The Merits Are All Overflowing. You Say You Are a Foot Doctor?

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In fact, sometimes I feel that the author is setting off for the sake of setting off. Some of the descriptions of the atmosphere and environment are very stiff and cannot be well integrated into the novel. It is good when taken out alone, but it is not suitable for that part of the plot. When I see it, I feel like I can see the author racking his brains to write that scene. It's too It's too hard. I suggest the author read it several times after finishing it and revise it more. Don't just focus on that small paragraph. It will feel a little uncomfortable when you read it, but the overall writing is still very good. This is just my little feeling and suggestion. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better.

In fact, I want to say that the medical way is only attached to the human way. For heaven and earth, it is no different from other hundreds of schools. If the protagonist just wants to develop the medical way, Dingtian will be the same as Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. People can be healed when they are sick, but the heaven and earth are not perfect and cannot heal. If the protagonist only heals people, then the merits gained by the protagonist are just a drop in the ocean to the world. Unless the protagonist finds a way to heal the heavens, he will not go to a place where Taoism is manifested, and the merits are truly immeasurable.

How can you protect yourself if you don't have any cultivation skills?

The most disgusting thing in the world is to discover a good book, but it has just begun

Currently, I see a sword coming, Lan Ke's shadow, it looks good, hold on!

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I originally thought it was a medical article that was down-to-earth, passed down medical knowledge, and helped people in need, but it turned out to be a pretentious article that showed sage in front of people. The protagonist is also a human-shaped treasure, which can cure all diseases in the physical body and improve the qualifications of practitioners. When he meets a woman, he directly asks the protagonist to help her become an innate god. They have known each other for less than half a month, and have met less than twice. As soon as they opened their mouth, they wanted the protagonist's merits and blood to be transformed into an innate god for her like the cow. The plot is full of pretentiousness and slap-in-the-face vibes. At first it feels like pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, but then it becomes a show of holiness in front of people. How to put it, it is very separate from the theme. The author seems to want to write a selfless protagonist who saves the suffering and even uses his own body to mend the sky, so that the spirit and knowledge of the traditional medical sages can be used for the people. But why do you become a person who reveals sacred texts? As long as you meet the protagonist, a scholar inexplicably becomes the Ying Meng Xianchen of Daqian, a person you know in the village becomes Wang Yangming, the enlightened king of Longchang, a little girl picked up in a small village becomes an innate sword body, and then he meets a girl and wants the protagonist to turn her into an innate god. The protagonist directly becomes a treasure-giving boy. The author wants to portray the protagonist as a sage from another world, but it is too unrealistic. Even Shen Nong became the ancestor of medicine after tasting hundreds of herbs. Why did the protagonist directly become a saint by giving merit to heaven for five generations? Is the protagonist Hua Tuo, Bian Que, or Zhang Zhongjing? He just experienced the lives of the five medical sages as a bystander in his dream, so where did the merit come from. It's just a deus ex machina that gives the protagonist a far-fetched reason for time travel and a golden finger. This hook is really big. Even other golden finger upgrade stories from Qidian have experienced the growth of the protagonist from childhood to adulthood, and this protagonist has become a saint at the beginning. The protagonist seems to be a loner with no background, but in fact, his background is so great that he becomes a saint at the beginning, so the protagonist becomes the ultimate second-generation ancestor who was promoted to sainthood by Shen Nong and Tiandao. However, this second-generation ancestor also takes the path of being close to the people, befriending the common people at the bottom, and standing on the moral high ground to point out this otherworldly practitioner. 😅😅😅

It's well written, but always uncomfortable to read. Later I figured it out, it was because of the way of heaven. This Heavenly Dao is like a capitalist. If you have any good things, you must take them away. Don't tell me directly what you do, let people guess. There is no mention of any reward for doing things for him. It just makes you feel that you will be treated well if you work hard. But in fact, it doesn't matter whether you will be rewarded or not. If something happens at work, just push it aside and it has nothing to do with him. Maybe the protagonist is the kind who has great ambitions or great virtues, but I can't stand it. In my opinion, Tiandao in the article has always used money (the protagonist's merit) to do things, but the problem is that this matter is done for Tiandao. It's like what some people said was that he took the initiative to help me, and what does it have to do with me if something goes wrong. Maybe the author wanted to write that the main character's purpose was to seek enlightenment or to promote medical knowledge, but what I saw was that the main character felt that the way of heaven was sick and wanted to cure it.

There is the reality of being in harmony with the Tao, but no foundation of protecting the Tao. Looking at the protagonist, it feels like he is drained of his own skills in the next second. He heals diseases and saves people to accumulate merit, and then comes back again and loses his power again.

The type of relationship with Lan Keqi is a false way of union. After the union, you have to use merit as a fulcrum to use the power of heaven. It is said to be a union, but in fact it is a task given by heaven, and you have to pay the price to use administrator rights.

Traditional Chinese medicine at home... Author, I have a friend who is a little bit secretive. He eats too much in West Africa, and the result...

I never clicked on this title 😅, but I'm just reading it now. It's a great book. Good luck to the author! Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer such fairy-like novels about cultivating immortals. As the same author, although I am just a newbie, I feel that most of the market is filled with resource-grabbing magic-style cultivating immortality or social class-enhancing novels disguised as cultivating immortality.

Yining

The author needs to continue writing, it feels like watching the early stage of Lan Ke

It's refreshing and dense. Basically, there are explosive moments in the third or fourth chapter. I'm worried that it won't be long, so the author needs to pay more attention to the outline.

I suggest the author to read my simulation of the road to immortality, in which there is an important supporting character called Heavenly Doctor. Mainly a medical god

The protagonist is the true Madonna, not the Madonna bitch. She is too short of manpower and has to suck up all the accumulated merits to get things done.

See, first of all, if you don't have any cultivation base, what will happen to your safety in a deformed world? ? ? What you are robbing is other people's business and jobs. Those people are all well-educated and cannot kill you! Furthermore, if a person travels alone in the world, curing diseases and saving lives, how does the protagonist get the medicine? ? Just looking for some weeds? ? No need to concoct various medicinal materials, just take them and use them? ? Can you find just the right ingredients for a medicine in one place? ? ? ?

I found a grass jelly, but it turned out to be a seedling 😭

Forget it, the protagonist has taken on a female apprentice, and the supporting female character always blushes and becomes agitated at the protagonist. Basically, the heroine didn't run away.

The power of merit is of great use. Just earn merit honestly. You are always pretending.

The investment failed, and the good book was ruined

As expected, the eunuch is already a mess.

I have no memory of when I read the book.