For Peace Across the Land

If you don't have that kind of writing power, don't always worry about your temple scheming. Seeing the temple scheming in your book really makes people laugh. I turned it to chapter 60 today. I looked at the chapter names and found that I defeated the prime minister in the latest chapter. If you really don't have the writing power, don't write. Even if you write, it will always be sluggish. The characters' strategies in the book are all at the level of an elementary school student, and the protagonist's self-righteous calculations are also at the level of a pure elementary school student. Let's talk about the first strategy. Under the emperor's feet, the villain's way of retaliating against the protagonist is to send people to destroy their property. Then the protagonist's super strategy is to drag someone with a better background to smash them back. The purpose is to let the enemy know that there is a big boss behind him. Brother, you are not in a third or fourth tier city, under the emperor's feet, you can just find people pretending to be charlatans to blow up other people's industries? The last guy in China who sent troops to lock up Luoyang is still in the bureau. He really thinks that the little thing he wrote has some conspiracy. The enemy is a trap and a spy. People all over the world know that the protagonist's father wants to send it, but the protagonist's father doesn't know anything. He just shouts "I am Qingliu, I am the hope of the country", and then rushes over stupidly? You are so stupid, how can you still achieve that position? To put it mildly, Yue Fei and Hai Rui can be regarded as the most upright officials. Hai Rui's mother is almost starving to death, but Hai Rui's EQ and IQ are only higher than those of corrupt officials. Among a group of corrupt officials, in a corrupt structure, being able to be an "upright official" shows that his ability is very, very outstanding. Look at the father of the protagonist. He has a self-righteous plan to become an upright official leader and the leader of the righteous way. Then all his subordinates are spies. He has no knowledge of the situation and information channels. Even the enemies' grandchildren know the news, but the protagonist's father does not know. Seriously, if you don't have the ability, why are you always thinking about machinations? Do you have the ability? As long as you look at the classic factional disputes in history, you will know how much the Machiavellian calculations you wrote are children's books. There is a fundamental error in your understanding of power, which makes you unable to structure the temple calculations at all. Anyway, the martial arts system is introduced, and the protagonist defeats all methods with one force. This writing is not good at writing plots. Any feudal society is the heart of one person and the hearts of thousands of people. After writing for a long time, the emperor has no picture at all. What do you think the pinnacle of power is?

The 8-year-old protagonist still messes around every day, and even shows a bit of vulgarity from time to time. . .

Women, women, all women! How can you write about so many women for an eight-year-old protagonist? ? ?

Born into a powerful family, rebelling against the powerful, a fantasy version of Hou Liangping

The age setting is too young. Children between eight and eleven or twelve years old, when it comes to conspiracy, their thinking is very mature, but they don't act like children.

I'm only two years old and I can't understand an eight-year-old protagonist.

It's 12% unreasonable. I started planning it when I was 8 years old. The protagonist can be said to have traveled through time. Where is the heroine? In reality, which adult would really care about what an 8-year-old child says? It's really awkward to watch. Not satisfied

If you spend 10,000 yuan at the beginning, you will never get your money back.

The writing is pretty good, but is the protagonist too young? It always gives me the feeling of watching elementary school students saving the world in cartoons when I was a child 😅 And it is also a martial arts world. As the protagonist, the father of the noble protagonist does not allow him to practice martial arts. It is quite outrageous.

I was convinced, and I wrote almost ten chapters of the revenge scene at the beginning.