Naruto: I Discovered a Parallel World in the Ninja World

After reading part of it, combined with this introduction, why do I feel that after Minato was bullied, his wives were his daughters? Or maybe you are single but have a bunch of daughters?

Why are you always robbing other people? What the hell does Naruto mean?

The author's idea is very good, I just tried it, but I don't have the ability to write it. It depends on the author.

The writing style is a bit immature, but you can also see that it is growing, and the ideas are good. Currently it looks like a group portrait article.

With your protagonist's strength, I doubt whether the protagonist can protect Kushina. Given Konoha's current situation, unless the protagonist has the strength of the first generation in the future, you won't even think about protecting Kushina. But I kind of don't understand how the protagonist can have the strength of the first generation?

How can I put it, it's not surprising that the eunuch collapsed. The early stage of this book was indeed good, and there were some minor problems that wouldn't dissuade me from quitting it. However, things started to go wrong after the release of Xiang Liu. It was very strange to forcefully insert things from the Book of Mountains and Seas into Naruto. In addition, the author insisted on debating that Naruto is also a lot of Chinese culture. At that time, I was too lazy to talk to him. The author continues to debate, and I will continue to subscribe as long as the author can read it. If I can't stand it, forget it. To be honest, with an energetic author who is always in line with readers, most of the time, apart from boasting that he can listen, everything else is false. It is a waste of time to insist on arguing. It is better to speak with facts. For fan fiction, the first principle is to respect the settings of the original work, including but not limited to characters, worldview background, historical lines, etc. Secondly, the first taboo is Taiyun or too many secondary settings added by oneself. For most authors who are not strong enough in writing, the secondary settings they add are limited to the protagonist, such as the protagonist's plug-ins and backgrounds, which can reflect the specialness of the protagonist. However, if you insist on adding some characters and background settings that have not appeared in the original anime, it will affect the sense of substitution. This is like writing a Journey to the West fanfic, and your protagonist It's okay to practice the Tao of the world that covers the sky, and it's okay for the protagonist to teach the characters in Journey to the West the Tao of the world. But in the world of Journey to the West, it would be very inconsistent if you suddenly entered a demon respecting tower, and the heavenly general Fei Peng. On this basis, if you messed with someone with a much different style of painting, such as Saiyan Kakarot, Vegeta, etc., It would be even more outrageous, and it would make people feel like a ray on their backs and a lump in their throats.

You know, I have been a member of the Boguang Party since the Warring States Period

The story is interesting, but not very interesting, and the protagonist is just a bystander.

After reading it, I am still unsatisfied. I hope the author can maintain his writing style. This work is worthy of countless orders!

If these two came to the world of Naruto before Kaguya Otsutsuki, then would there be another legend of a horn-haired immortal in the world of Naruto? So how will the Naruto storyline develop next?

The subject matter is good, and the writing is also very good, but the story writing is a bit messy, especially in the early stages. For example, there is a plot chapter in which Mito Uzumaki has already met Tsunade, and Minato brings Kakashi and the others to play cards together. However, in the next two chapters, Mito suddenly becomes someone who has just returned from wandering outside. It is very strange to read Tsunade, a granddaughter who is almost the same age as her and the granddaughter of another world meeting for the first time. Also, the protagonist At one moment it looks like a native character in the Naruto world, and at another it adds a time-travel setting, and then it is patched to be a time-traveler who has traveled through time in his teens. It also feels quite interesting here. Personally, I feel that traveling through time as a teenager is not as suitable as a native character in the Naruto world. The above is my personal opinion after reading it. Maybe I think the imperfections are just right for others. Overall, the quality of this novel so far is still online.

I just want to know why it is so difficult to protect the village!

Looking at the introduction and the name of the protagonist, it shouldn't be that the protagonist has lost his beloved, Minato belongs to heaven.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking🙂🙂🙂

Kushina's nine-tails chakra mode should be very nice 😁

Just out of temper, I have collected this novel

Why is it obviously faster to seize a Uzumaki woman to improve her bloodline and seduce a man? Males can produce dozens of offspring a year, while females can produce just one.

Watching it makes me excited😁

It's so fun to watch Danzo's old dog eat up. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's update.

It's getting more and more exciting 😁

Looking forward to the plot between Itachi and Fugaku😁

This is the end of the book. I'm worse than you