Rebirth of Deinosuchus with Unlimited Bonus Points

Even though he was cheating, every time he hunted, he felt like he was close to victory. Every time he added points, he had to emphasize that he was much better than other crocodiles of the same age. In actual combat, it was always a close call.

The bite is too bad and the strength is also poor. An adult crocodile has a bite of one or two tons. Your crocodile is more than ten meters tall and does not have a bite of two tons. It is outrageous.

I suggest you learn some knowledge about paleontology before writing this kind of article. You have already written such outrageous things as Velociraptor can hunt Seismosaurus.

It seems that the writing is really bad and no one is reading it?

I just read a little bit, and it feels like a game article. I can only add some growth, but there is no natural growth.

Can you remove the "brother"? There are already names. Adding that one is completely redundant.

It just doesn't look good from the back

330,000 Words can't be received. It's really out of love, and there should be something wrong with the article. At least the editor and some readers don't buy it. Come on, author. To sum up the experience, I still quite like your novel.