You're All Reborn, Don't Have Sex with Anyone

The second picture violates the title and is gone.

If I remember correctly. Chapter 15. Only half a day has passed in the book. Also this Chapter 15. An entire chapter is devoted to two supporting characters eating. The water can't be this watery either. It was my expectations that were too high. It seems that I am not worthy to be a reader of your book. Slipping away.

It's so ordinary, I couldn't stand the first three chapters.

It doesn't look good without plug-ins, it's too poor

It's well written, but it's a bit shaky at the end. It doesn't look like a reborn person who has suffered hardships. I only see the face of a nouveau riche.

With only seven posts, I know there are very few people reading it.

I feel that having hundreds of girlfriends at the beginning is quite outrageous (under normal concepts). The protagonist should leave a stereotype impression on people, but in the plot, it seems that whether it is Bai Yu or Chen Miao, Gao Xu doesn't care that the protagonist has hundreds of girlfriends. At the beginning, it is written that the protagonist has a previous life in a parallel time and space. It has not explained the cause and effect experience of the previous life, and how he traveled through time and was reborn. And this high school cafeteria has a menu of more than 30 yuan, which is a bit inconsistent with a normal high school (? Where are you from?). In my high school (2023), the vegetarian dishes were 2 to 3 yuan, the meat dishes were 4 yuan, the rice was 2 yuan, and the soup noodles were 8 yuan (you can add 2 yuan + sausage or braised eggs) The protagonist asked Bai Yu to organize his notes for him, without considering whether it would affect Bai Yu's study. It is enough to briefly mention it in the plot to express his concern for Bai Yu, instead of just treating her as a tool (like the kitten on the charity road, forcibly exerting his sympathy for Bai Yu's family situation, without considering whether the method is appropriate). He could use more details to reflect Bai Yu's personality traits such as self-esteem, as well as the protagonist's carefulness, and carefully maintain her fragile self-esteem. Mock examination of physics, Bai Yu is 93, the protagonist is 92. First of all, regardless of how many knowledge points the protagonist still remembers when he is reborn, one from the bottom, in just a few days (relying on notes), got similar results to Bai Yu, who was in the top 5 of the grade (he didn't even practice a few questions). The old class did not suspect cheating but praised him instead. It's okay to improve your grades in a new life, but you've been a little off the mark in the past few days. The protagonist was a little impulsive towards Zhang Jian (it is understandable that young people are impulsive. As someone who has lived a new life, you can use some more ruthless and covert means to warn him, instead of acting like a fool to destroy your impression in the eyes of others. And what will Bai Yu think?) Since you had a very bad stereotype before, it should be to gradually complete a label change (if the protagonist takes a direct path, just pretend I didn't say it) When you are a blogger, attract traffic and create topics, you can reach 100,000 fans in one day, which is too fast. I have also played on site B (2,000 fans in 8 months, and there are many who have had 100,000 views), and I have also seen tens of thousands of fans increase in a week. It is actually quite difficult to attract traffic without a fan base, so you have to take your time.                                                                                        Summary: When you see it now, you give me a very impatient feeling. I can't wait for the protagonist to make a lot of money, improve his self-ability, and progress in the relationship. There is no cyclical and gradual process and emotional warming. I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry.                                                                                                                 did not come out.

The character design is not good. After watching the beginning, I have no interest in continuing.

This white jade is very well written. Go for this white jade. Collected. A small reward. Support it.

Although the writing style is immature, I think it's quite interesting. Come on