After We Broke Up, Why Would You Cry If I Asked You to Call Me Uncle?

The plot is quite smooth and the writing is also good. The story gets better and better and I have been following the updates every day. It's such a pity.

My ex-girlfriend has a CEO aunt, so the family won't be poor...

Give new authors a chance, thank you bosses. I wish all the bosses to be handsome, have money, have a good career, everything goes well and be in good health! A boss raised the issue of rhythm, which has been changed, and the rhythm has taken off.

Finally sent this leader away

It's not convenient to talk about the new book for fear of affecting the author's performance. Now that it's over, I'd like to mention a few personal negative thoughts. Speaking from my impression, after all, I've put it down for a while. The first is the change of the protagonist. I like some rebirth stories, especially when the protagonist has something deeply regrettable, which makes the protagonist in the second life bring firm goals and rational changes. For example, the protagonist in your book is described as a good old man who accepts everything. However, when he was bullied by his boss at a dinner party, he suddenly lit up a cigarette and became an old man, and then his behavior changed drastically. Why? Then you start with a dog-licking start, which means that the protagonist has paid a lot (lost a lot of time and money). This is a poisonous point, so rebirth is equivalent to the return of previous losses. In addition, the experience of the previous life will not be manipulated this time, which makes it more enjoyable. If the girlfriend is not Bichi, you can also go to the crematorium to chase the husband. (Of course, the ex-girlfriend in your book has been intimate with someone else, so you can't write like this). Therefore, the protagonist in your book suffered a huge emotional loss and confessed and ran away. My readers were not happy after reading it. And looking back, the protagonist can stand up to the supervisor at a dinner party and is very smart. How did he become so addicted and poisonous by Bitchi? It would be worse than being immature in the previous life and being double beaten by his ex-girlfriend and the company. In this life, he knows what is precious. The next step is to control the progress of fighting the villain. Author, your writing style is very good. It seems that your articles are written with your own ideas. They are not shoddy studio articles. Come on, I will support you if I write another book.

When will this ex-girlfriend find out? Hit her face hard

Haha, will my aunt take advantage of my niece? Besides, those who live without a system are all hot chicks. I really think that I am invincible.

Woohoo, why is it over now?

The introduction is so poisonous, is there Shen Nong? Why is it finished in 120,000 words?

The author's writing is very good and smooth, unlike a newcomer, but in which chapter will the protagonist successfully terminate his contract with his former company? From Chapter 1 to Chapter 12, I still haven't finished it 😆

I can't go into details, but the plot arrangement is a big problem, and it's not very good to grasp the cool points and the poisonous points.