Immortality: Starting from Becoming the Clan Leader

Author, you have no idea what a clan represents in ancient times. If there is an official in the clan, then the whole clan will become prosperous. If something goes wrong, everyone will be executed. This is a clan. In which era can you trust only the clan members?

Gold Finger Seventy-Two Earth Fiends, you are pressing too hard, couldn't you Baidu it when you wrote it? It's better to just add some magical powers and not use any magical powers. It's so big, it's magical, and you're so slow to warm up. It's better not to turn it on so loudly. The spray, and Tongyou have not been cut down by you at all, but they are still weird. Look at the Jidao flow, the arrangement of your golden finger is unreasonable. For the family flow, why don't you get a golden finger with a deductive skill belt that increases the comprehension qualifications of the clan members?

It's a bit embarrassing to see. In ancient times, even if it was Gaowu, what kind of productivity could it have? A town with thousands of farmers and a county with tens of thousands of people could describe power and commerce like an imperial capital. It's really embarrassing to see.

Weird statues from Qidian. The good-looking ones are not popular, but the trashy ones are very popular.

The world setting is simply unreadable. Don't write it just to show off the misery. You can't live any longer and you still need to practice a hammer. Apart from the fact that the protagonist is dead, you can also practice the other two. Is it a direct life training? ?

The only thing that feels unreasonable is the exercises. In this world view, it is in Qi's interests that the exercises in the health realm, skin and flesh realm, and muscle and bone realm should be all over the street, so that the quality of the food will be high. Instead of being hungry for nine meals in three days like now.

The author should pay attention to one thing: developing power will always take time to settle! Otherwise, what's the difference between you and writing about personal invincibility? There will be a day when you can't even carry a drag bottle, and the timeline must be extended. Otherwise, how can your power be compared with others? You can use hangers to lift pig's feet, but you won't be able to lift them if you don't have time to settle them. You just want to cause trouble every three days and provoke a bunch of enemies. When you encounter someone you can't defeat, you just make it up? And then you are thinking about hanging on to improve your strength?

In the early stage, there were descriptions of family members and people with foreign surnames. Later, the role of ordinary people and warriors became less and less. If it becomes a one-man show, it would be a bit out of line with the theme.

O point refresh stream? No matter how many people die, the population is still large? Is this introduction funny? All died long ago

The Seventy-Two Earthly Evil Techniques are just about growing some edible mushrooms? Then he disappeared? ? ? ?

The advantage of immortality has not been used at all. In just ten or twenty years, the catalog has reached the first level. Immortality is redundant. I have read a novel about immortality. It is true that if the immortal cannot defeat the enemy, he will hide and practice. If he can defeat the enemy, he will kill him. If he cannot kill, he will wait for time to kill the enemy. After the enemy dies, he will dig up his grave for him to eat and wipe out his descendants. For immortals, time is the least valuable. Hide and develop slowly.

Pig's feet are immortal, why are they more wasteful than others? Most people do it, but experts in farming development don't have to do it themselves.

I don't know why I'm not happy when I see the protagonist's clan members fighting a life-or-death battle with another village. No matter how the author describes how evil the leader of that village is, this plot development is wrong.

It's too slow, and the skills have never been seen. After writing so much, the family has not improved much.

It's a bad start. The first ten chapters are all about breaking things, and they also portray the tribe as a bunch of rabble. Although it is realistic, if I were to take the role myself, I would not want to lead this group of monsters and snake gods. Also, magical powers are too restrictive.

How should I put it, I feel that the author wrote it in too detail, which is a bit annoying! Things like the marketing of refreshing liquid, dealing with Chen Le, etc. Can be completely covered in one go. However, the author is a loser and does not have the consciousness of a patriarch at all. As a patriarch and the patriarch of the first family in a town, if you have a good grasp of the direction and use your golden finger well, you can write even better. Now that I'm so afraid of what others will say, it's like Golden Finger is gone, and the plot development is also very detailed.

Let's not talk about the escape at the end of the first volume. In the second volume, we re-wrote the plot at the end of the first volume, and then the golden finger almost disappeared. I didn't mention the zhenqi later, but martial arts has been suppressing it since the second chapter. It was like a ninja. It was suppressed from chapter 150 to 300 and then stopped. I know how long it will last, but the first volume is remarkable. The second volume is long, boring, and not very impressive. After reading it, I was thinking about how martial arts has not improved in this volume. Goldfinger has no new functions. The life points are stuck very hard. There are only a few people in the family who write about it.

Author, you said that the protagonist encounters a trick in the middle period. Are you sure it's not funny? How many chapters is this? You don't think that five hundred chapters will be over, do you? This is no longer interesting. Also, can the protagonist not arrive after every incident? How can I put it this way? I can't help but want to curse.

Recently I looked for a few books by great masters that I used to read, and found that the level was not as good as yours. It made me extremely uncomfortable and shattered my outlook on life. I think you have the talent to be a great person🙂

A character like Pig's Feet is only suitable for being an elder, not a clan leader.

Without cultivation and development, there will be fighting and fighting. You shouldn't have added that magical golden finger, but you should have invested in the historical fiction category. No wonder it has never been popular.

The quality of the novel is acceptable, and you can make videos on Douyin to attract traffic.

This book is good to read, but it is not well managed. If it is well managed and more people know about it, it should become popular.

First, is the hot new book Kouya! I can't wait to get the update out as soon as possible.

Generally speaking, it's boring and ordinary.

Not bad, keep keeping the future monthly passes are all yours

It's very interesting, but I feel like it can still be written. I haven't written out all the magical powers yet 😁 Looking forward to the next book

You know

Quick, quick, quick! Take advantage of the lack of people to add some energy! I haven't added any essence yet🌝

After finishing the story, vote for a monthly ticket. It's okay in the early and mid-term. The whole thing is relatively reasonable + the cool writing method is not overwhelming. It looks more comfortable. Although there are some minor flaws, it's acceptable. However, the level of power increases too much at the beginning of the immortal realm, which directly leads to collapse in the later stage. Come on.