Comprehensive Comics: Loading Love Games Starting from Megumi Kato

How should I put it? Chapter 168 can only be seen as childish.

I have been in contact with many female protagonists in comprehensive comics since 2018. Let's focus on the main points The pace of this kind of novel is very troublesome in the middle and later stages. As more heroines are added, new and old characters appear, emotions and plots will become more complicated. This really tests the author's writing skills and plot planning. 70% Of what I saw fell here, and then ended or cut off early. This is really difficult to deal with. I don't know how the author plans to deal with it I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better, because no one really writes about this kind of subject anymore. Alas, it's the end of an era.

Comprehensive comics with multiple female protagonists... This kind of writing is rare in Qidian. Would you mind telling me which editor signed the contract for you? 😰

It's bland and tasteless. The setting of the male protagonist is too simple. Sometimes pure love and sometimes harem. The definition is incomplete. If you open a harem and follow the emotional line, don't add any love system, strategy system, favorability, etc. Once added, the flavor will change at the beginning. Follow the emotional line.

The protagonist is too Asasi. This character is now outdated and too ancient.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and I feel that the male protagonist is very strange, and it is too awkward to read. The male protagonist keeps saying that he wants a pure love harem, but the interactions with the female protagonists are like the single-player pure love plots of various side plots in a love game. It is completely invisible that the male protagonist wants to open a harem. Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it.

I personally estimate that there may be too many female protagonists in the end and it may collapse. In the middle and late stages of writing, except for the few that I often write about, the others will probably sit on the bench.

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I haven't seen a comprehensive comic for a long time since those outside websites pulled people away. However, it's best not to add too much in this kind of novel. Three or so novels are enough. The main female characters should be limited to about 10. Otherwise, it will inevitably collapse in the middle of the writing. The protagonist will keep spinning all day long, and he will be more tired than the emperor.

I think I can go to Maofa🙂

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Megumi Kato

Megumi Kato

Is it over? After just watching a little bit, I suddenly realized that it seemed to be over.

Passerby heroine

It's good-looking, but it's a pity that the number of words is a little less. The whole book is less than 600,000 words. I will continue to work hard for the next book and strive to write a book with more than 1 million words.

Is there a Shennong? Let's talk about whether the protagonist is a eunuch.

Ma Wei Hui Horse

Haven't watched it yet, already rewarded, looking forward to the harem

11 Female protagonists How big of a kidney can they afford to feed?

Not integrated into the world of Shokugeki?

Male Protagonist "The Real Scumbag"

Can anyone tell me where to read Chapter 169? If the author had a little conscience, he shouldn't let the genuine readers be so disappointed. It is recommended that Chapter 169 be distributed for free as a book review