Time and Space Battlefield Reincarnation

I've read about 30 chapters and haven't finished it yet, but I really like the author's writing style. The story about hunting and finding food in the woods is very immersive, and it's so real! The actions of the protagonist Yu Bao are written in a graphic way, and each action is written in detail. The only thing I think can be improved is the paragraphs. Author, you can really make a paragraph with more than 20 chapters into 400 words. That is half a high school essay. I really like the story of Yu Bao but can you make the paragraphs shorter? Author, if you can control all paragraphs to less than 50 words, I think it's definitely a success.

Come on! Write slowly, don't rush 😁

Planning to sign a contract? If you plan to update each chapter, it is generally better to update 2,000 to 2,500 words. Two updates a day is the basic rule. In addition, generally speaking, it is best to read three to four lines of a paragraph on a mobile phone. Your paragraph is too long. If you don't plan to sign a contract, I wish you happy writing.

There are many shadows of people in the story, including the joys and sorrows of ordinary people, their love and hatred.

Thank you guys for your recommendation votes. Thank you very much. It is like a light in the darkness, lighting up my eyes as a coder!

I wish you all a Happy New Year. A new chapter has begun to be updated. In this day of national celebration, Wang Bao, as the male protagonist, finally met the unruly and willful Gambling Emperor and his daughter, and also gained the nominal wife Gambling Die. I just took this opportunity to wish all the lovers in the world to finally get married, everything goes well, everything goes as they wish, and all their wishes come true!

Why don't you let me vote? What is 500 experience points? This is my first time downloading the starting point.

Looks good, I'll give you all the votes

Wow, you changed the name of your work, it sounds great!