Dragon Clan: the Dragon Slayer Who Returned from a Hundred Years Ago

It's okay that there is no so-called big shot enrolling in school. There was still a hundred years to control the local mixed-race families and government forces in China, but in the blink of an eye, he went to Kassel to enroll in such a plot.

It's outrageous. Li Wuyue woke up because he was given adrenaline. Since he traveled through time, why not stop him? It's so stupid to prepare for a fight at the beginning.

It's not bad, with some minor flaws, but I think the biggest problem is the self-created Zhenqi. It's too fast. I have a girlfriend in less than fifty chapters. It's difficult to write later. When writing, I not only have to consider the heroine's role, but also her interpersonal relationships. This blocks many avenues later, and I can only write according to a few fixed routines. You can guess it,

I can only say that the quality is really average, so I have no choice but to make do with it. First of all, it was Li Wuyue. It was obvious that his awakening was an accident. The tragedy caused by a few ordinary people who ignored Angers' warning and insisted on the operation could have been easily avoided. Secondly, regardless of the above-mentioned issues, the story itself is very general, and the description is full of errors and omissions. In the previous article, people were fooled in the name of acting, and then the fight started directly. There was no surprise from others, and there was no explanation whether it was premeditated or what. The quality of the description of the battle itself was also very average. And I remember that in the original text, Deadpool did not besiege the manor. I didn't read Summer's Mourning in detail, but I remember that the fight with the Dragon King in the manor was Lao Lutou and Gui. That person is running away with a cocoon. It must be that cocoon that is besieged by Deadpool. In short, there are many conflicts with the original text.

It's a purely enjoyable novel, enjoyable for the sake of being enjoyable, the plot is generally reasonable, and the writing is okay. But the emotional line is really not very good, all the good feelings appear suddenly, and all kinds of benefits are given to the tofu. True love is to trust 100% directly from the beginning, and can't write about emotions at all. However, this is a common problem among male video authors. Maki handled it as if she had never seen the world and fell in love at first sight. She was given the speed of light and a solid trust was established inexplicably. Selma also came up with a soft body and a soft touch. She changed clothes directly on the boat. This is a common problem with sexual immorality. Readers can see similar sentences and skip the paragraph directly to avoid wasting time. But at least it's not like a soft porn fandom where all the main female characters are reposted. . . .

The appearance of this original heroine is really unexpected. I thought it was just a trigger point for the plot. She is the kind of passerby who has to die miserably. If you tell me that this is a heroine, I can't accept it.

The writing is okay but the plot has a lot of room for improvement.