Dragon Ball: the Strongest Man on Earth in the Universe

One thing to note, I remember reading a Dragon Ball fanfic of The Strongest Man on Earth a long time ago, and your charade was relatively small in comparison. Let me just say one thing, you have written about earthlings, so there is no need to rely too much on the Saiyans who get stronger with each passing battle. To put it bluntly, they are just the ones who unlock the gene lock. And you've already written about Krillin, so if you become a Super Saiyan again... If you, an Earthling, become a Super Saiyan, then I think it's better not to write about Earthlings. Do more local development on Earth, especially some of the talented martial artists on the Earth team can be slightly enhanced. There is no need to follow the original combat power setting too much. After all, the combat power of Dragon Ball is also filled in randomly.

If the protagonist does not have Saiyan blood, I have some small opinions. I don't know whether it is suitable for the protagonist, such as developing a vitality bomb route, such as collecting the life energy emitted by nature and the natural energy emitted by the stars in normal times to continuously strengthen himself and his own energy and spirit, and then combine it with some medicinal materials. We can also develop some similar critical attack techniques like Kaioken Eight Gate Dungeon. Jiren's route is very good, with perfect control and instantaneous bursts. There should also be many techniques on earth. I remember that in the first part, Wukong seemed to have met some good people when he traveled. If there is pressure in the early stage, you can go to that small demon world. It is said that the upper limit of Saiyans has always been very high, but think about it, almost no one has been able to become a Super Saiyan over the years. It is not that the Saiyan blood has made Goku, but I personally think that Goku has made the Saiyan blood, so the official will continue to add settings later (finally, I will send the protagonist's wife picture 🙂)

Klin is too short. Is he 1.5 Meters tall? He is said to be 1.53 Meters tall, but I always feel that he is taller. It makes me feel that he is not even 1.4 Meters tall.

Author, Krillin is a dwarf, you have to get the Dragon Ball to make a wish to be taller, otherwise, your desire to become taller will be reduced.

The title of the book and the background always make me think of the legendary Super Earthman.

In fact, unless the people on Earth in Dragon Ball are inherently inferior, the strong ones in the 12 universes and other universes are not Saiyans. Whether they are strong or not depends on the individual, and they are not angels. Even the Gods of Destruction are of various races. Kaioshins are the same, but Kaioshins are not particularly strong races.

The pacing can be sped up a little more. At least the most explosive point comes from Piccolo. Try not to write it so slowly.

It's quite boring. It basically follows the original work. It's not interesting.

Klin can practice the immortal martial arts route. . Practice the flesh, tendons, blood, bones and marrow, then the Qi and Blood Furnace, Innate, Martial Saint, Human Immortal Martial Arts, and Martial Shattering the Void

Is the giant ape ×4? Not ×10?

By the way, how about adding some Otsutsuki bloodline to Dragon Ball? When I was watching Dragon Ball, I felt that there were many cultivation systems in Dragon Ball, but the mainstream was still Qi.

In the early stages, the pace can be sped up appropriately.