I Killed the Immortal in the Tang Dynasty

I want to read the data, don't save anymore, promise me to read the last chapter 🤓 I can update it if necessary, don't save anymore, okay? 😭

So far, the main characters in the story have online IQs, and the overall logic is relatively self-consistent. After reading it, I feel that the author wants to build a world where immortals and Buddhas feed on humans. Humans and immortals stand side by side, and humans should be self-reliant and strong and kill the immortals in anger. The immortals harvest the human race like leeks, and carry out continuous exploitation of the leeks - they cannot eat them all, they have to raise one crop and there will be another crop after eating it - the human race continues to emerge with strong talents and geniuses to lead the human race to fight against the immortals and Buddhas. To be honest, this kind of world view is easy to write down, and it is easy to become very boring after writing it. I hope the author will think carefully about what this worldview is like. Your use of the rules of heaven and earth and memory blockade are all very good designs. The rules of heaven and earth restrict the fight between the strong and avoid collapse, which is a very effective setting. For example, immortals cannot be known or explained. Disasters will occur if things related to immortals and Buddhas are not spread to a certain level. Immortals and Buddhas cannot attack mortals at will. It would be good if these settings could be introduced through plot development, character dialogue, and inner monologue to strengthen our impression of the settings. Instead of being piled up in sections, it would be good to integrate them into the plot. I feel that as of now, the introductory settings are probably interspersed with the plot, but they are not smooth and natural enough. This may be because it is the first new book. I feel like the author can emphasize how powerful the big figures are when they fight, how shocking the fight scene is, and how the onlookers feel shocked, fearful and yearning. To be honest, good-looking sacred books often write like this. Currently, it can be seen that the conflict between humans and immortals is a conflict between two species and two races. At the same time, humans and immortals can be transformed. After transforming into immortals, there will be many benefits. Immortals can also benefit people, so there will be traitors in the human race who betray the human race. I really want to see the plot in the future where the human race expands its territory, multiplies, inherits its traditions, and continues to grow, while the immortals stand still and don't realize it. Newcomers should not be anxious because of poor grades. There are many things that you don't understand well and you can still improve slowly. Many books have poor performance in the past and gradually improve. No matter how the mechanism changes, no matter how bad it is now, online writing is to put it bluntly, long-form serialized popular literature. You just respect the readers' feedback and try your best to write the story you want to write.

Sorry everyone. I have been busy looking for a job these days and have no time or thought to update. I suddenly lost my job in early March and have not found a job for a month. This is really stressful for me as a new father. Therefore, I had to give up writing this book and look for new opportunities. Thank you to every reader for your companionship. I am extremely sorry for not being able to stick to it until the end. Regarding the content of the Journey to the West part of this book, I may update it in the form of short stories, so you can read them as you like. In addition, I have signed a contract for my new book "Beginning with the Banner of Ten Thousand Souls to Become a God." Compared with this book, it should be somewhat different in terms of cheats and plot ideas, and it may make up for the original shortcomings to some extent. Shinto text, friends who are interested can read it. ——Shark Shark

Happy New Year to all readers. This book will be on the shelves soon. I beg for your support for newcomers and new readers. Dear book collectors, my reading and collections have plummeted recently. Please give me some motivation for ordering! More updates will be released tomorrow!

"Blind man, I know who you are. I didn't expect you to be hiding here, and I didn't expect you to be so powerful after your eyes were destroyed!" "You can die without regrets if you see the magic gun."

It can be seen that I am indeed a newcomer. The beginning of the article is quite slow, but the writing is okay. Add it to the bookshelf first, and then read it after you have written one million words.

Will it be available on the 15th? I thought I had to wait until the 1st of next month. The collection is less than 5,000, so the first order should not exceed 500, which is a bit of a disadvantage.

I came here from Zhihu and was attracted when I saw the introduction. I specifically clicked on it and added it to my favorites. Cheers, author!

Everyone on Zhihu said they should save it as soon as possible. Five million words sooner