Dragon Raja: My Name Is Chu Zihan, Not Chu Zihang

I feel that there is still a problem with the direction of the writing. Readers read online articles just for fun. Everyone wants to see Chu Zihan slap Nono in the face, they want to see the beautiful and miserable senior sister and the bad boy redeem each other, and they want to see the pull between the straight girl and the bad boy. Although the restart of this article has solved the problem of all the gender changes that caused the story line to completely derail the original work, I personally feel that the fun point is still not captured. 1. The senior sister is not "miserable" enough. The reason why the character Chu Zihang is so popular is that he still cares about others even though he has too many regrets and regrets. He is lonely enough. He regrets not facing Odin with his father. Before entering the school, he was alone in the city carrying secrets and regrets while looking for clues about his father. But the senior sister in this article is no longer alone when facing the real world. She has a sister and a concubine. Even the concubine took her away in the Maybach. This makes the character of the senior sister lack a lot of flavor. She is beautiful but not miserable enough, and she lacks the loneliness and regret she carries. 2. Shai Zai is not bad enough. The time for two people to meet or establish a relationship is too early. Everyone really wants to see Senior Sister save Shai Zai, but your speed is too fast. Shai Zai evolves too fast. If you get it right in one step, where will your subsequent excitement come from? The same is true for love relationships. The relationship is confirmed in less than thirty chapters. It is difficult for me to imagine how the author can control the plot in the future. Readers cannot be retained by simply giving out sweets. Countless excellent love novels tell us that the pull before falling in love is the most attractive and can make people roll on the bed. If you delay the date of confirming the relationship, I can think of several very attractive scenes with my knees. For example, when I learned that Nono was engaged, the senior sister comforted her in the restaurant. Under the light, the senior sister lowered her head and recalled the past while chatting. She stubbornly said that I can blow up the axle with you. Another example is going to Japan. The lonely senior sister doesn't want Concubine Ming to be so lonely, and wants to pair up the little monster with Concubine Ming. Although she may have fallen a little in love with this bad guy after her trip to Beijing (of course, a straight woman doesn't think this is a liking, and being tough is the friendship between good brothers and comrades), Concubine Ming feels that she is not good enough for her senior sister, and the distance between them is getting closer and closer. I unknowingly said a lot of nonsense, mainly because Chu Zihang's character is so suitable for being a heroine. The author's entry point into the portrait is very attractive. I hope the follow-up development can slap me in the face.

I feel that the beginning after the reboot is not as good as the original one. The problem before the reboot was actually that after Caesar came out, all the readers were blown away one by one. The beginning after the reboot is actually not as attractive to me as the previous one. Let's check it out after only a few chapters.

Come on! He chased me again. I still like Chu Lu's love (actually, I am also a Little Heavenly Girl)

I ordered it all in a hurry, and the beginning is not as good as the previous one, and then the story is too complex. The only one that I think is good is the story about One Day by a Middle Easterner, and the ending is not good. The book I chose is a tauren book, which is quite awkward. The ending is too short, I lie down in a love hotel, the child is gone, and I don't know where to spit it out. It still lacks a sense of tension. Alas, the length is too short. I guess the author will never write it in the future. It's a bit regretful.

The author promised to give a good ending, but the follow-up data is not good, so I will only write a novella this time, but if fans have read the novel, it will be good. It is okay to start directly from Long 2 this time. Everyone is here for Chachulutang, not Long 1. It is not a big problem at the beginning. The focus of this book should be on Long 2 and Long 3. In fact, Long 3 is not bad as the ending. It is a story with a passionate kingly ending and a happy ending, which fulfills the regrets of fans for many years. Because the original work went downhill from 4 to 5 and was unwatchable at all. Why not just end it at Dragon 3, which is decent and doesn't have to wipe out the old thief's butt? Is the original work's pitfalls left unfilled? The happy ending has fulfilled all the regrets of the original work. Don't worry about the small details. Maybe I don't even know how to fill them in_(:зゝ∠)_

To be honest, the last book was very good in terms of writing and writing, but it was a pity that it failed in the end. I think this has something to do with the atmosphere in the comment area. Now that it has been reopened, please be careful not to discuss topics from the original work, such as discussing whether Lu Mingfei is worthy or not.

Please continue to write about Sister Zihan and Mingfei. I really like it. Instead of writing about Dragon Slayer and Fafa Tang, please write about daily life.

Good guy, this eunuch book has just been put on the shelves, why don't you continue writing in a different place?

Throughout the male version of Nono, everyone is having fun, 😁

In fact, I want to watch the Shura Field or the party struggle, 😭 now it seems there is no hope