Draining the Big Shots in Swallowed Star

It is full of slots. In order to arrange a setback for the protagonist, an intermediate warrior can buy the "blood beast brain fluid" that will cause the beasts in the entire county to riot. Moreover, during the riots, the murderer could actually fire cold shots not far from the center of the riots. Forget it, the most ridiculous thing is that after experiencing setbacks, the protagonist is a loser and starts to actively seek a breakthrough in the life-and-death battle...

In Chapters 26 and 27, the protagonist's woman was killed, his teammates were tricked, he was plotted, and he was played like a dog by an ant. He was so furious that he was almost crazy. Especially this was the result of the protagonist's arrogance and lack of intelligence on the premise that the protagonist had already known that the other party was going to take action. Who thinks that the poison resistance is high enough to withstand it? I am a bookworm of eight years.

I have read less than 10 chapters, and my head hurts from reading it. The inexplicable pretense and slap-in-the-face plot forces me to cause trouble for myself. Obviously I can ignore the school affairs and just follow the warrior route. I can develop casually and kill an intermediate warrior easily. I have to cause trouble when I am a student. I read the comments and said that the writing at the end was good. Unfortunately, I couldn't read the book in the early stages so I just withdrew it. Come on, author,

I can't understand why the protagonist actually needs to undergo a psychological transformation? You must know that the protagonist is not directly reborn to the age of eighteen, but reincarnated and reborn, and has memories from the beginning. He lives in this precarious world, and he has lived for so long and still doesn't understand the cruelty of society, the sinisterness of the human heart, and the naive idea of ​​​​playing life after getting a golden finger. Is this life in vain?

It doesn't follow the main plot of the original work, it's not shady and it doesn't lick the main characters, but it's still watchable.

I've been following it for half a month, and I'd like to share my thoughts. The idea of ​​Goldfinger is very good, and writing about the meeting is very interesting. The slap-in-the-face plot in the first few chapters is a bit hard, probably because I am a novice writer, and there is not enough foreshadowing. After becoming a warrior and entering the wilderness, the plot processing becomes more advanced. I think the author handled the change in the protagonist's attitude more successfully. There is no such thing as a small citizen transforming into a god of death as soon as he travels through time, poisoning the air every second, and the transition is smoother. Give it a thumbs up. I think the fighting scenes are well written and have a sense of imagery, not too mysterious. The author also has a good attitude. He sticks to his own outline and doesn't get angry when he catches bugs. I think it's better. At present, it is generally considered to be relatively good and belongs to the food and grass level. If I have any thoughts later, I will continue to add them below. Also, come on, the author, work hard to update, and don't delete my posts! New experience The mechanical clone is very good, this is the first time I have seen it. I haven't written about the battle between strong men yet, but the author has also written down some rules for the battle between strong men, which feels pretty good. The protagonist's system seems to have become invisible. It may be that the author wants the protagonist to take the initiative. But it is estimated that the protagonist is so strong now that he will definitely be famous in the whole universe when the strong man fights. When the binding function comes, there will definitely be a lot of things to capture, and the author will not be able to suppress it even if he wants to, right? Looking forward to the protagonist taking off, nothing else. It's not too much to surpass the original ancestor in terms of understanding 🤓... The system is very good. As a person who likes system flow, this book's system is very good if the system does not give physical rewards. I will be very surprised if the system gives physical rewards. That's all for the time being. See you next time if you think of it. Good luck, author!

Ah, isn't it possible to directly accumulate resources at the planet level? Why is the protagonist still lacking in character?

Finally, I met a fan who planned to cut off Hu Luofeng's opportunity. Those who give up and plan to hug each other in the future have a problem. Before Luo Feng rises, you may die in the aftermath of a certain battle. Even cutting Xu Xin off would be beneficial, at least she has the background and looks.

After skipping a few chapters and booking a few chapters, I discovered that in Chapter 210, the protagonist Goldfinger had tampered with his own past, and had also tampered with other people's memories related to the protagonist. Aren't you expelled from the game yourself? Protect the earth by yourself incognito, and even prevent Hong from showing his state of mind? How can the protagonist stop it? Do we have to go as a stranger who is not a fellow earthling? If you do this, no one on earth will think you are an earthling, and no one will remember you. The memory of the female companion around me has also been changed. Now she likes to follow not the protagonist, but the disguised identity of the protagonist, including Babata. What she remembers is no longer the original protagonist, but an identity arranged by the system. The protagonist is equivalent to wearing a mask, giving me a puppet on a string. The toy in the author's writing does not look like a living person, but feels aggrieved. I can only say that this setting is not attractive to me, and I don't know if book friends will feel the same way.

No, man. If you don't want to write about a female protagonist, don't write about it. I have to write a sacrifice to heaven. What kind of ancient routine is this? Something must be done to change the mentality. Is this way of writing a dream back to 2008? I seem to have seen in the newspapers that Beijing's bid for the Olympics was successful.