I, Lin Dong, Join the Chat Group at the Beginning

Is it possible to write about the protagonist's situation in such a convoluted way at the beginning? To be honest, I didn't understand at first whether the protagonist was ① aboriginals gaining memories or ② modern people reborn as Lin Dong, or ③ martial ancestor Lin Dong reborn as a child. There is really no need to go around in circles in the first few chapters. Although you can still understand it if you think about it, it is clearly something that can be explained in a few simple sentences.

I just don't understand why you are pulling Conan and Naruto? In the former, an ordinary person will not be able to help you at all, while in the latter, a holy mother, mud cannot hold up the wall. What's the use of pulling it? What's more, what are you doing to win over the government? What do you plan to do if Yingzheng becomes stronger and plans to invade your world? I really don't understand why people who write chat groups always like to invite those emperors? I just don't understand why you brought me here? Just to leave yourself in trouble?

Which system to practice in the later stage? The upper limit of Daqian World is not high, Zhutianliu must change the system in the later stage.

The introduction said that the protagonist traveled through time and awakened his past life memories, but in the first chapter I didn't see time travel, only the awakening of past life memories. Did I miss it?

It's all useless worlds... Another hundred chapters later, now nine and a half out of ten of these group members will be invisible.

Why are you grinding? It's really hard water, isn't it? I discovered that no matter how I write it in other places at the starting point, anyway, at this starting point, it's such a big deal that I'd be embarrassed to write it here for five or six chapters, right?

Why does the introduction say that it was forced by the Great Thousand World? It was obviously Lin Dong and Xiao Yan who volunteered to protect the Great Thousand World.

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Too much nonsense, I can't stand it anymore

Benchmarking Realm

These Japanese comics at the beginning are a little bit addictive, but they are useless and the system is completely different. "Personal feeling" is a hodgepodge of self-indulgence, and the writing is very messy.

After leaving, Ning Zhong was surprised at what kind of existence Yue Buqun knew. They were all like monsters. You didn't mention immortals at all. You were more materialistic than modern people. You would rather believe that Zhang Sanfeng became an immortal than believe that the protagonist group is related to immortals.

What a chat group, but if you have a chat group, you're not invincible?

What you wrote at the beginning said it was time travel, but it feels like Lin Dong time traveled to his childhood.

This chat group is written too harmoniously, and the plot seems too bland and boring. This growth environment, killing monsters and upgrading, completely crushes the plot without any disturbance.

How to say it. First of all, the chat group is too harmonious, and the plot has no expectations at all. The description of these things is too weak, such as the main god space, and the system. If it is written like this, it is better to add some Zhutian City and the like. Zhutian Academy, National Reincarnation, the main reason is that this plot is too low-key, and you can guess the general plot of the next chapter. Of course, it must have advantages. I personally think that this word count is an advantage. After all, one page has 10,000 words, and the maximum number of people now is much less than at the beginning. At the beginning, as long as I arrived a few hours late, it was basically impossible to be in the top 100. As a result, I read yesterday's today, nearly 24 hours later, and I can still be ranked 13th. To be honest, I actually prefer novels such as chat groups, and the atmosphere is really good, ugh It would be great if there was a group, and we could also discuss the plot.

Can you add a wild world?