Evolve Infinitely from Scratch

Writing style: The writing style of this book is one of the biggest highlights. It is concise, clear in meaning, and smooth and natural. It is easy to read and comfortable to read. Moreover, the author very cleverly uses the male and female protagonist's growth as a baby as the entry point, and then uses this writing style to easily establish a special sense of connection between the reader and the male and female protagonist, making the story even more exciting. Characters: This is the biggest highlight of this article, bar none. The portrayal of the heroine is very good, and the heroine created is also very good. The interactions between the characters are fun and natural. The interaction between the male and female protagonists takes up a lot of space in this article, and the sweet atmosphere makes people daydream and yearn for it. But personally I don't like the male protagonist, he is too rational, and he is also a bit selfish and indifferent. But these shortcomings make the characters of the male and female protagonists seem so complementary, and they are both indispensable to each other. It's confusing and difficult to comment on. Plot: It's hard to comment. First, the sweet daily life and growth stories of the male and female protagonists take up too much space, making it a bit thin; second, except for the male and female protagonists' own growth lines, the interweaving of other lines seems stiff. I feel that the author used Gao Wupi because other types of growth lines and career lines are more difficult to write. World view: You are in a dangerous different world, but the protagonists have encountered so few crises in the past eighteen years. Paganism also died too easily. The alien beasts that are the biggest enemies of mankind are actually restricted to a corner. The human world is pitifully small, and the atmosphere of the whole world is not uplifting. I saw someone say before that because of the many crises, they paid more attention to the fusion genes and mechanization in front of them, and purebloods were suppressed. But I failed to see the major dangers in this world. I only watched the growth stories and flirting of the protagonist and the heroine...

There are commendable aspects of the worldview, but there are also criticisms. Generally speaking, the advantages and disadvantages are quite equal. The good thing about the worldview is that the logic that is difficult to write clearly is not written at all. Aunt Wang's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long. To be honest, it is similar to solving math problems. As long as you don't write down the process, the process will be correct, but for the public, it still needs to be written a little bit. The criticism is that the world view of this thing is not clear at all. The world view is just a few sentences in the introduction of the novel, which is not three-dimensional at all. I basically read the first 200,000 words like this. The plot focuses on emotional drama, and it is a sweet story covered with high martial arts fantasy, and the plot description is very vague. The mouse couldn't figure out what you were writing for a long time. I feel like you asked me to represent the protagonist's ignorance of the world environment. The writing is very clever and has good intentions, but to be honest, as long as you are an old bookworm with picky tastes, your way of writing will definitely do more harm than good.

The most important thing for this kind of coming-of-age novel is to have the right details. If you don't grasp the plot well, you're probably going to end it... So far, it seems that the novel has great potential!!!

Water baby benwa😄

It's really nice to watch. The setting is new. I feel like the author is not good at writing emotional lines, and the writing is a bit stiff. Now the male and female protagonists have not expressed their feelings, making them look a bit like brother and sister. Come on, author. As long as it's not too outrageous, I will always order it.

In short, I feel good after reading Chapter 79, a little bit disappointed The female protagonist's abilities should also be shown This article has many advantages. The male protagonist has relatively positive views and is not immoral. The female protagonist's behavior is also quite normal. It reads more realistically. I am a junior high school student. The little behaviors and little psychology of middle school students are very right and very funny. 😁 Although the male and female protagonists are not funny, but there are funny foils around them. It is okay to read and quite interesting. There are also many shortcomings. The female protagonist is suppressed for too long. Press Logically speaking, the heroine is actually not weak at all (compared to ordinary people), but she is completely destroyed by the hero's glory. Although the author also hinted at the heroine's ability to deal with water, it really did not show how awesome she is (she also always wets the bed) I think it can be written in the later plot that the male protagonist has never defeated the enemy, and the female protagonist is anxious, and shows herself to others, and saves the male protagonist with water power. In this way, the male protagonist is strong, and the female protagonist has special powers, and they must be focused on training. They can all go to key universities, and the male protagonist does not need to go through the back door. . . . . To evaluate the novel, I would give it a 7 out of 10 points. You can take a look at it, but the pretentiousness is quite cliché (after reading so many novels, in fact, good works do not necessarily have to have many pretentious times, but they must be big ୧⍢⃝୨), but it is not harmful. After all, the protagonist needs to be pretentious to upgrade his achievements. I personally give it 8 points, because I like novels with single female protagonists I hope the author can continue to work hard. If it is good, I will follow up and order 😍 Also, please recommend any good novels without female protagonists and single female protagonists

Childhood sweethearts super evolution

Shen Qinghan's little jiojio when he wakes up

To be honest, if the main character is so good, there must be a plot about childhood sweethearts. Is it really because of the word count?

The heroine kept wetting the bed until high school. She couldn't stand it anymore. It was too poisonous.

I've read more than 20 chapters. Is it a single female protagonist? Why does it feel like it is forcibly locked? Am I the only one who finds it awkward for a person with an adult mind and soul to be interested in a girl he has watched grow up since she was a baby and say they want to be together for a lifetime?

The protagonist promotes pure-blooded human beings, attracting countless geniuses from Earth to join in, but without the protagonist's support, no matter how hard they practice, they can't break through. As time goes by, all the younger generation of the Earth is wasted, and when the source comes over, they can easily be pushed aside. Later generations recognized the protagonist as the first adulterer on earth. The end of the play😁

The protagonist is really a disaster star. He has been put on a bounty every day since he went to college. The officials of that earth are even more outrageous. There are two moles among the ten high-ranking officials, and they have become a sieve. Then the following articles are written over and over again with meaty scenes, and the plot advances very slowly. I suggest you look through the table of contents, and you will find that most of them are recommended to be skipped.

After reading about 40 chapters, I can see that the protagonist has the wisdom of heaven and man, which is equivalent to maxing out his brain. Then, because I had to buy resources for the third party, I gave up the Goudao strategy that I had pursued for more than ten years. There are online novels, and the Internet has already developed to a certain extent. The first thing I thought about was not to search for funds online, but to choose a martial arts competition that was long, slow, efficient and risky to stand out. More than ten years of continuous accumulation of cultural knowledge seemed to have disappeared overnight. (His plug-in has a photographic memory and can be understood instantly, which is equivalent to knowing it by seeing it.) Have you read all novels in the past ten years? Even if you have read novels for more than ten years, logically speaking, you should have the writing level of a platinum master, right? Not faster than playing a game?

I have a small suggestion. It is better for the author to change his pen name to The Fourth Young Master of the Tang Family, and then change the title of the book to Legend of Genshin Impact. Then everything makes sense

The problem is quite big, I just finished reading the latest one 1. The rhythm is inconsistent, the first 200 chapters are very slow, but the second chapter just picks up speed 2. Repeatedly emphasizing that the heroine's urine is really bad 3. In such a big earth, the deputy commander of the military region is raped, the deputy governor of one of the nine states is raped, and two of the three city masters of the strongest city No. 1 On the front line are raped. What to play? Order it

At present, some people say that the contrast between the evolution type and the pure blood type is a bit too much, but the author has laid the groundwork well and does not forcefully belittle a certain professional loser like some novels. As long as you carefully consider the background of the book, it makes sense. First of all, global mutation. In order to survive, it is inevitable for most people to pursue genetic mutations that will give them strong strength in the short term, especially young people. As for future potential, that is not what needs to be considered now. The pure-blood school is equivalent to a school with great potential in theory, but a limited upper limit in the short term. It is just a theory, and it is normal for it not to be accepted by others. However, such a seed must be left, otherwise the top two universities in the country will not have such a school. Some people say that it is unreasonable to have so many majors. Search for paleontology and you can only recruit a few people a year. There are more teachers and professors than students, and other majors in cultural relic restoration, etc. The plot of the second childhood sweetheart is quite normal, very sweet but not greasy. Except for the special nature of the heroine, there is nothing bloody. The heroine has a distinct personality and the characters are delicately drawn. It's just that everyone has their own preferences, so you don't have to like them, but some people do, so please don't hurt each other. Thirdly, although the protagonist occasionally suppresses his strength and pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, the main purpose is not like some novels where it is just to show off. The author has patched it up every time. He does not take action for the limelight, but only when there is benefit. Leaving three points in doing things is to leave room for himself. For someone who has not been with each other for a short time, he tells the whole story. Who knows whether people are alienated from each other?

It's getting weirder and weirder, human beings are full of traitors and traitors. Is there nothing to do for the new generation of reservists who have not yet grown up? The protagonist will be ostracized wherever he goes, and if there is a mole, he will be suspected. The reserve team that has not grown has no high-level leader? How often does a team encounter an opponent that far exceeds the strength of the entire team? The protagonist will be destroyed without a halo. There are only dozens of talented reserves who die every time. How many of them can grow in the end? I haven't even mentioned the incident in which half of the team members rebelled against an unbeatable opponent early on. As a genius of the human race, he had no loyalty to his race at all. He rebelled when he was told to rebel. How did the human race survive in this world?

I have been rolling since I was a baby. How about rolling nm?

I don't quite understand why we have to rush to give birth to a child for the protagonist... It was already weird that his parents forced him to have a younger brother. This time, the protagonist has to give birth to another child. I guess many people don't like it, right? Having a child too early in this kind of fantasy novel is generally a poisonous point. Even if daily elements are added, it is the daily life of the male and female protagonists, rather than about raising a child...

Regarding the attributes of creatures, if you have any ideas, you can come in and leave them. I will try to emulate them as appropriate.

Cute and cute

There is too much content about Qingmei. The title of the book is Infinite Evolution from Scratch, not My Qingmei Girlfriend. Can you write more about infinite evolution? Recently, there are too many green plums, and there is almost no evolution content.

Does the writing style follow the age of the protagonist? It's pretty, but the style feels a bit young...

Why do we need to arrange a heroine when we already have a baby protagonist? Are you afraid that the male protagonist who is one or two years old will have no partner and be forced to marry? Can we write novels specifically about the baby male protagonist developing well, exploring golden fingers, exploring knowledge and exploring the world? There is so much content to write about, but I have to arrange a heroine who can wet her pants. . .

I've finished following the update. I really like this kind of daily atmosphere. The description of the heroine is also good. If you like it, you can be a little more open-minded. It's a bit pitiful so far. I've paid for it with ten thousand orders.

The other thing is that the heroine has too many plots, most of which involve urinary incontinence. This is the first time I have encountered such a heroine and I keep writing. Then this is an urban novel. Until the twenty chapters after it was released, I really can't stand it when you sing and pee your skirt. I can accept everything else, but it is really difficult to get into the heroine who keeps peeing.

I have read n novels and I keep having a question! If there is a competition, there must be gambling, especially if you have extraordinary power! The protagonist is so short of money, why doesn't he buy himself a win?

In the latest part, it is written that the parents' consciousness is all source crystals. Why didn't the bunch of people who were stronger than the protagonist not check it out before? Didn't they check it several times?

The only effective ability of Goldfinger is to devour. The other +1+2 are all false and invalid data, because the denominator is probably ∞.