I'm Playing Games in Kyoto

To be honest, the time you opened the book was my birthday. Now I have to take a look. 🙂

The sense of fragmentation is too strong, and the key elements are emotions, superpowers, and games. . This problem is not a big one, but you have to prioritize it, and you can't do it all with one hand. . I just read two chapters of Xiao Tiantian, and then you started a long section of super power training. . I just found superpowers interesting. . You actually went to have a long and realistic talk with the producer. . Me. . If you are a cheater, you can still bring others around you to cheat. . You go for realism. . Cherishing each other's feelings with a bunch of Japanese devils who didn't die. . Speechless. . How is this different from taking a machete to kill a primary school student? Nothing exciting🙂🙂

,? , I originally wanted to see super powers. In the end, there was nothing. Only then did I see that it was a daily routine of love. . . .

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I don't know what the main point of this book is, whether it's superpowers, games, or everyday love. I feel like every part is written, but each part is not written well. Especially when I see someone who doesn't want to be a Pokémon, I don't want to do it because I'm worried that the Scallion Duck will appear in vain. What kind of logic is this? Isn't it the protagonist who gets super powers? It's not like every game you make will have some game content that can affect the world. Anyway, when I read the introduction, I wanted to see the protagonist make his first game using the system, gain superpowers, influence the world with his superpowers, and then continue to make games to gain new superpowers, and become bigger and stronger in this way.

This book is actually pretty good at the front, but I haven't seen the back yet. I just finished The Song of Saya. But there is a question, that is, what did the author want to write? There are so many topics that I could write a book in any direction. In my opinion, there are three major topics: 1. Superpowers. 2. Play games. 3. Fall in love. They can all be written as themes. I don't know the proportion of superpowers in the later part of this book. Once this setting is released, it is destined to be very important. Normal people will first make games in batches to obtain superpowers, right? Just like the pig's trotters, which are not yet obvious, they refuse to make butter, but regardless of whether the protagonist has unlocked it or not, superpowers such as time-stopping and hypnosis are very powerful, and the protagonist shows strong resistance without any special reason. There is also Pokémon. This game is very cost-effective to make now. The money, fame, and status are all worth grabbing. However, the protagonist is afraid that Pokémon will appear in the world and chooses not to do it (I don't know if it will be done in the future). There are also things like Life and Death. The protagonist suspects that whatever he makes will attract something, but if this setting is too limited. Your two themes: superpowers and making games are interfering with each other.

It's pretty good, but the protagonist can get super powers by playing games, so he doesn't dare to be a Pokemon, for fear of the emergence of Green Onion Duck in reality. I don't understand. According to the protagonist's plug-in, shouldn't it be a solo extraordinary route? At most, the protagonist can learn skills like Pikachu's 100,000 Volts. How could he be worried about the appearance of Green Onion Duck in reality? Then, you didn't even join Nintendo, so you just revealed your Pokemon idea? Are you so confident about the other person's character? Also, the protagonist's super power after completing the first game is a bit abstract. It can force the protagonist to use the protagonist's money. It is not so speechless if it is made into an independent recharge mode. Then after the "training" ability is released, it is a bit confusing, and it feels like it will suddenly spread to the supernatural. In terms of superpowers in making games, you can gain new abilities one game at a time, but your abilities in the first game are truly comprehensive and unlimited. The book will easily collapse. After all, the superpowers in the first game are based on digitization. You can see other people's data, and you can use money to become stronger. You can also use krypton gold to make others stronger, and you can also use krypton gold to unlock new functions. After this set of procedures, you don't need other superpowers and plug-ins. You only need to make money to develop your first superpower. Basically, if the protagonist is a little wilder and finds a way to sneak into the bank vault, then you don't have to worry about being caught if you recharge the library and take off? Like the first superpower, the protagonist can even open a training class to cultivate talents on his own. As long as he has money, there are many landladies who can't earn it, so it will be useless. If you want to write a book that is long-lasting, it is recommended to pay attention to these issues, especially the restriction of the superpowers obtained. If one power can take off, the subsequent superpowers will be dispensable, which will make other superpowers have no sense of existence.

What is your theme? In other words, what is the core point of your book? Once you've identified the cool points, you should write around them. So what's your favorite thing? Superpower, only me? As an author, you should write about superpowers and the changes they bring to the protagonist and the world. But what are the uses of the superpowers in your book? It feels less important than the coding ability that comes with the protagonist at the beginning. Game production? But if you already have superpowers, why do you still use real-life game production and copy the real-life game content without making any changes? Copying game? So the reaction from passers-by is a bit less? Emotional drama? Then your feelings are also a mess? It would be better for the author to determine the core first. The book cannot be written randomly without any direction, right? Don't you think you can write a book about superpowers, game production, and emotional scenes? There must be a key point. Before we can reach Long and look forward to Shu, we must first win Long, right? By the way, I would like to share a picture of the bunny girl, I hope everyone likes the bunny girl

Water in water, procrastination in procrastination, I watched him play dozens of games, but he didn't come up with any other new games.

It's not that exciting... The author seems to have failed to distinguish the focus. Games, superpowers, and things like the landlady are all mixed into it. Personally, I like to watch it as a game part, but I am not interested in other parts. However, the game was produced and released underwhelming.

I'm a little curious about the author's target audience for this book. Before his abilities have fully expanded, he started to add points to the landlady. Have you clarified the relationship between you and her? Since the protagonist and the landlady are just good friends at present, is it a bit too anxious to add points to it?

Mother and daughter? Feeling a little sick?

It can only be evaluated as a sudden onset of illness in Chapter 90

Came from next door with a curse 😁

Chapter six pause, is it a monk?

Looks good, more updates, rice bowl 😍

I direct the day of God's wrath, the swirling god of destruction, the time when the sea cat cries. What daily life? What love? Only absolute strength, supreme power is everything

After that code appeared, it turned into a fantasy feeling, which was outrageous.

To be honest, I didn't see what theme the author wanted to write about. At first I thought it was about the daily life of game production, but later it looked more like the daily love life with game production as the surface. But now a setting of digital demons suddenly appeared. It seems that it is going to be a fantasy or Digimon theme again.

First: Why can making a game be completed in one day? The first Cairo game can be understood with the good mosaic paintings, but the second Saya's Song was also completed in one day, which is a bit outrageous. The sales of Saya's Song were also sold out in one day. Isn't this too fast? You didn't say anything about the release of the first game until you sold out that chapter. Second: Is the emotional line too thin? The landlady and the landlady's daughter all fell in love with the male protagonist within a week, and the wealthy daughter even expressed her willingness to marry the male protagonist after being cured in one day. This is too hasty! Since your content is not going to develop in the direction of the little emperor uncle, why not write the emotional line more delicately? Although the author has written 180,000 words, the description of the production and sale of the game is extremely short. Doesn't it seem to deviate from the title of the book?

In the few chapters when the game was released, they all said that it was strange to have only one egg, but there was no further explanation. It was mentioned in the release of Pokémon that Digimon is a companion. It is strange that Digimon is Tamagotchi (the audience is mainly female). After the popularity of Digimon, a male version of Tamagotchi was developed. The theme is fighting and so on, and machinery, transformation and the like are added. Pokémon are just for companionship. Many of them are cute, and the world view is relatively safe (except for the dark ones in the special chapters). In the production of the main character, the Holy Plan was changed to GB. It is also very strange. If it is the original size, it would be difficult for children to hold it with one hand. Sometimes when evolving or fighting the Dark Gear, one hand holds the Holy Plan and faces the Digimon. The original size action would be quite ugly. Isn't it great that the original version of Holy Plan can be used as a peripheral or something like that? It can be developed through battles, it can tell the time, and it has a pedometer.