Zongwu: I Awakened the Love Aid

It's the same problem, it feels good and feels bad at the same time. Isn't that disgusting? The contradiction between Fang Yi and Fang Yi at the beginning is so great. People have greenlit you and let you choose to save or not. You can save both. You don't want the world to compete with the Great Compassion, right? Or you can just have two options. Don't choose one that is particularly pleasant and then you don't choose it. Isn't this disgusting to readers?

Okay, how green-headed can a person be to come up with such a plot? When you are no good, there is obviously a best choice, do nothing to save yourself, there is no danger and you can gain the most. As a result, you put yourself in danger for someone you just met and got something that you will definitely not use in the future. You don't even have to think about the Chiba Hand, you know that it will definitely not be used a few times in the future. Pure TM and no brains

Don't want the gift of Yin Yang and Great Compassion? What does Fang Yi have to do with you?

Until I read Chapter 15, I only knew that it was a mixed martial arts world, but I had no idea how the forces in this world were constituted. Could it be that when the Qing Dynasty unified the world, people from other dynasties all changed to money rat tails in this book?

After writing so much, isn't it just a licking dog pretending not to be a licking dog?

This is my first time writing a book. If you have any comments, please bear with me.

This system for the protagonist is only useful for supporting female characters. Shen Bijun, Huang Rong and the like are probably not available. It is too low. It's really not as good as a master of stealing fragrance

Love should be two-way, so the title of your book Licking the Dog is more appropriate.

Not enough, not enough at all🙂

Two chapters a day is too uncomfortable. Can you update 20 chapters a day?

The protagonist is still attached to Prince Mu's Mansion, so there is no need to directly trick people to death. And isn't it just falling in love and breaking up? It's a big deal. Is this going to kill someone? It's totally unnecessary. How much do you take a woman's opinion when you call her a licker? Isn't it normal to change one's heart? It's really unnecessary. Even if they break up, they are still friends who have grown up together. Is it too much to just cut off the relationship and kill someone?

It's pretty good. It's not very big, but it's enough. Ignoring some illogical places, this is the first time I've seen the taste of The Master of Stealing Beauty 😏. I hope the author will work hard!

I didn't dare read the novel after reading the comments.

Chapter 3 Just pull the big one and look at it with a hammer

My opinion is that the picture above is too ugly.

If it's the third chapter, choose the third option and keep this style, then it will probably be both a showy operation and a source of conversation... Of course I gave it up.

Chapter 29. . . Poison causes death. . In the love system, you can trigger rewards by dating a girl. There is no danger and there are many rewards. . What the hell is the plot that triggers you to go to Doll Villa to be an undercover agent? . Do they know you well? You act as an undercover agent. . 🙂

How to say? Normally, I have read too much. After seeing this kind of Cao thief type, I really want to continue reading 😌 Shen Bijun, Ah Jiu and the others are all in the stage of liking their original male protagonists (but their minds have been made up, but their bodies are still pure). It is somewhat novel to watch the protagonist get into his hands bit by bit 😏 As for Fang Yi, some readers actually find it difficult to accept this kind of heroine. After all, she was originally theirs, but she was poached and then poached back. This is a minor drawback. I can barely ignore it because yours is the best among the recent martial arts fics, so I can barely ignore it, as long as I ignore Fang Yi's little naughty points. The whole book is quite excellent. Good luck to the author! !

Deducting wild words? The author made too many typos

Come on, it's a bit like a master of stealing love, and the protagonist is more courageous and decisive, more points

Come on, author, this chapter is quite interesting. In fact, there is no need to worry about Fang Yi in the front, it is a small poisonous point, and it will be better in the back. I have watched a lot of Pure Love, and occasionally I watch this kind of NTL (note, not NTR), which is quite interesting. Moreover, the heroine does not have a deep relationship with the male protagonist of the original work. It is just a girl's vague affection for the people around her, so it doesn't feel too shocking. I'm really looking forward to how the protagonist will pry the girls over. It's actually a bit too much to say that the protagonist is a bitch. After all, the protagonist is still unknown. The male protagonist of the original work has also appeared next to the heroine. If the protagonist wants to pry them over, he must get close to them and get their attention. I would like to add that the protagonist is not a puppet of the system. When making choices later, he will follow his own heart and not choose any option given by the system. I think this is something that many system novels cannot do.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style needs to be improved.

It's pretty good, why is it so bad?

It's exciting to write about greenness like stealing fragrance. Don't be so submissive as to not dare to write openly even if you think about it.