The Fiery Era: Live in Seclusion in a Courtyard and Become a Boss

Basically, at every location, there is a long introduction. Is it copied from Baidu Encyclopedia or generated by a tool? The introduction to these places is really straightforward.

Why are there charges for free time?

Is there no place to live except No. 95? The battalion commander major and deputy director position live here? Have you offended anyone? A fighting hero, the ace among aces, living in a large courtyard,

You are such a shitty boss, and you were scolded by Jia Zhang for being a little maid at the beginning. You still want to do nothing and be reasonable. If you don't take it out for yourself, you should take it out for your mother.

To be honest, I'm not picky about reading, it's purely to pass the time, but I couldn't bear it anymore and was ready to abandon the book after reaching chapter 566. Honestly speaking, the author is serious in writing and his writing style is not bad👍. But the author is too short on word count. The novel is written as a military science article, and it has 566 chapters. The protagonist and dozens of other characters have become supporting roles. Everyone has been written in detail. There is no main story line at all. It is just a hammer here and there.

There is nothing in the first ten chapters, just one sentence about being injured and changing jobs can be carried over The plot of Siheyuan is all copied and retelling As a result, it has nothing to do with Siheyuan after copying it Since you want to write a chronicle, don't sell it to others. Not pleasing to either side

The word "boss" cannot be used for this character. The female military doctor did not dare to take it for fear of being implicated in the future storm. However, the one introduced by Director Wang rushed to get married. The cowardice and vulgarity of modern people and the low-level self-esteem of people of that era are both there. For such a protagonist, if you say that he wants to be a boss in the title of the book, isn't it ridiculous?

Can the author think carefully about the identity of the protagonist in that era? In your dialogue, the protagonist talks like a Hutong Chuanzi. I saw the part about being discharged from the hospital and I really couldn't stand it. I have to write about old Beijing. Okay, your story looks really dramatic. You are a battalion commander and you talk like a Hutong Chuanzi? Can't write good dialogue?

The system article was still acceptable, but when I saw that the life span was only a few months, I gave up decisively.

When Jia Dongxu was alive, his wife and mother might be a little annoying, but it was definitely not as disgusting as in the fanfic. When his son is here, don't copy the characters from the later stage to the early stage. The character is too flat.

As I said before, the most important thing in writing this kind of novel is the sense of time. The plot of Siheyuan is somewhat better not to be written around Siheyuan, otherwise the results will generally not be good. Why Siheyuan is so popular is not because everyone likes to read Siheyuan, but because everyone likes to read novels of that era. If you want to write about that era, you can usually only use the Siheyuan as a starting point. Every one of them counts. There are too many plots in the Siheyuan and the basic results are not good.

See Chapter 218, Chapter 219. I wonder what the author thinks? The wind picked up immediately. Build a prince's mansion in the countryside. I don't want to live anymore, what's wrong? It's no brainer to write these two superfluous words.

Are there many girls? If you wear it in a courtyard and don't keep women, you might as well just write a period article

Nonsense, would Yang Xiaotong, who comes from a cultural family, fall in love with a scumbag like Bangge? You might as well say that Banggeng raped someone and forced Yang Xiaotong to marry him! Qin Huairu has been in jail and can he still have a job when he comes back? Does Hongxing Factory specialize in collecting junk garbage? If I were the protagonist, I would look for an opportunity to kill trash beasts like Qin Huairu Bangge and I would definitely not give them time to develop!

What he writes is not like a soldier at all. He talks frivolously but has no brains.

I can't stand the withdrawal letter despite the limited exemption.

After identification, Chapter 14 is poisonous

After it was put on the shelves, I felt that the person had suddenly changed. The article was written like a report, with a lot of lies and empty words! Abandoned

To be honest, I know my writing is average. I have never had the shame to ask everyone for recommendation votes and monthly votes, but there are still many enthusiastic veterans who tirelessly and silently vote for encouragement. To be honest, Bao Bao is very touched in his heart. I can only work hard to improve my writing and repay my book friends. As long as there is still one person reading my book, I will keep writing. I love you so much.

When I saw Yan Fugui helping to carry my luggage, I gave him a pack and walked right out the front door. At that time, the average per capita cost was five yuan per month. A pack of cigarettes was not counted as a ticket and 30 cents. If you add the ticket, it would be counted as 50 cents, which is equivalent to three days of living expenses.

Kindness! Read three chapters! There's a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning! It feels like a time-travel novel in a courtyard house! Don't let your inner emotions be so rich! Don't make your identity and background so complicated, and don't make your name so big! Don't be too superhuman! I know you want to write something awesome! But don't write that awesome thing in the first place! Otherwise, I would have thought he was a god! If you don't write well later, there will be gaps. Keep it simple! At least the character design needs to be developed! In the first three chapters, I didn't see if the main character was human!

Rubbish, the wheel talks over and over again, nonsense.

The writing is so long-winded, I wrote nearly 10 chapters just to get into this job.

Luo Liba Suo has a running account-like psychological narration background, and the storyline can be said to be non-existent.

Have those who returned from the Korean War been awarded the title? What a fucking rubbish.

For some reason, this chapter overlapped, sorry!

The writing is quite good and has a sense of age 🪖

The writing is so rich in emotion that you can't stand it?

After reading the beginning, I didn't understand the layout of the courtyard in the author's novel. The main courtyard is a courtyard with four entrances, which is no problem. Then the author added east-west courtyards, each of which houses three families. Among them, the east courtyard where the protagonist's home is is a courtyard with one entrance. So the courtyard house described by the author has a weird "ten" shape? Is there such a courtyard house? Nanluoguxiang is in the center of the city. The alleys are all square. How do you arrange your weird-shaped building? Is there wasteland next door?

Can't you make every sentence longer? Nothing neat. ~This is how this symbol should be used. It makes me uncomfortable. Goodbye.