Konoha: Awakening of the Zanpakutō Starts with Senbonzakura

You are like Senbonzakura! You just have to specialize! ! ! If you get to the level of Peak Byakuya, and then get a Hongyoku, or a Star Explosion, it won't be a problem. What's the point of getting so many Zanpakutos? ?

Every Zanpakuto is very powerful, but people who write books like this want to write a little bit about each one, and then it becomes a hit. You might as well create one yourself.

Most of the fanfics in Death God Changing Worlds have the protagonist holding multiple Zanpakutō. This routine is also played by the official Death God. Many book friends like to say that the Zanpakutō is the embodiment of the soul, and one person holding multiple swords is inconsistent with the setting. Therefore, it is better to directly set the protagonist to start with Yanluo Kadenen (nothing) Side effect version), this thing released in the official novel can imitate all Zanpakutō. If you feel that the progress is too fast, add a weapon spirit and a training space to the Yanluo Kageden. Only when the proficiency of that sword is enough can it be imitated with the Yanluo Kageden. The settings are all alive, and it makes sense. Who wants the four nobles to fix the bug in Yanluo Jingdian after the official thousand-year bloody war is over?

When I saw Kakashi and Obito saving Kakashi and Obito, it was quite funny. They were obviously rescuing people, but there was no sense of tension at all. They insisted on filling the cup, saying that they would try their abilities without using the Zanpakutō, and then they beat them up and immediately opened the Zanpakutō to kill others in seconds. They looked like clowns, but they were still king. I felt that this part was not so embarrassing whether it was using Kidō to complete the second, or directly releasing the Zanpakutō. One second I said I want to try it on my own, and the next second I said, "Save me Zanpakuto..." And the previous article also gave me the feeling that the protagonist is a masochist, and he won't understand it until he is beaten a few times and feels uncomfortable.

What more messy Zanpakutō is there, omniscient and omnipotent 🙂

I don't understand why you worship the Hokage as your teacher, and you can't learn ninjutsu. Are you trying to learn how to be a conspirator? Or do you want to learn from Aizen, and then turn around and stand in the sky?

Post and write what you want. If you look at the comment section, there is no operation and maintenance. Serious literature will be scolded all over the Internet, including the palace of literature. Isn't it bullshit?

I feel that it lacks a bit of vividness, and the protagonist has a sense of distance, as if he is reading a functional history book, not a novel. Many events can still be unfolded. It is a bit fast to solve the previous problems and provide more details. Apart from these, it is very interesting to watch. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development and more detailed plot characterization. Good luck to the author!

The introduction is so stiff, and you also remembered that dance shouldn't be something similar to modal particles 🤔 How come you are really transformed into the King of Dance now? So abstract. This should be similar to what you want to say. Or, fellow Taoist, please stay and start like this.

The description of the protagonist's character is too dry, and the protagonist's strength is also unclear. The plot feels choppy and stiff, and it is very tiring to read more than fifty chapters. The main problem is that the character description ability is too poor, except for the protagonist, who is a simple-minded robot with a single personality.

It's not bad. I've seen the latest chapter. The narrative style is very comfortable, plain and a little passionate, like a breeze blowing, refreshing but not violent, and not tasteless like boiled water. Personally, I feel good about it. Some of the flaws in the settings are not enough to cover up the advantages.

As expected of a younger brother who is good at shooting 50-50, are you really good at shooting at 40-60? I have read fifty or sixty chapters so far, and every time I show off by being beaten by ninjutsu and taijutsu, taking some damage, and then using my Zanpakutō skills to kill randomly, everyone boasts of being invincible, but in the end, except for the Zanpakutō, the individual protagonists are all 40 or 6 😅

I always feel that the compatibility between Death and Naruto is not very high.

I just read Chapter 9, and I don't know why I feel a little tired.

The author's personal consciousness is too strong, and most of the original personalities of other characters in the novel have been covered up.

On the battlefield, it is better to use a bottle of swastika. The most labor-saving thing is this knife. Let your teammates wait behind you and go up to open the bottle yourself. At the end of the swastika, you will send a signal to your teammates to come over and finish.

The recent plot makes me a little uncomfortable I got along well with Shizune before Suddenly Lin threw herself into her arms like this If the plot of the original work was destroyed, it would be acceptable But it is really abrupt... Again, this is currently I personally think this book is poisonous But there are actually many exciting parts in the front Especially this is the only book that I personally think handles Danzo the most brilliantly at the moment It really depicts the difference between the reason why the third generation is the third generation and the reason why Danzo is Danzo.

Everything else is fine, but the author of the Naruto timeline cannot control it, or is not rigorous at all.

His fighting mindset is extremely naive, he doesn't know who gave him the courage, and he likes to physically resist Ninjutsu. Is there a steel skin? Is there super speed regeneration? After getting the Flowing Blade, you can cremate yourself a dragon for free.

The writing is very delicate, and the dirty talk of the God of Death fits well with the plot. It's just that... The emotional description is a bit awkward, and it feels like a social person trying to crush an elementary school student. To put it bluntly: How can we fall in love if the worldview, power level, and dedication of the two parties are not at the same level?

It's so pretentious. What is the author pretending to be? What is the protagonist pretending to be? Remove it. It's so poisonous.

I think there is no point in having too many knives. A knife that can be played well can still be invincible. Nowadays, AI novels are not unavailable. The author should have a little imagination and create a weapon of his own. The world view of fan novels is built, and the author needs something of his own.

On the shelves, that's it? I feel that the author really wanted to finish the book, but the subject he chose was too easy to collapse, so he tried his best to suppress the book. However, there was a problem with your planning, or you overestimated your business capabilities and prepared the book before it was put on the shelf. As a result, when it came time to purchase the first subscription and monthly passes, there was no inventory to support it. It's quite rare to see so many products with the same theme on the shelves, so keep up the good work! I'll wait for a while

It's the smell of Shura Field, please update soon!

There are too many Zanpakutō and they look gaudy.

All I care about is who are the heroines?

The most unsatisfactory thing is that the protagonist is often arrogant and pretends to be Sabei, and then uses any Zanpakuto in a mess, but it can still be watched.

Why is Hatake Shirogane Senbonzakura and not Hyōrinmaru? This is the standard version of Shirogane.

My personal suggestion is that as an adult who has traveled through the past in the era of the explosion of knowledge, there should be no shortage of knowledge about kings and domineering, but I just don't care about my personal feelings. Later book friends should not be affected by the comments. Read it for yourself, and read it based on your personal preferences.

The writing is actually quite good, and the writing style is quite delicate. Occasionally, it feels a bit watery when it goes off the rails, but it's not offensive. In the early stage, the daily routine and the battle in the Rain Ninja Village were handled very well. When it should be subtle, it should be refreshing. However, the plot rhythm before it was released was a bit too discouraging. The third war went to the battlefield. First, I wanted to show off my coolness without having to worry about being slapped in the face, and then I tried to show off my temper. Then, including the author's leave stamp, the male protagonist actually fought with his own people for 12 chapters! The key is that one chapter is written in one day. I compared it with my comrades on the battlefield and it took me 12 days to finish it... When I read a book, I can accept the author's poor word count, but I can't accept the author's delayed number of days. It doesn't matter how many words you have in a plot, as long as the time is not too long, I can accept it. I wasn't interested in reading it later. The story was indeed good and the writing was good. But the book with so many words was not popular. There is a reason why the author has not been able to upgrade to level 2. Come on.