit crumbling. From the beginning of Dark Super God, Zuo Zuo began to get better and better. At this time, Zuo Zuo really started to make strides forward. When I first started writing, I really started to enter the house. However, there may be other external reasons and a series of circumstances. When writing the article, I'm not particularly proficient in the book yet, but I'm a little out of my depth in the later stages, and it slowly starts to reach the same ending as the Super Evolution of Gods and Demons. However, it is undeniable that this book does have an ending, and it begins to be different from the Super Evolution of Gods and Demons. This is progress. Then there is the book Super Dimension Killing. First of all, Zuo and Zuo did not change IDs and numbers to write the book. Then, although there were frequent updates in the middle, and although the update speed was not very fast, it was basically caused by some other reasons. Zuo and Zuo did not suddenly disappear, and the book was completed normally, which is also an improvement. From being easier to write about Beng or The Eunuch, to continuing to finish The Eunuch even after disappearing for a while, and then to later, although there were some bumps and bumps in the middle, the whole process was not missing for a long time, and it was not too bad. Judging from the situation where the book was still completed, Zuo You actually made progress after each book. Just as the same move will not have a second effect on the Saint, the same problem should not appear on the left and right for a long time. Even if it is a pig and makes the same mistake several times, it will definitely not make it. What's more, I feel that the left and right are actually quite smart. In a certain aspect, I think the left and right have the potential to become a great god, but at this stage, they are relatively Buddhist, maybe they are the type of late bloomers? In short, I think Martial Arts Crazy Song should at least be updated more stably than Super Dimension Kill, and the content and settings should also have some more novel changes from the novels written by Left and Right before. This is actually quite interesting for the world view constructed by Left and Right, because I feel that the world view of Super Dimension Kill will definitely be the main body in the future, and the big events officially launched by Super Dimension Kill will be used to connect the world views of other novels written by Left and Right. Maybe there will be several protagonists competing on the same stage? Have some expectations!

After browsing around the circle, I found that the author of Ji Fist Tyrant, Heng Tuo Martial Arts, Dark Evolution, and Dark Super God were all written by this author. As a result, every completed book was

Not bad. When I first saw the name, I didn't even have the desire to read it. After watching it, I was amazed. The flaws are not concealed.

This is the second book. From now on, your character will basically be like this.

Nice name Turn on automatic subscription Keep it first

The writing is very good, and the detailed description of the world view is also very good. The plot of the story is also basically reasonable. It means that for non-experts, you need to endure the word count, and you will have to endure low subscriptions for a long time in the early stage. If you don't jump for a million dollars, you will have a perfect posture. I remember someone asked whether Lord of Mysteries would be so explosive if it was written by a newcomer. The strict answer is yes, it will still explode. Only in the first 700,000 words, before the secret of 008 was finally revealed, probably no one cared about it. But even a newbie will insist on writing until the end of the first volume, just like his first book. I don't dare to say too much. If you write a day, I will read it a day. If you need monthly support, I will send you a chapter. If you have a few, I will give you a few. Come on! The last sentence is to encourage you. The moment you write this book, your only enemy is yourself.

Ouch, shit, I read Chapter 53 for more than two hours