All Heavens: Gods and Demons Emerged from Mysterious Resurrection

I can only say that I hope to pay more attention in the future and make progress slowly. My first suggestion is that the recovery worldview should not involve too many emotions of the protagonist, and do not write about longing for family affection. Of course, if you think your writing skills are good enough, then you can take it as I did not say that. Second, take a careful look at the settings of the original work. Others can be regarded as second-hand settings, such as the supernatural bus. The number on the display is at least 1, and it cannot be 0. Because it itself is considered a trick. Thirdly, in addition to the word "harmony", there are many typos, which makes my head hurt when I look at them. All I can say is come on

Chapter 34: You have been killed by Mr. Qin so many times. If you are saving the world and don't kill Mr. Qin, haha

After reading a few chapters, I saw that the protagonist said that he had traveled through time for two days in the hope that someone would care about him, and later he found out about the woman's sponsoring predecessor. Haha Made knows that he is really in need of love🕳️.

After watching the main character's mentality changes repeatedly, it doesn't matter what the reason is, it's just not likable. The main character is like a marionette.

What did you write? It was a waste of my time.

Provincial flow: poisonous weeds, suspected of being uncontrollable

It's better not to be this demon god anymore, and the author should not break the settings he wrote in the future. Is the top's inability to predict so low? The emotional line was also written in a mess, and the plot was completely garbled. After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

After reading the introduction of the protagonist at the beginning of the first page, I thought that the protagonist was not a good person, the kind who puts interests first, but it turns out that he is not, and the protagonist has a young character. Readers who are mature at heart may not like books with this kind of character.

I have no idea about these two worlds.

The more I write, the more confusing it becomes, and I can't even understand it, eunuch, right?

The protagonist is so useless, and why does this setting affect his character? I'm speechless.

When I saw Chapter 5, I didn't want to read it. The setting was okay, but I turned around and started feeding, suppressing my combat power, and cutting off my maximum protective awareness. I can't be affected, and my guardianship is crazy...

When is the time to die? Ke Qiyuan calls me

Holy shit, what is this? Dragon clan? Are you studying with the Dragon Clan?

Chapter 1, let's make do

I'm a little curious, which world is the next one?

This book seems to have a great outline but the writing is really a piece of shit

The author, please tell me when will I be able to write about Lan Ke Qi Yuan?