Gou Fished in the World of Immortality and Became an Immortal

The author, this is a fantasy novel written by you, who is intrigued and intrigued every day...

I want to portray the protagonist as a superior character, but I also want to slap the protagonist in the face, but the plot is vulgar, which makes people feel uncomfortable. If you watch too many plots that suppress first and then improve, you will first suppress, then suppress, and remain depressed... If you don't get scolded, who will? I just want to say, times have changed, sir.

Goldfinger is okay, but the plot design is too poor. Consider changing it.

Haha, rubbish plot, forced pretense, what's the use of having a teacher, a great master is useless and has to forcefully pretentious to highlight how awesome the protagonist is

It's such a childish way of writing. The author is very suitable for the Internet literature world ten years ago.

What the hell is the plot? You'd better cut it out

It's okay, but my age is quite embarrassing.

It doesn't look good. What the hell? It's a bad joke and vulgar.

This plug-in is a leek harvester, a magic cultivator that eats people. This one is similar.

Goldfinger is very good, but unfortunately the writing is not good. You can read it in Shu Huang

The idea is good, but the plot design is too blunt

The two peaks of gold and jade are competing for such a high level of disciples. They slap the masters of the two peaks in the face, and even the master of Shifeng. Moreover, the allocation of resources in the three peaks is not decided by the disciples, but by the game between the peak masters. I have never heard that the territory of my own family is decided by the subordinates. What's the use of the peak master if he doesn't care about anything? If you don't care about the resources of your disciples, why would you accept disciples? Just be responsible for being beautiful? Waste of time

I thought that this was not the protagonist of Gou Daoliu, but the aura and template of the protagonist who pretended to be a pretentious criminal. Without the aura of the protagonist to open the way, the villains would not end up drinking like this even if they added a plate of peanuts.

Can you fly fish and catch fish 😏😏

We are here to see you fishing, not to see your conspiracy. Thank you.

Nothing, just another family feud.

This Golden Finger seems to be a plot from a novel, I forgot which one it is.

Are there any other novels like this one? Please recommend me to God

It's pretty good, but there are too few updates to watch.

It makes no difference whether you wrote the latest chapter or not. Forget it, just leave it alone and keep it! It's just like the monthly ticket is wasted.

The quality of the first 50 chapters is very good, but starting from the 50th chapter, the writing is too hasty and messy, and I was confused when I read it.

What kind of fighting start is this? It just replaces fighting spirit with cultivating immortality, and the rest is the same.