Comprehensive Immortal: Starting from Qingyun Gate

Come on, author. It looks pretty good at the moment. By the way, can you handle so many worlds? What is the main plot? If the Qingyun Sect and the protagonist are not strengthened, they will definitely not be the opponents of sects such as Shushan and Emei. In the later stage, there will be monsters like Chonglou Feipeng Evil Sword Immortal? I feel that the writing of Zongwu is basically bad, and the estimation of Zongxian is also high. And why are there so many people trolling Qi Hao? Isn't the protagonist awakening the memory of his past life or fusion? He has been with Zhang Xiaofan since childhood and has been in a relationship for so many years. There is nothing wrong with targeting Qi Hao, right? Unless he suddenly traveled through time and just met Qi Hao, he would just lick Zhang Xiaofan.

The protagonist has completely become Zhang Xiaofan's nanny. She cares about her in every way. I don't know how the protagonist, a time traveler, could have such a deep relationship with Zhang Xiaofan. Because of Zhang Xiaofan's conflict with his teacher and enemies of his classmates, I thought Zhang Xiaofan was the father of the protagonist out of ignorance.

It's nothing compared to other sects. In the later stage, I will add a clone of one of the Zhuxian Swords of the Great Master Tongtian Sword to the Zhuxian Sword. By then, even Shushan Changliu will be a bunch of weaklings 🤓

The writing is quite good, but the confrontation between Hongqiao and Qi Hao is too abrupt. In addition to his own emotional factors, Qi Hao's pursuit of Tian Linger should also have hints from Taoist Cangsong and the acquiescence of the Dazhufeng couple. After Taoist Cangsong defected, only the marriage between the two peaks can compete with Tongtian Peak. The check and balance between power is not a simple love between children. Besides, there is nothing wrong with Qi Hao's pursuit of Tian Linger in an honest and fair way (except for his age). The protagonist blindly follows his own ideas, slaps Qi Hao in the face, and separates the two, which is unjust. He can give Zhang Xiaofan strong medicine and let him pursue it on his own instead of imposing his own ideas on Tian Linger. The above is purely a personal opinion without any subjective feelings towards the author.

Qi Hao is portrayed as a clown, right? Qi Hao didn't know that Zhang Xiaofan had a crush on Tian Linger, so if he didn't give up Tian Linger to Zhang Xiaofan, he would be trying to steal his love, right? Is Tian Linger an object in the author's eyes? I'm waiting for the heroine of the protagonist to have a sweetheart who is a sweetheart. Should the protagonist give up the heroine to the younger brother? After all, if you don't give up, you will be taking love with a sword.

I have read Chapter 40, and it was awkward for me to read. Not to mention the plot of confronting Qi Hao and other plots, the logic of just integrating these worlds is not correct.                                                                                                                                                                                 Six realms, and the strongest ones in the human world are the Shushan and Changliu Immortal Sects. It also writes that the Emei sect has a period of transcending tribulations. There are people who have ascended in the Middle-earth immortal world. So at least these three sects have a history of ascension. Then the Qingyun Sect has no history of ascension. What reason does Pu Zhi have to go to the Qingyun Sect for immortality? Shouldn't he go to the three sects above? Even if his relationship with other sects is not as good as Qingyun Sect, then what reason does he have for not looking for people from Paradise? As the only Buddhist sect among the "Seven Immortal Sects", doesn't it have a way to communicate with the upper world? Or maybe there is a Buddhist sect in the world of immortality in China that is more powerful than Tianyin Temple, but it does not replace Tianyin Temple and is included in the "Seven Immortal Sects". And why didn't Puzhi seek advice from people from the same Buddhist sect (such as Jinshan Temple), but instead asked Qingyun Sect? Could it be said that it is the setting of the original work? This setting is not logical at all under the integrated world view of this book. We have already set up the Paradise of Paradise, so why should we set up the Tianyin Temple's exercises from the Heavenly Book? Don't the Buddhist sects in the human world have any techniques that can lead to the Paradise of Ultimate Bliss? As the only Buddhist sect among the "Seven Immortal Gates" in the world of immortality in China, the highest level of its skills cannot reach the Paradise of Paradise. Then you might as well find another Buddhist sect and join the Seven Gates, and don't let Tianyin Temple be represented in it.

I've given up on the trap, and I'm just going to vent a few words: The first TJ, the second TJ, those who fall into the trap should be careful, it's poisonous! They are always referring to other people's books, with very little original content, and the protagonist is always fluttering in white clothes and standing high, untainted by the dust. Still standing and standing, the front feet are pure and white, the name is as big as a mountain, and it smells so good in the blink of an eye. By the way, the reason why Qi Haotian Ling'er was separated and given to Zhang Xiaofan was just to recruit Lu Xueqi, right? Zhang Xiaofan became the green leaf that set off the protagonist's excellence. This kind of extremely self-centered Tianlong protagonist is really poisonous. It is said that there is a charge for self-motivated articles with more than 100,000 words, but there is no mention of saving the manuscript at all. I dare not write more in the early stage. Is there such an extremely utilitarian method of self-motivated in the world? I also write some self-pleasure articles, and I haven't published them for more than two million words. I just focus on self-pleasure. I can only say that it is not my cup of tea, the way is different, and the author is lucky.

There is a big problem with the handling of Chapter 13, which makes me feel a bit useless anyway. Not to mention Qi Hao's personality, there is also the factor of old cows eating young grass. But as a fellow student, if the other person has a good reputation, I will show my goodwill and make friends with you. You were cold-faced and made rude remarks. What impression would you leave on the watching disciples? If you are mature, just say a few words to him. If you don't want to change the plot, just nod your acquaintance. Because of the distance between them and wanting to change the plot, it is understandable to help Zhang Xiaofan come up with some ideas and tricks to poach him. You come up and ask someone who is also responsible for the death of the whole family. What kind of brain do you have? Put yourself in someone else's shoes. If you were a spectator, what would be your impression of the protagonist? Do you feel like a passer-by villain? No matter where you are, reputation and impression are very important. Well, it can also bring out part of your character. This has to be conveyed to the ears of the elders. Do you also want to leave an evaluation of being arrogant and arrogant?

It's really so damn awesome. Tian Linger must like Zhang Xiaofan, right? You and Xi Hao just can't do it, right? People like whoever they like, why do you have so many things to do? Waste yourself. If you can't catch up with a woman, you'll just bark like a dog. If she pursues her openly and honestly, you can catch her with your own strength. What about you? You just know that when a dog barks, you deserve it and you can't catch it. What normal woman would like this kind of thinking?

This is a junior high school time traveler.

I helped you fight with others in the previous ones, but the following ones are very brainless. It's okay for you to help your brother chase his wife, and it's okay to offend people, but if you offend someone and ask others not to care, you're so shameless? Why do you ask people to forgive you without apologizing or making amends? It was you who got into trouble by standing up for your brother, why don't you make others angry? So brainless

First of all, there is nothing wrong with criticizing Qi Hao. For those who have read the original work, it is conservatively estimated that half of them are dissatisfied with Qi Hao. Those who say Qi Hao and Tian Linger are in love have most likely only watched the TV series. Qi Hao went to Dazhu Peak to deliver a message. It was also the first time the two met. Unless Qi Hao had peeped, at least Tian Linger had not seen it. As a result, Qi Hao flirted with his daughter in front of Tian Buyi and his wife as soon as they met, and it was love at first sight? Qi Hao has lived for more than a hundred years, and there are many beauties in the Qingyun Sect, but he has never seen any of them. You know, the relationship between Dazhu Peak and Longshou Peak is not good. The first person Cangsong hates most in the world is Tongxuan, and the second one is definitely Tian Buyi. Wan Jianyi liked Suru back then, but it turned out that Suru married Tian Buyi, and Cangsong was Wan Jianyi's fanatical fan. Do you think he hated her or not? Tian Linger definitely doesn't know about this, but Qi Hao has been in Qingyun Sect for hundreds of years, so it's impossible for him to not know anything about it. Even if he really doesn't know about it, he has been so unaware of Cangsong's attitude towards Tian Buyi for hundreds of years. As Cangsong's eldest disciple, he knew that his master and Tian Buyi were not at odds with each other, yet he flirted with the daughter of his master's enemy as soon as they met. Is this reasonable? He, Qi Hao, has lived for hundreds of years, and he is not a young boy. Tian Ling'er is really beautiful and miserable? It was worth Qi Hao's pursuit at the risk of offending his master. Nonsense! The possibility of Qi Hao flirting with Tian Ling'er and falling in love at first sight is extremely small. It is most likely a conspiracy, and it is most likely that he got Cangsong's tacit approval, or even Cangsong's instigation behind it. You Tian Buyi, the woman who robbed my idol back then, today my apprentice seduces your daughter and makes you so angry. Don't say it's impossible, Cansong is possessed, he can do anything. As for why Tian Buyi didn't stop it? How could he stop it? An old man over a hundred years old, not bad looking, rich and well-established, would basically be a dimensionality-reducing blow to an innocent girl like Tian Linger. Tian Buyi can only say it bitterly.

Su Hui, the Buddha of the Tang Dynasty, awakened (incomplete version). He acted and stood up, but he couldn't be a bitch, and he couldn't build an archway. It is disgusting and makes people feel contemptuous. Let alone a gentleman and a villain, he is a hypocrite and the protagonist is not qualified.

I can't even write a Zhu Xian well. Fusion of an egg

It's tasteless. It sewed in other worldviews but didn't make up for it. It just changed it a little. It's not much different from the original work. It also forced other worldviews into it, and the plot copied the original work 🥵

Every time I see the story about the junior sister in Zhu Xian's novel, I always feel sad. With Qi Hao's talent, it takes a hundred years to reach the level of cultivation at the beginning of the plot. It was 60 years since the last Seven Meridians martial arts competition, and it was only a little bit of cultivation at the beginning of the plot. In addition, the training time before the last martial arts competition was hundreds of years at least. To deceive a teenage girl, at least the protagonist must be able to do that kind of thing.

The writing is average, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The protagonist has character problems. For example, in the case of Qi Hao, it is very simple. He either doesn't interfere or is hostile to the end. In the end, he apologizes. I really don't know what to think. You have already offended others. Is an apology useful? The author is not old, probably from high school to college, with little experience and no understanding of interpersonal communication. I tolerated the breakup of Qi Hao and Tian Linger, but then I apologized to Qi Hao later? Speechless, very poisonous

It's a waste of good subject matter It's both fake and good at the same time. Some chapters are directly stuck on the paper, and some people rush to lick it. This is the first time I've seen something so disgusting. The rest is ugly at best. How did you write a good book like this?

The more I watch this protagonist, the more I feel like he's a little bit like Tang San. Especially when the plot of the original work is suddenly changed.

The previous book has not been updated for 11 days. Please be careful if you want to order all of it.

Cut it off, fuck it, and enter the palace like this

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Update soon, it's been a while since I've seen anything about Zhu Xian

Stop tj, more updates 😁

Can't you just finish them one by one?

It's probably been in the box since there's been no news for so long.

It's so well written, this is the background of the world that I have always wanted to see in my dreams😁😁😁

I just found out that it was you who wrote it. I'm glad to meet you.

Keep writing, it's quite good

The writing is quite good. I hope it will be updated more often. Just stop being a eunuch.