Infinite Terror: This Finite World

It's making me dizzy, it's too gamified. You could just remove the calculations and polish the results and write them out. If readers have questions, you could just open a QQ group and show them the dice roll. I suggest you learn from the Primordial Investigator and Lu Mingfei's Challenge FGO. There's a real Cthulhu tabletop RPG nine million words ahead of you. If you want to write about Anke, go to NGA and Gululu.

Few people will read your writing; it's too rushed.

Pig God Space uses the Infinite Terror TRPG 2.5R rules (Pig Rules). WwX+Y This is the most common form of dice roll in Pig Rules, which involves rolling X ten-sided dice, recording the number of times the result is 8, 9, or 10 (rolling a 10 is similar to rolling a 6 in Ludo, where you roll another ten-sided die, and if you roll another 10, you can continue rolling), and adding Y to the final…

Quite good, if you're patient enough to keep reading, it's a worthwhile read. The pacing is tight, the plot moves quickly, and there's no unnecessary filler. You can ignore the rules of the role-playing game and just watch the story outside the rules; there's absolutely no problem.

It's all data. Can't you just skip the process and give the result directly? We're here to read a novel, not to watch you do addition and subtraction.

Holy crap, this novel must have been written from watching friends roll dice in a group chat!

The author could learn from Zhai Nan, who also writes with dice; his writing is better. The author's writing is also good, but constantly showing the roll points makes it too game-like and feels disjointed.

Seriously? I bet the editor only read the first three chapters before bookmarking the book, and then inserted a voting decision in the fourth chapter. As a result, the scenes we see are messy and incomplete. I've read at least five or six novels where the plot is determined by point rolls in tabletop role-playing games, and this is the first time I've seen such dense data for these rolls. This book, starting from chapter four, isn't a web novel anymore; it's a tabletop role-playing game report.

Are you writing a novel or a tabletop role-playing game log? 😥 A dice roll followed by a short plot segment feels fragmented. You can roll dice to determine the plot, but including the dice-rolling process in the story is quite discouraging, and writing it that way means only a few people will actually be able to get into it.

If the product still uses formulas and calculations like this when it's released, it's hard for me to spend points to subscribe, because it doesn't feel worthwhile.