A Multiverse of Immortals: Starting at Qingyun Sect

The protagonist has completely become Zhang Xiaofan's nanny. She cares about her in every way. I don't know how the protagonist, a time traveler, could have such a deep relationship with Zhang Xiaofan. Because of Zhang Xiaofan's conflict with his teacher and enemies of his classmates, I thought Zhang Xiaofan was the father of the protagonist out of ignorance.

It's nothing compared to other sects. In the later stage, I will add a clone of one of the Zhuxian Swords of the Great Master Tongtian Sword to the Zhuxian Sword. By then, even Shushan Changliu will be a bunch of weaklings 🤓

The writing is quite good, but the confrontation between Hongqiao and Qi Hao is too abrupt. In addition to his own emotional factors, Qi Hao's pursuit of Tian Linger should also have hints from Taoist Cangsong and the acquiescence of the Dazhufeng couple. After Taoist Cangsong defected, only the marriage between the two peaks can compete with Tongtian Peak. The check and balance between power is not a simple love between children. Besides, there is nothing wrong with Qi Hao's pursuit of Tian Linger in an honest and fair way (except for his age). The protagonist blindly follows his own ideas, slaps Qi Hao in the face, and separates the two, which is unjust. He can give Zhang Xiaofan strong medicine and let him pursue it on his own instead of imposing his own ideas on Tian Linger. The above is purely a personal opinion without any subjective feelings towards the author.

Qi Hao is portrayed as a clown, right? Qi Hao didn't know that Zhang Xiaofan had a crush on Tian Linger, so if he didn't give up Tian Linger to Zhang Xiaofan, he would be trying to steal his love, right? Is Tian Linger an object in the author's eyes? I'm waiting for the heroine of the protagonist to have a sweetheart who is a sweetheart. Should the protagonist give up the heroine to the younger brother? After all, if you don't give up, you will be taking love with a sword.

I have read Chapter 40, and it was awkward for me to read. Not to mention the plot of confronting Qi Hao and other plots, the logic of just integrating these worlds is not correct.                                                                                                                                                                                 Six realms, and the strongest ones in the human world are the Shushan and Changliu Immortal Sects. It also writes that the Emei sect has a period of transcending tribulations. There are people who have ascended in the Middle-earth immortal world. So at least these three sects have a history of ascension. Then the Qingyun Sect has no history of ascension. What reason does Pu Zhi have to go to the Qingyun Sect for immortality? Shouldn't he go to the three sects above? Even if his relationship with other sects is not as good as Qingyun Sect, then what reason does he have for not looking for people from Paradise? As the only Buddhist sect among the "Seven Immortal Sects", doesn't it have a way to communicate with the upper world? Or maybe there is a Buddhist sect in the world of immortality in China that is more powerful than Tianyin Temple, but it does not replace Tianyin Temple and is included in the "Seven Immortal Sects". And why didn't Puzhi seek advice from people from the same Buddhist sect (such as Jinshan Temple), but instead asked Qingyun Sect? Could it be said that it is the setting of the original work? This setting is not logical at all under the integrated world view of this book. We have already set up the Paradise of Paradise, so why should we set up the Tianyin Temple's exercises from the Heavenly Book? Don't the Buddhist sects in the human world have any techniques that can lead to the Paradise of Ultimate Bliss? As the only Buddhist sect among the "Seven Immortal Gates" in the world of immortality in China, the highest level of its skills cannot reach the Paradise of Paradise. Then you might as well find another Buddhist sect and join the Seven Gates, and don't let Tianyin Temple be represented in it.

I've given up on the trap, and I'm just going to vent a few words: The first TJ, the second TJ, those who fall into the trap should be careful, it's poisonous! They are always referring to other people's books, with very little original content, and the protagonist is always fluttering in white clothes and standing high, untainted by the dust. Still standing and standing, the front feet are pure and white, the name is as big as a mountain, and it smells so good in the blink of an eye. By the way, the reason why Qi Haotian Ling'er was separated and given to Zhang Xiaofan was just to recruit Lu Xueqi, right? Zhang Xiaofan became the green leaf that set off the protagonist's excellence. This kind of extremely self-centered Tianlong protagonist is really poisonous. It is said that there is a charge for self-motivated articles with more than 100,000 words, but there is no mention of saving the manuscript at all. I dare not write more in the early stage. Is there such an extremely utilitarian method of self-motivated in the world? I also write some self-pleasure articles, and I haven't published them for more than two million words. I just focus on self-pleasure. I can only say that it is not my cup of tea, the way is different, and the author is lucky.

There is a big problem with the handling of Chapter 13, which makes me feel a bit useless anyway. Not to mention Qi Hao's personality, there is also the factor of old cows eating young grass. But as a fellow student, if the other person has a good reputation, I will show my goodwill and make friends with you. You were cold-faced and made rude remarks. What impression would you leave on the watching disciples? If you are mature, just say a few words to him. If you don't want to change the plot, just nod your acquaintance. Because of the distance between them and wanting to change the plot, it is understandable to help Zhang Xiaofan come up with some ideas and tricks to poach him. You come up and ask someone who is also responsible for the death of the whole family. What kind of brain do you have? Put yourself in someone else's shoes. If you were a spectator, what would be your impression of the protagonist? Do you feel like a passer-by villain? No matter where you are, reputation and impression are very important. Well, it can also bring out part of your character. This has to be conveyed to the ears of the elders. Do you also want to leave an evaluation of being arrogant and arrogant?

It's really so damn awesome. Tian Linger must like Zhang Xiaofan, right? You and Xi Hao just can't do it, right? People like whoever they like, why do you have so many things to do? Waste yourself. If you can't catch up with a woman, you'll just bark like a dog. If she pursues her openly and honestly, you can catch her with your own strength. What about you? You just know that when a dog barks, you deserve it and you can't catch it. What normal woman would like this kind of thinking?

This is a junior high school time traveler.

First of all, there is nothing wrong with criticizing Qi Hao. For those who have read the original work, it is conservatively estimated that half of them are dissatisfied with Qi Hao. Those who say Qi Hao and Tian Linger are in love have most likely only watched the TV series. Qi Hao went to Dazhu Peak to deliver a message. It was also the first time the two met. Unless Qi Hao had peeped, at least Tian Linger had not seen it. As a result, Qi Hao flirted with his daughter in front of Tian Buyi and his wife as soon as they met, and it was love at first sight? Qi Hao has lived for more than a hundred years, and there are many beauties in the Qingyun Sect, but he has never seen any of them. You know, the relationship between Dazhu Peak and Longshou Peak is not good. The first person Cangsong hates most in the world is Tongxuan, and the second one is definitely Tian Buyi. Wan Jianyi liked Suru back then, but it turned out that Suru married Tian Buyi, and Cangsong was Wan Jianyi's fanatical fan. Do you think he hated her or not? Tian Linger definitely doesn't know about this, but Qi Hao has been in Qingyun Sect for hundreds of years, so it's impossible for him to not know anything about it. Even if he really doesn't know about it, he has been so unaware of Cangsong's attitude towards Tian Buyi for hundreds of years. As Cangsong's eldest disciple, he knew that his master and Tian Buyi were not at odds with each other, yet he flirted with the daughter of his master's enemy as soon as they met. Is this reasonable? He, Qi Hao, has lived for hundreds of years, and he is not a young boy. Tian Ling'er is really beautiful and miserable? It was worth Qi Hao's pursuit at the risk of offending his master. Nonsense! The possibility of Qi Hao flirting with Tian Ling'er and falling in love at first sight is extremely small. It is most likely a conspiracy, and it is most likely that he got Cangsong's tacit approval, or even Cangsong's instigation behind it. You Tian Buyi, the woman who robbed my idol back then, today my apprentice seduces your daughter and makes you so angry. Don't say it's impossible, Cansong is possessed, he can do anything. As for why Tian Buyi didn't stop it? How could he stop it? An old man over a hundred years old, not bad looking, rich and well-established, would basically be a dimensionality-reducing blow to an innocent girl like Tian Linger. Tian Buyi can only say it bitterly.