You Call Him a Demonic Dao Magnate?

The author must insist on it. There are more than a hundred comments in the comment section of this pineapple bun book, and most of them are scolding, so that he can write it down. We must learn this spirit and never give up 😆

Something is wrong, very wrong. How come this novel has such low popularity? In my opinion, the quality is already on the upper side, and it belongs to the gold-mining level in 💩. Is it because the publicity is not enough? 😥

It's good-looking, but there are too many female protagonists 😚😚😚

Jiang Chi: Xiao Deng, don't take that fw pill. After saying that, he was full of momentum, shocking the opponent, and snatched the third-grade white jade pill from the Caimao young man's hand, and threw a splendid box on him. A small crack was exposed in the box, and a strange fragrance floated out. Caimao opened the box and was shocked to find that it was a fourth-grade white jade pill-blood jade pill!

Like the title, she seems to have no brain. When I saw Li Nanxun in the latest chapter and asked her if she wanted to live forever, she directly said, what if I fall in love with someone one day? When I left, I was thinking, "I actually get along with him." Okay, okay, this is the third-level top master who is rare in the entire world, the mysterious witch that even the elders of Chunyang Sect have headaches and fear, and she is also a sweetheart. Are you sure she is not a love brain? This is the only way female characters can be written, right? There are quite a lot of female characters appearing in this book so far, but the others are all about the same, so you can make your own decision. I can't stand it any more, so I'll take my leave.

Basically every chapter has typos and illogical sentences. It seems that the dissuading effect is too strong.

The first few times I changed pills were too blunt, and the people around me didn't have much IQ. Brainless and not fun enough

Stupid and cool article, I will withdraw it first.

To be honest, this book always makes me feel awkward, that kind of indescribable discomfort hidden in the narration and the inner description of the protagonist, but the main plot line is good. If I just glanced at it, this book would be very good, but I still hope that the author can improve his writing style.

Mainly because I'm most annoyed by this pretentious and bitchy person. Either you are really a demon, but what happens in the end result? The protagonist becomes the light of the righteous path? Give me a plug-in for the Demonic Patriarch? Are you serious? ? If he really walked the devil's path, wouldn't the protagonist be very nice and exciting? You have to be a hypocrite...