For Peace Across the Land

If you don't have the writing skills, then stop worrying about your political intrigues. The political schemes in your book are so ridiculous they almost make people laugh. I flipped through to chapter 60 today, and then noticed the latest chapter only showed the defeat of the prime minister. Seriously, if you don't have the writing skills, don't write it; otherwise, it'll just be filler.

The 8-year-old protagonist is constantly pushing the boundaries, and occasionally reveals a touch of vulgarity.

Women, women, all women! How can you possibly write about so many women when the main character is only eight years old?

Born into wealth and power, rebelling against the powerful – a fantasy version of Hou Liangping.

The age setting is too young; these are all eight to eleven or twelve-year-olds, yet their thinking is remarkably mature when it comes to scheming and plotting. They just don't act like children.

I'm only two years old, I can't understand the eight-year-old protagonist.

It's incredibly illogical. The protagonist starts plotting at age 8, and could be considered a time traveler, but what about the female lead? In reality, what adult would care about the opinions of an 8-year-old? It's so awkward to watch. Dissatisfied.

If I invest 10,000 yuan at the start, will I be able to break even?

It's not bad, but isn't the protagonist too young? It gives me the feeling of watching a cartoon when I was a kid and the elementary school student saving the world 😅. Also, it's supposed to be a martial arts world, so it's absurd that the protagonist's father, who is a nobleman, doesn't allow him to practice martial arts.

I'm speechless. The revenge plot at the beginning took almost ten chapters to develop.