One Piece: Starting in God Valley

There's a problem. You've only been in this world for a few minutes, so why are you stuck there for three people you just met, going from despair to anger? Aren't those three just a burden? If you were truly friends, that would be one thing, but since you're not close, just leave.

How pitiful is the bear? Is it pitiful that it doesn't know how to save itself and spends its whole life waiting for Nika to die?

This introduction is hard to keep up with; it's too weak.

The Void Left can reflect damage back to the user? Where did this secondary setting come from? As long as you can't break the person inside the Void Left, you won't be harmed. Your secondary setting is really weak.

Could you please stop adding those miscellaneous abilities from the Naruto series...? It doesn't look pure at all... It just looks so awkward. 😐😐😐

Sigh! Maybe I'm not young anymore. I can't stand these kinds of overly dramatic, melodramatic novels anymore; they make me cringe. Especially that epic pirate that even Rocks couldn't conquer was actually persuaded by you with just one sentence…

Something feels off. The protagonist is supposed to be Madara Uchiha, so why does he use Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu as his Mangekyou Sharingan abilities? If he could choose any Mangekyou Sharingan ability, Obito's Kamui would definitely be the first choice. Another issue is the awkwardness of starting with life-and-death situations and shared experiences.

AI-generated text, just throw away your brain and forget the original work, and read it anyway~

The protagonist is very strong, but he just can't deal any damage; he doesn't dare kill any of the characters from the original story.

Can the author please stop fantasizing? When will Susanoo start reflecting damage back to itself? At this rate, Sasuke would have died several times over. 🥵😅