American Comics: Starting with the Spider-Woman Clone

I think the protagonist's IQ is not low, so why can't he build a Cosmic Cube? Could it be that the protagonist is not even as good as Modoc? If this body really becomes a drag, then give up this body and make a consciousness transfer device, so that your consciousness can be reborn in a brand new body. The protagonist is somewhat conflicted now. He doesn't want to die, but he doesn't have much desire for life. He has an indifferent attitude, but he is also very greedy for power. , But did not pursue it, relying on the author's passivity and involvement in events to promote it, And these chapters did not talk about anything real at all. The woman's side, whether it was her sister or Gwen, made no progress at all, and there was no deep intimacy. Emotion, and no love feeling It is said that some affection for my sister has deteriorated, but there is not even the most basic flirting, so it will only be distorted in my heart You from Hydra and SHIELD have stepped in, but nothing has changed. What do you think? Promote the insight plan, you are willing to move. Although I don't know what he is thinking, if the insight plan fails in the end, what is the use of you getting involved? Then let's talk about the protagonist. I think he is a bad person in a sense. If you really love your family, hello Go and accompany her, try your best to accompany her and love her while you are alive, As a result, the pig's feet ran aside by themselves. If you really want to die far away, then don't contact her. You don't want to be so close, and you don't want to hide away. Why? Are you a tsundere? This will soon be close to 40 chapters, and there are more than ten more to be put on the shelves. A plot point and expansion have not yet begun. The content of nearly 40 chapters can be compressed into ten chapters. If you want to be dull, then you can do it anyway Engage in daily life and create warmth In the first 40 chapters you wrote, none of the characters had the slightest deep impression. The protagonist's personality was all superficial and empty. He clearly does not have the ability to ignore everything, but he has an inexplicable sense of being obsessed with himself, no? The word "can't describe it" to me just doesn't feel right. If I were the protagonist and knew that I was about to die after arriving at Marvel, and my IQ was not low after rebirth, I could either enjoy it and die without regrets, or live and try my best to survive. But he obviously doesn't really care. He knows that there are places that can save him, but he is very passive and relies on others to push him forward. I'm talking about you, the author, who lacks initiative So this character is really annoying. Everything must be pushed forward passively. If you don't put it on the shelf, you don't care about the results, just the results. If you want to write your own character, you can absolutely If you want to put it on the shelf, I think it is a bit too watery, and the character is too empty and lacks real purpose. What kind of story do you want to tell? Is it true that it is ordinary? Or a cool article, a love harem, But no matter which point it is, I have not seen it in the book for the time being. Before Chapter 39, Is the protagonist a different kind of Li Ang? To be honest, if I continue to do this, I also lack the motivation to continue. You cannot let things happen passively and push you forward. You cannot let Hydra or the demolition team be so idle and come over to make trouble. You must make them unable to eat and walk around, let them know that you are a stinging nuclear bomb, and the kind that is about to explode. Whoever messes with you will have to mess with you for the last time, and he will have to touch you in a coquettish way. If he wants to bite you, his teeth will break. But the label you wrote above is Wudiliu. Wudiliu is more enjoyable than Shuangwen, but it doesn't feel good at all. I want to hear your opinion, although I probably guessed that there won't be any extravagant work, the plot will just flow But I still want to hear your opinion, Can the author tell me your general outline? Is it a normal Marvel story as I thought, the kind where big and small things keep happening, a bunch of things are completed and unfinished, and it just keeps pushing forward, very old-fashioned, plot mode

It's great. It breaks away from the Marvel formula and no longer dwells on the origin story. The heroine is finally not a three-piece suit (Black Widow, Wanda, Gwen). There are so many Marvel women, so we have to dwell on these three.

Beautiful Jessica (＾ω＾)

The protagonist of the time traveler takes the initiative to let the little naughty absorb the memory. It's awesome.

The protagonist is also a pure riddler. If you enlighten Gwen, then enlighten her well. Every time you tell half of the story, hide the other half and end up blaming others for meddling in others' business. Either you just ignore her at all, she has nothing to do with you, and the protagonist feels awkward.

There is a lot of messy writing, but I can't understand it 🤤

Everyone is here to see the heroine, so write less about the protagonist's body.

What are you writing about? What is the main line

There is no plot about the killer, but superheroes are written very well.

You know what I said may be a bit too much. I hope that without destroying your outline, the plot will become more exciting. Invincible Flow. Don't keep worrying about the physical problem. Have fun, what are you afraid of? Since you don't have the strength to live to the end, don't worry about the future anymore. In Marvel, you never know which will come first, tomorrow or the accident. Don't be like a little man and bitch, It doesn't matter, you wantonly indulge your desires, you are about to die, live for yourself, can't you? In the words of Boss Cao, you have worked hard for so long, shouldn't you enjoy it? Let us ride on your little donkey and run wildly towards the world.

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I really don't understand what the author wants to write. What's the point of inserting a black robe to gain popularity at this time? There is nothing valuable in this world, there are just many people with super powers, and the protagonist does not have the ability to copy super powers. The most important compound No. 5 Is in the protagonist's body. There are also worlds, but they are very flowing. There are so many parallel universes in Marvel, but you chose this one, I can only say that I don't appreciate it Where green mountains do not change, green waters always flow,

What should I do with Kara😭

The transition between the plot and the dialogue between the characters is too abrupt. In the last paragraph, the protagonist is still showing off, and in the next paragraph, an unknown character suddenly appears and talks to himself. It feels like watching a TV series and suddenly changing the channel to watch another TV series.

There is a theory. When I read your book, I was inspired by "2077 Cyberpunk". What kind of story would happen if the High Table in the movie John Wick appeared in Night City? The High Table has single-handedly established the dark side of Night City and even the entire world. The beggars on the roadside, the wanderers in the wasteland, the NCPD in the city, and even some employees in various giant companies may all be members of the High Table. When all the giant companies and even Saburo Arasaka thought they owned the world, they discovered that the world has a dark side and huge forces that make their scalp numb. By the way, John Wick, Johnny Silverhand's twin brothers, it feels like it is an interesting subject to start with.

Very, very good Marvel fanfic. Jessica and Gwen's writing is both delightful.

Come on, your writing is very good. There are a lot of people criticizing you. Hold on.

The writing is messy. After reading it for a long time, I didn't even explain what the protagonist's abilities are or whether he has a system. It's all about this thing 🙂