The Martial Path to Immortality: Starting as a Border Guard
长生武道：从边关小兵开始
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- Completed
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- 1.0M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
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Has the author written too many urban novels? Chapters two and three. They're about to go to war, and the supporting characters are so arrogant—aren't they afraid of being stabbed in the back by their teammates, or are they afraid of being shot in the back? The supporting characters they've written are mentally unstable.
This military camp doesn't look like a military camp at all, it's more like a martial arts school. What military camp is so free, with only one day off a week and a separate kitchen? They don't even have to train every day, they're free to do whatever they want.
What the hell is this?! All those achievements and he's still just a lowly soldier? What the hell are you doing?!
I've heard this from someone, so please accept it as a token of my respect! It's definitely not bad, but after reading it, I suddenly realized what a talented writer is, and unfortunately, you're not one. Overall, it doesn't have many flaws, but it's not exactly good either. I suggest you write more and see how it goes. Keep it up!
It's bizarre. Why haven't ordinary people heard of anything bizarre, and why doesn't the imperial court have any means to check it? If someone is invincible, what's the point of their existence? It's all become bizarre; writing it like this now is really awkward.
The author claims to want to write something, but lacks attention to detail and originality in setting. It's essentially a blatant copy of several other books. For example, the author mentions a 5-tael blood-nourishing soup in the barracks, 18 taels for a new recruit risking their life on a mission, and 80 taels for killing three bandits near the barracks market (the author notes that one would…
It's alright inside the military camp, but the scenes involving provocation and robbery outside feel a bit forced.
The writing is mediocre and lacks appeal.
Just like a child, if someone says they won't help someone in danger, you won't help them either. At worst, you won't help them if they're in danger either. But then they turn around and say, "You seem to disagree," and the other person immediately draws a knife and attacks. Why bother? You should know that a dog that bites doesn't bark, and the same goes for people.
It's all the same old formula, one cliché after another.