This Martial Saint Loves Helping People

Never let a character who is much more powerful than the protagonist appear early... If the protagonist is seen through and cannot be defeated, it will only strengthen the feeling of powerlessness. This is extremely poisonous. Be careful.

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Shennong: Run quickly, rubbish novel

It's too messy, and it's so overwhelming, it's so boring.

Except for the hypocrisy, the protagonist is pretty good.

The author is great. I followed Niangzi's book and would like to share my views. First of all, I still think you have quite a lot of self-control. After reading your remarks after finishing this book, you exercise regularly and have strong execution ability. You can finish the book all the time. I think this is one of the most basic and important advantages of being an author. Speaking of the novel itself, I can see that you still want to write some of your own stories and your own creativity. But there are some areas where we are really not sure. Today, cool novels are still popular. Try not to suppress the male protagonist. Suppression can only be suppressed by the female protagonist, and she cannot suppress it like that all the time. In this regard, I actually suggest that you go to Baidu Tieba YY Novel Bar and take a look. Although YY Bar is said to be more shady, but those suggestions give you a rough look and absorption, and you can most likely avoid writing poisonous points that most readers are not willing to read. Of course, it may be that you can't let go of your figure and don't want to write such mindless and refreshing things. The above are just suggestions. I hope the author will write a better book. 😆

The story is a bit far-fetched if it's not engaging enough. The characterization is too rough and there is no sense of empathy. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

It's boring. It's boring at the beginning. It's not humorous at all.

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What does your book have to do with the eunuch's book next door called Wu Sheng, which is too generous?