I Don't Really Want to Show Affection

I have caught up with the latest chapter and I feel it is okay. Although the plot is a bit artificial, the dog food part is still good. Disadvantages: I hope the author can improve the deliberate and artificial problems, such as concerts. In this situation, it is impossible to substitute a temporary singer, let alone a second-tier singer. There is also a live house, which is full of deliberateness. These plots can be transitioned to be more natural and smooth. Then there is the variety show part. The writing is not real and interesting enough. The first part of the variety show is still okay, but the latter part is basically about letting yourself go. Even if the so-called recording program is removed, there is no sense of violation. There should be more plots such as photographers and directors. The other thing is that I really don't like the title "Ajie", it sounds awkward no matter how I hear it. There is another problem, that is, the character of the male protagonist is a bit weak at the beginning, not to the point of being a dog licker, but a little weak, but he gets better later on. Advantages: The dog food part is OK and makes people eat it deliciously. In terms of song selection, "Meet", "The beauty of the world is connected with you" and "Elope" are acceptable. The entry point of Golden Finger is quite good, which makes people feel a sense of expectation. Although the later performance was not satisfactory.

See the middle section about policy reform... The author has no business knowledge, so it's better not to touch this area. A company can only have one field? A spin-off is not enough. Even if everyone is equally stupid and only works in one field, it is even worse... No competition and no progress. Don't say that foreign countries have been arranged to be competitors. Take the movie as an example. Under the protection, half of the market was eaten up, one hundred yuan was lost to fifty, and the remaining ones were eaten up, and each person received less than ten yuan. If you want to eat more, you have to be better than the others, and then you can bite off a piece of meat from them, and you only have ten or fifteen yuan. Under the new policy, I am the only one left in the film industry. I am a Buddhist, my works are average, and 80% of the market is taken by foreign countries... Well, I still have twenty yuan! ! ! More than before! ! ! So... It's better not to write this anymore

It's really poisonous, friends. In the third chapter, you see a woman whom no one knows. When you see someone injured, you rush to the door and give her a band-aid. How horny is it? ? ? Then when I entered the variety show cabin, I started to be more diaosi. In Chapter 11, I started to feel good about myself and laughed at others for licking their dogs. When I entered the cabin, there were 4 women and 3 men, and they started cooking. The male protagonist started to give instructions, arrange for others to put chili peppers and get the fruit plate, just do it. The most outrageous thing is TM, no one Let me ask you to do it. The diaosi psychological activity has begun. While mentally complaining that I don't want to serve several women, I am very happy while doing it. Then I enter the diaosi mode. I drink juice and ask the women attentively what flavor they drink. When it is the man's turn, it is good to drink some. If you like it or not. It looked so much like dog licking in reality, but I still laughed at others for licking dogs. I vomited. I really can't stand it anymore. Chapter 11 I fell, what about you? ? ? ?

One very interesting thing I found is that most male readers like multiple female protagonists, but those who like to post comments are those who like single female protagonists. Men who like multiple female protagonists rarely express their opinions on the forum.

The character of the protagonist is so awkward. He doesn't look like a 26-year-old college history teacher at all. He looks like a clueless noob.

That's right, I'll keep watching if I don't collapse later. Don't get involved in the ex-girlfriend drama.

Very nice, I like this. There are too few development from love variety shows.

Brothers, have you ever seen a real celebrity couple feeding dog food together for thirty years? There are not many people who have not divorced in thirty years, right? The media is all about popularity, who has nothing to do but stare at you two? A truly awesome boss wants the spotlight to shine on him all the time? Conclusion, this book is either not long or easy to write, and the results will not be good. The sense of separation from reality is too strong, and the subject matter is too hot.

Chapter 7, retreating, following a strange girl out of the bar just to give her a band-aid? By the way, how much of a licker does the protagonist have to be able to follow a strange girl out of a bar and give her a band-aid just because she saw a scratch on the back of her hand? Also, after the girl left the bar, didn't she go out to find a pharmacy or something? The protagonist actually followed him out like a stalker, and then he was almost beaten by someone. Wow, he is such a slut. I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. Also, the ex-girlfriend in front of me, since they broke up, still described so many inner dramas about the male protagonist's old love, was she really forced to break up, is it really Qiong Yao? Toxic, I can't stand it anymore.

To be honest. . . . Is the male protagonist a bit speechless? A bit Madonna? Oh, in today's terms, it's a warm man licking a dog 🙂🙂🙂

I've read Chapter 15 and can't stand it anymore. First, the character description is too false, and the actions and dialogue are completely inconsistent with the character positioning. Judging from this, the author is probably very young and has no corresponding experience at all. Second, the plot setting is very poor. Even online novels must follow a certain logic, otherwise it will give readers a sense of fragmentation. , Such as the part where the protagonist shouts to fix the water pipe before arriving at the hut. Before this, you wrote that the protagonist is a university teacher who teaches history. This will give people a hint of the protagonist's calm and elegant heart, and you have turned the protagonist into a funny joke without any foreshadowing. This is a sense of separation. If there are too many of this kind of plots, it becomes a poisonous point. Third, it is too exaggerated. Although the novel needs a certain amount of exaggeration, if the dialogue, actions, forms, and even the narration are not all exaggerated, it will be very greasy and the readability will plummet.

I passed by to say a few words and scanned about 20 chapters as fast as I could. Sorry for the lack of details. In general, it's a pretty familiar article. There should be no problem in following the sugar-making route. But don't add drama to the ex-girlfriend, especially if the ex-girlfriend is not completely portrayed as a villain in the previous chapter. Compared with the "ex-girlfriend looks down on" in the bad street, the "ex-girlfriend cuckold" still leaves a little room for whitewashing. It even clearly shows that the ex-girlfriend is not connected and still has feelings for the male protagonist. I haven't seen it since Chapter 20. Look, if the ex-girlfriend is later portrayed to have all kinds of regrets and then starts pursuing the male protagonist, and finally lets go and marries someone else... I can only say that this is a failure. It would be better to write about Qingdeng Ancient Buddha... It is even better to simply portray the ex-girlfriend as being unwilling and then directly forget about this role and just go and make love. Since you are following the relaxed route, don't ruin the overall atmosphere with too many different styles of content. The above is just my humble opinion. I haven't seen it later and I can't directly characterize it, but overall it's pretty good. Okay, you can start spraying me.

I still like Zhao Sisi, Xinjiang girls don't like it very much

Chapter 6: Really, I can't help but say, dog food novels are so realistic that they can't attract people.

139 It's really not possible! What a bullshit plot! The best friend becomes a stepmother, and the protagonist has to resolve conflicts! Speechless! Too busy!

Nowadays, love means that the man acts like a licking dog? When did writing about dog licking become a trend or is it the reality of the author that he is a dog licker?

The female protagonist is only responsible for saying she loves you, and the male protagonist does the rest. How is this different from the male protagonist's first girlfriend? The only difference is that the female protagonist is more jealous and violent. This feels like either feminism or a diaosi's intention towards the goddess. It should be called the ultimate dog-licking stalker 😥😥😥😥

The man inside was drunk and pushed the woman away, and the next day he couldn't remember who it was? It makes me want to laugh. First of all, if you drink too much alcohol, it will be a problem whether you can be strong or not. Gay men who don't believe it can try it. Secondly, doing that is actually quite physically demanding. People who drink too much alcohol will become soft. Alcohol will numb your nerves. In ancient times, there was a saying that drinking alcohol would cause surgery. So the idea of ​​having sex after drinking is completely nonsense. Being able to move around after drinking is just a sign of courage.

I tried again three times and still got poisoned.

Too poisonous. I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 27. Tietie's little white text. Watch the author describe their conversation in the cabin. Embarrassing as hell. It's like digging out a villa with your toes and thumbs. Slipping away.

The atmosphere of life is quite strong. A group of people here said that the protagonist licks. I laughed. Maybe I lick much more fiercely than the protagonist in life. The place where band-aids are given is obviously because the protagonist wants to get to know the heroine, so he goes there even if he has the chance. He is still talking about poison. Do you know the reason why he is single? We have met a few times, and if we chat a few more words, we can basically ask for a WeChat account or something. Otherwise, we really think you are Daniel Wu? Let a girl lick you? I have no looks and no money and think about beauty all day long.

In the second chapter, the college beauty rankings appeared, and I decisively gave up the book. Maybe I was studying in a fake university and there was no such thing.

After reading Chapter 12, I really can't stand it anymore. Pig's trotter's character changes at any time. I'll go The plot is blunt and a bit disgusting.

This book has a single female protagonist and multiple female protagonists?

It's not that those with multiple heroines don't talk, it's because those with multiple heroines who have a single heroine don't care if the writing is good or it's just a bit regretful to read. But those with a single heroine are addictive when they see multiple heroines, and they don't want to talk about it. Therefore, readers with a single heroine seem to have a lot to say, and those with multiple heroines shrink back. It's the same as not making any comments, but in fact there are still many people who have multiple female protagonists, but they are more inclined to the nature of the book. For example, Da Feng has multiple female protagonists, not so many people read it, and Tribulation of All Races does not have female protagonists. We care about the quality of the book, not the meaningless dispute between single and multiple female protagonists.

Thank you. After two people have been together for a long time, love begins to fade. When it is time to turn into family love, reading this book can recall some past events and make love reappear.

I regret not reading the comments! Only when you die from the poison will you know what kind of poison it is!

The indigenous protagonist suddenly lost his sense of immersion and gave up on Goodbye.

I just want to know, is there any inevitable connection between being dumped and taking off? From the beginning, I like being dumped so much

Ever since that Xiao Peipei came out, I was almost poisoned. I could still carry it and read it. Later, Xiao Peipei went straight to someone else's wedding. I really couldn't understand it. I can only say that the author really has no experience at all and wrote the book solely for his own pleasure.