The Legend of Qi Tian Conquering Demons

Wow, it's so miserable that no one is optimistic about it. But to be honest, if you write Journey to the West well, it's a master. If it's not well written, no one will read it. This subject matter really tests your writing skills. This is also one of the reasons why almost no one writes about the pure Journey to the West I can only say, don't always criticize new writers who have the ability to write by themselves. When I see garbage or even AI, I say this and that. It's not easy to meet someone who writes with heart and all kinds of censorship. The author just doesn't listen to their hard work. Anyway, it is impossible for Wu Chengen to come out to fight for your copyright After reading your content, what should I say? It is really not in line with the so-called trend But it doesn't matter. I will post it here and write it here, right? Anyway, the book is yours If you haven't finished this one, go to the next one As long as you work hard, you will definitely improve. The second one comes out and changes again Don't think that it's over if you don't succeed There are many ways. There are many websites You are not a master. There are so many problems. Who hasn't had the first time? Lessons from the past Everything is in vain. I have never heard that hard work will be in vain That's a bit much to say. To be honest, if it weren't for your articles, there are often slight changes. I would be too lazy to tell you so much But from the fact that you often modify the articles, it shows that you are working hard. So I will say something I was reading that recently. Anyway, it's Shi Jian or the Great Emperor from Uncle Jiu I kept it for a long time and then I didn't watch it for a few months I watched it again in the past few days. It's also a major overhaul and it looks more comfortable. You think so, you write it here, write it out, right? See if you can sign the contract. If you can sign it, sign it. If you can't sign it, then build up your popularity first. If it doesn't work later, then just hastily finish it. I don't really call you Cao Cao. It's over. I mean, if you don't gain popularity here, just finish writing a plot and then change the website and continue writing. Do you understand? Start now to gain some popularity and attract some reading for yourself. When the time comes, change the website and attract some reading friends to help you rush to read It will definitely be much easier than you are now. Books? Everyone has his own love Of course, if you think what I say is nonsense, just listen to it as nonsense

The most important thing when writing a web article is to properly fill it with water. If you can't learn to fill it with water, you will definitely fail. As long as you read the web article for more than a month or a few days, you will definitely develop the habit of reading ten lines at a time. The more you read, the deeper the habit will be. Therefore, if you write words that are not so popular, it will not only make you spend a huge amount of time on description instead of conception, but also put a huge burden on the author's energy and make the reader feel very, very uncomfortable.

It's so retro, the cologne is younger than you. It can be seen that your literary foundation is very good. There is nothing difficult about writing online articles. You are just making yourself uncomfortable. Make it more difficult for yourself. As for the entire AI, you have to grasp the general direction yourself. Just record it and you're done.

Your writing style is awesome, but you don't know how to write online articles! Which novel have you seen start with a narration?

Find a novel you like, read a few chapters and then write down the general plot of these chapters. Then try to reconstruct it according to your general plot. After writing it out, compare it with the original text. You should get better after doing it a few times. This is a method I came up with because I didn't know how to write novels before, and then I fantasized about writing novels. Although I haven't tried it so far, it should be useful. Give it a try and kick me if it works 🙂

This writing style is too retro. It makes readers tired when you write it, and it has no audience.

I came back from the author's comments in other comment areas. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that the writing is indeed good. I can only vote for recommendation first. Come on, but I still think the author can give it a proper review. If it is written, it is a bit tired 😃😃😃 Come on

You are so awesome. You copied and pasted more than two chapters of Journey to the West.

The writing is a bit retro, and if you read it online, no one will read it very carefully 🙂

Divine Dragon Author: Old Monkey in the Mountain A dragon roars across the sea, two dragon horns support the sky sail The five-toed dragon claws dance wildly, piercing the clouds into the sea and shining the dragon's face Spring comes and exhales silently, entering the grass cloth clouds and swamps all living things Autumn goes to winter and year after year, the true king of the sea is called the dragon

The writing style is there, but the online writing focuses on easy-to-understand, vernacular language.

There is a big problem with this rhythm. Based on the 2,000 words per chapter, your first four chapters have a total of 8,000 words. 8,000 words, written about a bunch of things without information, the original work is 8,000 words, the monkeys learned from Sanxing Cave and came back. This also includes some poems and a lot of landscape descriptions, minus 1,000 words, which is 7,000. Written 1. The Monkey King is born. 2. The Monkey King enters the Water Curtain Cave. 3. The Monkey King listened to the apes and asked them to learn the art of immortality. 4. The Monkey King went to Nanzhan Buzhou to wander the streets, imitating people's words and dressing up in people's clothes. 5. The Monkey King went to Fangcun Mountain in Hezhou, Xiniu to meet the woodcutter. 6. The Monkey King meets Bodhi and pays homage to him. 7. The Monkey King is definitely named Sun Wukong. 8. Sun Wukong rejected the Bodhi Patriarch four times. 9. Sun Wukong learns the art of longevity late at night. 10. Sun Wukong learns somersault clouds. 11. Sun Wukong learns the seventy-two transformations. 12. Sun Wukong shows off in front of his brothers. 13. Sun Wukong was expelled from his master. Look at how dense this story is. Internet articles don't need to be so compact, but your 8,000-word opening must have at least 6 coherent stories. If you are generating electricity for love and do not consider signing a contract, the above can be regarded as fart. ……

When writing a novel, you have to be steady, update without interruption, use less narration, finish this book, and just finish the next one.

The writing style is ancient. The plot in the first volume was barely interesting. There are also typos in sentence segmentation and need to be corrected. The second volume has been getting better recently, which is okay. Is the author's main focus on refining the plot of Journey to the West? Don't be blamed if you guessed wrong. Anyway, so far so good. I just don't know if you can sign a contract if you write like this. Anyway, keep going.

I said, Lao Tie, you want to write 1,000 chapters, how do you name this chapter?

I read three chapters briefly. The writing style does feel a bit like the original Journey to the West, but it is still acceptable to me. I just feel that if there are too many pure classical Chinese introductions such as "Fu" in long paragraphs, it will be quite dissuasive to many people. As for the plot, the main feeling is that there are few buttons and not many memorable points. However, this may also be due to the division of chapters. Things in several chapters seem to be included in the same chapter, which seems a bit "long-winded", because if you want to follow the continuously updated online articles, it is necessary for readers to keep looking forward to the plot of the next chapter. Another point is that although we are writing about the theme of Journey to the West, the first few paragraphs are not significantly different from the original work, and they do not show their own characteristics. Most people should be somewhat clear about the main plot of Journey to the West, which causes readers to read the first few paragraphs very quickly or even skip reading. At this time, there are many designs in the first few chapters similar to the "fu" I mentioned earlier. People may be impatient because they find it familiar and read it over and over again. As a result, they are given content that is more difficult to understand. This design is quite discouraging. Perhaps some small changes can be made in the content arrangement, because the first few chapters of the online article are considered important decision-making parts for readers, and the current design may not be very beneficial to readers. I also saw many different voices in the comment area. I hope that the author can find his own rhythm and state, and cannot be controlled by readers. He can make adjustments based on the most basic ideas. It would be best if you can continue writing. If you can't continue writing, you can learn valuable lessons and perform better in the future. I'll add it to the bookshelf first and wish the author a prosperous literary career!

Isn't this just copying Journey to the West😅