Peninsula: I'm the Girl Group's Driver

I copied it for more than two hours. I haven't written in a long time. It's very ugly. My brother just looked at it. But I used to make do with writing because I'm at work now and I don't write much. Not finished. You can check it out in the post circle

Where are the ladies?

There are still more than ten chapters left to read. The more I read, the more I read intermittently. It feels like I have to watch the video for a while and then come back to read it. I will give you a few comments. I hope it will be helpful to your next book. If you feel something is wrong, just smile and don't take it to heart. Today I will go from the first chapter to the end in one breath. After reading it, I can see your writing status because I am used to reading it. From the beginning, I can see that you are passionate about this book. You have paid great attention to the pictures, videos, materials, and plot design. However, because of the writing techniques and the sense of satisfaction, your grades are not good. You doubt that you Your own hard work is worthless in the eyes of others. In order to cater to readers, you gradually care more and more about other people's opinions. But the more you change the plot, the worse your grades become. You feel bored and tortured, and lose your original enthusiasm and original intention of writing a book. I always feel that what you lack is not advice and Improvement is about returning to the original intention of writing a book. The first book should be a feedback from the soul, a beautiful dream that the author as the creator weaves his own. The most important thing about the first book is not the results, but to find a group of readers who can match his own brain waves. In this case, having such a group of talents who will identify with you will give you the confidence to persevere in your future writing path. Come on, I hope you can persevere. Your emotional descriptions and stage paintings are very brilliant, but your writing style weakens this part of your ability. , The writing method that is biased towards film and television leads to the weakening of inertia and excitement. For example, your writing method is like a romantic drama. It pursues the overall plot arrangement of the story so much that the perception of the main line is not strong enough. The description of the specific picture is that the protagonist is interacting with the heroine. The next second the screen switched to the supporting characters. Although the overall view is fine, the novel is updated chapter by chapter rather than connected. I was attracted by the plot and waited for the next chapter to be updated. As a result, I finally updated it tomorrow and did not catch the climax of the previous chapter. You can pick it up later. Otherwise, the enthusiasm will not be so high, and then it will enter a cycle. The slower you read, the less enjoyable you are used to it, and then the worse the results will be, the less you want to write and the slower you will read. Skipping is like watching a drama. In the scene where the protagonist does not appear, we will choose to skip and speed up.

As shown in the picture, I wrote down my current thoughts on the career line of the male protagonist, as well as my thoughts on the important female protagonist. There is also a thank you list, rewards, monthly tickets, recommendations The heroine was directly modified to 3 to 4. Yuan, Na, and An were originally added, and they directly bought stocks and collected them as extras.

Beautiful pinch

The most beautiful place in the world

Momo

Yubao in the 16-year period

sana

Cute pinch