I'm Already Dead, and You're the One Who Came to the System of Cultivating Immortals for Your Descendants?

Come on, don't copy too much. If you copy too much, everyone will look awkward. Also, no matter how you deal with the Yang and Li families, some book friends who like one of them will be dissatisfied In fact, your article can be called popular or a tribute or a fan at its best, but it can be called plagiarism at its worst. So the author has to grasp a certain degree and write less about Xuanjian's characters and plots, and just write his own book according to his settings.

To be honest, only cultivators can develop spiritual roots. This setting should not be too stuck. Otherwise, over time, those mortals will slowly be eliminated, and only those with spiritual roots will be left in the world. Because there are no spiritual roots in mortals, there are very few casual cultivators, and mortals are of no use to immortal cultivators. You don't need to protect mortals, you can just kill them at will

It's okay, but are you writing about the Yang family in Xuanjian? A lot of things have been moved here. The death of this ancestor is almost the same as Yang Pan leaving the Yang family alone. But this map looks like it's at the original address of the Li family

In any case, the subject matter is okay, and the writing rhythm is already mature. However, after watching it, I felt that it was forced to follow Xuanjian. The ups and downs of the plot are not new. The protagonist plays too few times as an ancestor and has a low sense of presence. It is a bit to reduce the protagonist's presence in order to fit the plot of Xuanjian. The scholar lives, the imitator dies. This is already on the road to death. If there are other characters, the characterization is not strong, such as Cui Yue. I think she should have died reasonably after giving birth to the spiritual child (drinking poison? Accidentally lost? Got sick?), And now there is a gap between the only spiritual child in the family and several brothers. Don't talk about having feelings when you're in love, shit, people don't have feelings, you want feelings! ? Are you preparing to commit suicide for the final time? ? Do you think this plot is good? The best plot is that after giving birth to a spiritual child, Cui Yueli passed away. Now if you want the plot to have ups and downs, then write about brothers turning against each other. If Xuanjian didn't write about it, you can write about it. This is the way to survive!

Why are the last six photos always repetitive and not much written? Why don't you post less and write less? Why do they look so awkward when they are always repetitive?

There are also too many names written by the author. Just the ones from the Luo family made me dizzy. In fact, there is no problem with writing too many, but these people did not describe things like appearance and clothes, nor did they give a general judge like Xuan Jian did. They are as cunning as a wolf, cautious as a snake, or can appear and hold a gun like Qing Hong. There must be one characteristic that makes people distinguish. And some people are suspected of duplicating their designs. For example, the one with the surname Zhou feels as stupid and poisonous as the one with the surname Luo.

Moving mountains and filling seas, this is the power of Jindan Dao. You, Yang Sunfu, can do it now. Mountains turn into canyons, and canyons turn into mountains. In just an instant, you are no longer afraid of foundation building. You can just change it for fun. This is too fake. 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

The protagonist is dispensable. Also, I personally hope that since it is a family. More fields, less copies.

Having two children is not a miracle, and the protagonist has no sense of existence at all.

Why should the only child with a spirit be full of hatred towards the Yang family? Can't you kill that woman? Speechless

Isn't it Chapter 500 of foundation building again?

Yang Sunfu? What do you think of the protagonist's name? Why not call it Wang Jianguo? I can't complain.

Come on, I hope an important female spirit will come to make up for Xuan Jian Jingtian's regrets

The protagonist's sense of existence is too low. He is useless at all. He has no plug-ins at all.

It's well written, but not many people read it. Come on.

After reading the plot of the first few chapters, it's no problem that Yang Yongye has strong martial arts and is eloquent. After all, the protagonist has married more than 70 wives and turned into a breeding pig. But how did his bragging come down to pass down the family? How come future generations really believe in something that is obviously not true? Could it be that it was written in the soul on the tablet later? And how did Yang Yongye attract the giant python? It was a giant python that had eaten spiritual grass. It was such a coincidence? If it was a coincidence, don't flash back. The whole village's arrival at the scene seemed like Yang Yongye's scheme. Moreover, there is a problem with the surname Luo. He came after the fact. He sent the people, but he did not wonder about the giant python. Instead, he thought it was a bad idea. Also, the people in the village were rough people, so why did they talk in one way? Were ancient farmers really so educated? Didn't it indicate that it was the Luo family who said it? The author obviously has a shadow of Xuanjian now, and I also watched it through QQ, but I think that if you want to achieve results, you have to have your own content ideas. I originally wanted to laugh at it, but the saucy operation of plundering immortal cultivators to be wives attracted me. Now the author's writing structure and content logic still have some problems. And I think the author can fill in the content. For example, Yang Yongye has actually visited this village a long time ago and knows that there is a big python here. This would make more sense. By the way, is the character of the author Yang Yongye that of Xiang Ping?😰

People with psychic abilities have the potential to become fertility machines

I want to ask about the golden finger function. I don't understand it.

What are you writing about? Why are they all dark things? I read the first few chapters. Afraid of blocking the shadow.

I think it's pretty good, but it's developing too slowly. After reading it for a long time, I still only have one spiritual root, so I won't talk about it, but your pace is too slow.

Author, please hold on, I haven't read the book yet, but your book is actually very early, earlier than another similar book with a similar name. I'm looking for a similar book like yours, and I don't know if it's yours. I've read it before. But probably not. The first book is worth perseverance. I saw an author write more than 5 million words, but only got 5,000 votes. Persistence, accumulation of popularity and fans.

What is the author? I didn't see the meaning of your writing about the system for bringing descendants of time travellers? Write about the reborn? Do you want to get involved anywhere? In the end, you can't get anywhere?

Come and take a look at me, why can't my bookmarks be booked? Why is no one reading my books? Is my writing really so bad that you have no desire to read on? I know I'm not as good as those old authors, but why do so many poorly written authors make a living while I don't get a dime?