Longevity: It Starts with Becoming the Clan Chief

Author, you have no idea what clans represented in ancient times. If someone from a clan became an official, the entire clan would rise to prominence; if someone from a clan fell into trouble, the whole family would be executed. That was the nature of clans. In that era, could you only trust your clansmen?

The "Golden Finger Seventy-Two Earthly Fiends" cheat code is way too much! Couldn't you have just Googled it when you wrote it? You might as well have just added stat points instead of all those supernatural abilities. This cheat code is so huge, with supernatural abilities and stat point additions, and it's so slow to develop. You should have kept it simple.

It's a bit awkward to watch. Even with advanced martial arts, what kind of productivity could a town of a few thousand farmers or a county of tens of thousands of people have? They portray its power and commerce like an imperial capital. It's really embarrassing to watch.

A strange phenomenon on Qidian: good content doesn't become popular, while bad content becomes very popular.

The only illogical part seems to be the cultivation techniques. In this world, cultivation techniques at the Nourishing Life Realm, Flesh and Skin Realm, and Bone and Tendon Realm should be readily available to benefit the Ghosts, ensuring high-quality food. Instead, some Ghosts are starving nine times a day for three days straight.

The world-building is absolutely awful. Stop writing this just to elicit sympathy. They're barely surviving, what's the point of training? Aside from the protagonist having some kind of cheat code, are the other two just going to have to grind their lives to train?

The early parts included descriptions of family members and outsiders, but the roles of ordinary people and martial artists diminished significantly later on. It became a solo showcase, which felt out of place.

Authors need to pay attention to one thing: developing power always requires time to accumulate! Otherwise, what's the difference between you and writing about an invincible individual? No matter how many burdens you carry, there will come a day when you can't carry them all. The timeline must be stretched out; otherwise, how will your power compete with others?

O-point refresh rate? No matter how many people die, the population is always high? Is this description a joke? They'd all be dead by now.

The Seventy-Two Earthly Fiends Techniques were just about growing some mushrooms to eat? And then they disappeared without a trace?