Martial Arts Immortality: Start from the Proficiency Panel

The overall deviation is that the protagonist's IQ is unstable, good and bad sometimes, and the author is accustomed to using flashbacks or interludes. The whole story seems to be fragmented, which magnifies the bad and separates the good. There are also suppressions on the protagonist's IQ, and suppression on the development of gold finger usage. Throwing rocks can turn into skills, but other things are not considered? Flying knives and flying needles are not possible? Archery? Running? Push-ups. Those who practice physical training did not expect? Martial arts improvement is suppressed by the secret medicine and cannot be improved. It is the first time I saw the proficiency stuck in the neck by the secret medicine. You said that the skills are good without follow-up, and malnutrition has no effect. It is better than this. There are no big problems, but small problems are constant. The plot is very fragmented due to the author's writing technique. Personally I don't think it's worth investing in.

Proficiency is still stuck.

The first few chapters are okay, but later on, various small problems slowly arise, and the plot and story become stiff and illogical! A little beggar has been passively encountering all kinds of troubles until now, and the way he handles all kinds of things expresses a nervous personality. Sometimes he is very shrewd and cold, and sometimes he does things without a long-term perspective and is stupid! There are also plug-ins that can turn stones into skills, but literacy can't. Literary skills can enlighten one's intelligence and improve one's understanding and spirit!

You are too deliberately causing conflicts. The rhythm in ancient times was so slow. If you don't take the initiative to intervene, how can you encounter so many bad things?

Too white. Liushuiwen. Didn't inspire readers' emotions.

Looking at the proficiency, before throwing stones, you have already entered the room in Chapter 7, and then in Chapter 14, you have regressed and become the first glimpse of the door. It is also said that you need an opportunity to break through. It's not that there are too many skills that you can't remember, but this is the only useful combat skill! How careless is this! Goldfinger can even regress the more you practice!

Are you a newbie? It is your first time to write a book. There must be big and small problems. Write first, only after you write can you know where the problem is.

🐶💩, Holy mother bitch, bragging, big face.

1. Except for the beginning of the crisis, the other plots seem very deliberate, as if they were arranged and somewhat false. It does not match the identity of a beggar. There is no preliminary foreshadowing or foreshadowing, resulting in a sudden and illogical feeling. (Example: The pace of ancient times is slow and the plot is stiff and contrived) (Solution: Write first and try to see if you can let the protagonist do things that involve certain things, instead of re-opening things one by one, but connecting them together, such as the kind where the young one comes and the old one comes, and there are connections between things. Get involved in the whirlpool of things, rather than taking one step at a time. ) 2. Regarding the reasons for the character design, there is some uncertainty. Regarding the handling of things, the writing is insufficient and difficult to present, and the protagonist is pushed by the author's big hands, as if he is passive rather than active, and the sense of substitution begins to weaken. (Example: Some things are handled very well, and some things seem very shabby) (Solution: The character can be established with events first, and after it is formed, sort it out, and then bring in each plot by yourself, think about what the character and character of the protagonist will do, and achieve self-logical integrity.) 3. The hidden social logic of the background of the novel is somewhat difficult to grasp. The plot and the underlying logic conflict, and they only appear on the surface, making it difficult to read in depth. (Example: Ancient background, but the society is unstable and there is no time to practice martial arts. However, martial arts practice means that the plot has not yet reached its climax. At this time, it should be a relatively stable social environment, so some things should not happen.) (Solution: It can be directly chaotic or the end of the world) , there is no cyclical and gradual process, no changes are needed, and there will naturally be no problems with logical inconsistency. Second, write more and learn more. ) 4. The plot description is not coherent, the techniques are inconsistent, and the reverse order or interludes lead to frequent scene changes, giving readers a sense of fragmentation. (Example: There is no connection between writing technique, fighting person, and plot) (Solution: Try to find out the cool points of a scene, and then change the scene after it is no longer cool, which is similar to changing the map, but this map is smaller, just like a copy of the customs clearance, the level is completed perfectly Try the next copy. For fighting, this requires some vocabulary accumulation and rendering, imagination, five senses, and other people's evaluations, as well as damage to the surrounding environment, the sound caused when attacking, the name of the attack method, and the moves) 5. It suppresses the protagonist a lot and reduces the intelligence. The use of cheats is not complete, or cannot be grasped. It should be concise. For data and other things, there is a high probability that there will be errors. It is best to have fewer, or only text, to prevent minor problems. (Example: Throwing stones is a skill, but reading cannot form skills) (Solution: Start trying to get in touch with spiritual skills, but reading is not. Goldfinger can be added with the prefix of martial arts. The explanation of goldfinger is not complete, and the concept is general and has no specific scope. In other words, the author has a narrow vision. Unexpectedly, I have gained knowledge. Sometimes the data will be calculated incorrectly. If you write too much, you will forget the previous data and revise and patch it, which has a great impact on the readers.)

I think I found the reason for the many typos. Writer's assistant mistaken me.

When I write, I use the first person. It feels bad to read, and it feels a bit like reading a composition.

The author has read some. Advantages: The plot is okay, not bloody, and the protagonist's character is okay. Disadvantages: Poor writing style, giving people the feeling of scraps. That is, for what is originally a good event, you always write some scraps, but it cannot form a sense of atmosphere. It feels very depressing to read, like tasteless food that is a pity to throw away. Also, there are a lot of typos. Keep up the good work. The fighting scenes are particularly bad, and there are always some abrupt things that I'm not used to. Also, the subject wording is very confusing. Sometimes I can't tell who is who

The protagonist's IQ is not online, and the author's writing skills are not good enough.