Beastmaster: I'm Really Not a Master of Training

The protagonist has a low IQ and the plot is messy

Okay, I agree that this book is garbage.

Beautiful classmate + beautiful teacher + beautiful senior sister, it always feels like history is repeating itself. And there is no need to write out certain things specifically. It just needs to be tacitly stated about "public tools and private use". It has to be written out. Is it to give the protagonist a domineering personality? Or do you want to exaggerate the protagonist's high value? Or make it clear that the protagonist honors his parents? I feel that these three have little effect, but they play a role in screening readers.

I feel like I should just write about the interactive growth of nurturing and controlling beasts right now, and there is no need to make all kinds of mistakes at the beginning. Normal people would go out after hearing that the neighborhood is unsafe. There is no need to create conflict for the sake of conflict. This is not 10 years ago

After reading the new chapter, um,,, how should I put it, going into the mountains when there are known dangerous people around, both of them have no strength at all, are they betting that they will not encounter danger? Neither of them have any strength at all, who would be like this to a normal person? And, are holidays only available on weekends? You can ask for leave. It's okay to ask for temporary leave. It won't be better when the danger is over Also, this way of advancing the plot is too deliberate. It's better to write about discovering the evolutionary path and then becoming famous and being noticed. Forcibly reducing intelligence is really disgusting

The plot is too outrageous. Your plot is about nurturing and not nurturing. It's outrageous.

Silly bird, except for his mother, all of the female characters that appear are beauties. Either you write about the harem, or you write about it normally. Now you have a little bit of both, I feel like I'm eating a bag of candy, I'm a dick.

Really 6, can't we just do research well? There has to be a disgusting cult. It's purely intentional that the protagonist becomes invisible for several chapters. To evolve into a waterfall, you need to feed fans. You have to feed them from below and then run up. Did you forget about the fat guy? And this research is purely based on golden fingers. The protagonist is a puzzle tool man, and it can be synthesized when all the materials are available There are also classic supporting roles of fat man, beautiful teacher, and running experiment.

I'm speechless. In just over 50 chapters, I encountered the Black God Society, the Ancient God Society, and the Mechanical Profanity Society. You are the breeder. There are no other combatants, right? It's all up to you to save them. Then all kinds of beautiful classmates, beautiful teachers, and beautiful senior students

There are really more and more people licking dogs in the online literary world. People use your life as bait, and then they come to you for help. The protagonist licks you. What does the author want to express by writing this?

TNND, how come all the pet beasts are cults at the beginning? What era did the author live in?

All transactions are losing money, and you are dying every day

The more I write, the more rubbish it becomes. By the 100th chapter, the flood of a city relies on the protagonist to protect the protagonist. Are the elite beasts so powerful (´･_･`)? What's even more outrageous is that the protagonist is going to fight against the emperor. You, the protagonist, are too good at fighting against the emperor with a few elite beast masters. I really don't know why there is such a plot. None of the city's top officials showed up. Could it be that the mayor or the like was watching the show?

The setting of Goldfinger is good, but in the end it has no sense of existence at all, and except for the setting of Goldfinger, everything else is poisonous. It is a beast-controlling novel, but the storyline of beast-controlling is not as much as the female character. She is a woman who can't walk when she sees the protagonist. The supporting characters also give the protagonist advice on starting a harem. The protagonist is having an affair with the female character while saying that he has no idea.

The male protagonist is extremely wretched and disgusting, and the female protagonists seem to suddenly like the male protagonist for no reason, especially Li Lanying, who doesn't know how she fell in love with him. He just chatted with him for the whole day in the early stage, and then she fell in love with him! ? And Tu Jiaojiao, I fell in love with the male protagonist just because he became more powerful! ? There is also a male protagonist who has traveled through time. His brother, Fatty An, is also a wretched person. The male protagonist knows that this is not good, but he still does not stop him. Moreover, the male protagonist also knew that they liked them at the beginning, but he did not refuse. And they didn't intend to be with them at the beginning, but his non-rejection attitude gave them hope. It was really speechless. In the later stage, there were many descriptions of the entanglements between the strangers and the male protagonist, which was really speechless! And how can such powerful people share it with one person? It is the possessiveness of human beings. At first glance, it is the author's yy article! ? I felt a little uncomfortable at the beginning, but I endured it and continued reading. Now I really can't stand it.

This book was written not long ago, and all the important characters are women.

Why do you always like to meet such and such villains? Isn't it good to write about nurturing and daily life?

The golden-crowned red-feathered chicken is obviously a male, but it evolved into a three-legged golden crow but turned into a female. Too unreasonable

Don't read it. Even if you want to kill time, you can't choose this novel. Just throw it away. It's really annoying.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist's team of elite pet beasts often fight across two major classes, which is really speechless.

Family members, it's your mother's job to look after the training base for you, you don't even have a title, you're in charge of doing this and that, it's your mother's job 😅

There is no disturbance at all, and there is no interaction between the beasts. It is just a mechanical upgrade. It is a brainless love story with the name of beasts.

He is both a scumbag and a eunuch, the plot is weak, and 80% of the chapter is nonsense. The whole process of evolution requires almost no effort, it all depends on luck, and I always like to make inexplicable plots to promote the progress of evolution. FW is here. We have made a bunch of plans to evolve, but if we don't implement any of them, this won't work, that won't work, and yet they still say they need to be self-reliant for fear of cheating and leaving, double standards.

Really, a waste of creativity and structure

If you didn't read Big Head Son and Little Head Dad when you were a child, reading this novel now can make up for your childhood regrets.

It is not a problem for the protagonist to be smart, there is an audience; it is not a problem for the girl to be a nymphomaniac, there is an audience. The biggest problem is the pacing. Without Zhang Yichi, the plot is like a flood, rushing in. Is the author's secondary occupation a short drama screenwriter? ? ?

I want to ask who is the heroine?

Those with weak golden fingers are equivalent to a pet dictionary. The protagonist is a weak group and cannot even defeat his classmates.