The Martial Path to Immortality: Starting as a Border Guard

Has the author written too many urban novels? Chapter two, chapter three. It's time to go to the battlefield. Is the supporting character so arrogant because he's not afraid of his teammates stabbing him in the face, or because he's not afraid of his teammates shooting cold arrows? The supporting character is written with an abnormal mind.

This military camp is not described as a military camp but like a martial arts gym. Whose military camp has such freedom as five-day rest and an independent kitchen. If you don't train yourself every day, you have free reign.

What a chicken thing! Having accomplished so much, are you still just a small soldier? Play with fur!

If someone comes here, please accept it first as a token of respect! The writing is definitely not bad, but after reading it, I suddenly realized what a talented author is. Unfortunately, you are not. If you want to talk about the faults of the whole article, there are not many faults, but if you want to talk about the good points, it is really not very good. I suggest you write more and see what happens next. Come on!

Weird, why haven't the people heard of Weird, and the court has no means to check and balance it. Since he is invincible, does that person still have any meaning in existence? It's all weird. It's embarrassing to write it like this now.

He also said that he wanted to write something, but there was basically no homework on the details and no new ideas in the setting. It was basically copied from a few books. In addition, the blood nourishing soup in the barracks was 5 taels, the recruits went on missions to fight to the death for 18 taels, and the three bandits near the barracks market were killed for 80 taels (who are the people you can often meet next to the barracks market? An officer can collect more than 80 taels. It is self-evident who he must meet. In addition, it is self-evident. There are basically no people acting alone on the outer border, and the villagers are also young and strong in the village. They go out in groups), and the recruits in preparation for war can enter and leave the nearby market at will (it is also said that the military law is strict, but the more stringent it is, the more no one dares to let them go alone, and no one can bear this responsibility.) In addition, beef can be eaten freely in the market, and the price is based on the price. There is also a shortage of cattle outside the border, and pepper is sprinkled. These are all flaws in the details. Of course this is an online article~, ugh

It's okay inside the military camp, but once outside, the plot involving provocation and banditry is a bit stiff.

The writing is average and not attractive.

Just like a child, you won't save someone if someone says you are in danger. At worst, you won't save him if he is in danger. Then you seem to be dissatisfied with the backhand, and you just pick up the knife and chop him. Why bother? You must know that a biting dog does not bark, and the same goes for people. It is difficult to guard against a kid. If you don't like him, you will have many opportunities. If you find an opportunity to hit him with a sap, kill him directly. If you are angry, you will just scratch him with a knife. You must write like this, like a mentally retarded person?

Write old routines, clichés one after another.