I Laughed Out Loud, the Whole Forum Said I Exceeded the Standard

You might as well say that the physical potential of the human race is relatively low. Where did you put the slime kobold goblins? There are a lot of them that are worse than the human race.

If you don't consider strengthening the human race in the later stage, after all, no game will deliberately weaken the full value of the race, and players will choose a weak race to rank.

In the human sewers, if you put the kobold goblins there, you might as well divide them with bronze and black iron.

No, author, have you really never considered the protagonist's IQ? I've eaten so much and don't have a long memory.

I don't understand why the protagonist's bow and arrow skills have declined. Is it age?

It's right to be cold. An online game must be written exactly like reality. Not to mention that the NPCs in it have independent thoughts. You can still be naked in it and be scared to death when you encounter stronger monsters. Why don't you write about Sword Art Online?

What a classic virtual web article, it seems like we are back ten years ago

You can travel into the game world, but you still suspect that the game world is fake? ?

The taste of ancient online game writing

The protagonist is always startled, and instead of taking the time to explore the situation on the first day, he sacrifices early progress and goes to sleep, which is not very smart.

If you are not a reader of the book, haven't you read the introduction? Isn't this just mindless writing? I have no idea, what else can I say whether it is well written or not.

For fear of retaining readers, I will only write about disgusting things.

You don't even mention the level limit or the number of other professions in the skill bar, but you just say that the human race is weak. I really can't understand it. Each level of 5 skill columns is 1-3 points less than other professions. If others only have 20 skill columns or less, it will be enough to earn just 5 passives. As long as the level is not too easy to upgrade, it will be 80 to 100 in one go, and the attributes will not be much.

Although this type of online game novels are no longer mainstream now, I still hope there will be a few good ones.

The taste of the online game novel is okay, but it feels like the protagonist doesn't know that he only has one life. It's a bit too floating and not stable enough.

It's okay, take a look at the back, just don't make the panel too detailed and keep it simple.