Pirate: It's Just Fishing, Do You Really Think I'm Your Food?

Raleigh, Loli, this name you chose is very unfriendly to people who listen to books. Always dancing.

It's a bit natural to write it. Are Kaji and Zhiyuan the candidate for general, or are you a relative of the emperor using you to teach the six moves? And the qualifications are so poor? According to what you wrote, they are all at the main school level.

Because it is not easy to say something, the author should update it quickly, otherwise I will copy you and write it myself.

It is recommended to grab the Thunder Fruit and give it to your subordinates. The strength of the emperor's deputy can be upgraded to that of the fourth emperor. He can run fast and deal high damage. He is the first subordinate and the vanguard before fishing.

Most people with few comments won't read it... It feels like the author knows little about pirates, and the tactical arrangements... Are copied from Earth's flintlock tactics... The guns are all different.

A book that I'm not interested in after reading the introduction

After it was put on the shelf, I set the comment handle and received 10 comments. It felt like cutting leeks on the shelf.

😅If you fish, just fish, why give the credit to others?

I hope you guys can give me some data, so I can write this book well. At present, the outline has been completed, and I have a lot of manuscripts on hand, so feel free to collect them and read them later. The author is usually very active. If you have any questions, feel free to write down your thoughts in the comment area! Please give readers a recommendation, monthly pass, and follow-up reading!

In 1494, Hawkeye was around fourteen, Barrett was around sixteen, Enel was around ten, and Menmen was only one year old. .

To be honest, when I first read the title, I thought it was an article with a relatively relaxed atmosphere, but actually looking at the first part, it was fine, it was just a plot about daily fishing but secretly accumulating strength, but at a certain point in the early stage, it changed. The protagonist became more and more inexplicable, and he completely abandoned his personality and turned to a comparison Akainu is radical, more ambitious than Blackbeard, and hates pirates even more than Zefa in the later period. Basically, almost anyone named in the world of One Piece has been tricked, humiliated, and massacred by him. Especially when I saw the latest chapter, it was written to offend fans of the original. If you really like pirates, don't waste your money watching this movie.

When you write about the navy, just write normally. You write about bullshit justice and double standards. No one will say anything to you even if you just go and live a stable life, or if you create factions and warlords, no one will say anything to you.

Didn't the author read it himself before posting... Many words and sentences are used incorrectly, which affects the perception even more than typos It's so uncomfortable to read that it doesn't flow smoothly.

You deliberately wrote about Dysprosium, and then started to disgust people, right? Are you treating it like a licking dog? As a subordinate, she should obey the protagonist when he does things in that village, and later she directly kills the protagonist.

Even if you are a fan, you have to abide by the most basic principles. Your setting is too ridiculous. A lot of 16-year-old colonels and 15-year-old majors? Bullshit setting

Really, this is a novel written in a descriptive way. I am so embarrassed that I feel sick.

After reading Chapter 85, the overall content is pitiful. Perhaps the content of a chapter is just a few lines of dialogue, and the scenes and actions are all "pendants". Without the main body, the pendants are meaningless. If the author's chapter name is more in line with the next theme, I think just looking at the chapter name is enough. Maybe you pick up a penny on the side of the road and give it to the police uncle. Let the author write this story. You can write dozens of chapters. Ten chapters before picking up the money, write a chapter when you pick it up, another ten chapters when you give it to the police uncle, a few chapters for the police uncle's praise, and a few chapters for yourself to criticize and summarize the world. You are invincible enemies the author .

When I saw him, he was lying down and letting the beautiful woman feed him grapes. Why was he always fed grapes? In many books, you lie down and let beautiful women feed grapes. You can even change the fruit. If not, you can just change the position. Are you all taught by a teacher? It's really embarrassing and disgusting to watch too much

Boring, the protagonist is cheating, why can other people's strength be improved quickly?

Pretty rubbish plot (๑˙ー˙๑)

I'll use the boss's space to advertise, thank you! How could Zhuanzhuan Fruit be just a helicopter? Gray, whose soul traveled to the world of pirates, accidentally ate the Devil Fruit originally given to Buffalo. The power that can make anything rotate, in the hands of Forpasta Gray, shined with a different kind of brilliance. Turn the life magnetic field to strengthen the body. Turn the force field to control gravity and fly. Rotate the magnetic field... Become the magnetic field... Boss!

It's fine most of the time, but there are some issues I'd like to point out. First of all, there is a plot issue. CP9 directly kills members of the Navy branch. It is really too abstract. Even if there is a problem, it is not that CP9 can just kill it and the Navy doesn't react at all? It is impossible to kill if there is a problem. Also, the density of the plot is too watery, or in other words, although a lot of words are written, the content is low. There is also something very puzzling. Why do we spend several chapters writing about dragons? These are all characters that everyone knows, but you still have to write a lot of stories, and it's okay if you only use one chapter, but five or six chapters are really a waste and have no meaning at all. And here in CP9, it is boring regardless of logic, because you spent many chapters writing a very boring thing. Also, against Brother Ming, I also like a lot of meaningless descriptions. The final feeling is that the details are inappropriate, the main line cannot be found, and it looks boring.

I haven't read it, but just the title of the book tells me what level it is.

I also read the cabinet novel, Walking 500,000. I read the original text of 20 chapters for myself, something that defies heaven.

This pirate. Is there anything about magic and immortality in this book? Let's do a soul training show

Is it most likely that the author has entered the palace? ? Less than three or four chapters updated in a month or two? ? Is the author still updating?

If you are going to write about pirates in your next novel, I suggest you write something a little more relaxed. I've already thought of the book title for you. Called (I also want to be Luffy's older brother). As for the fruit, you can arrange a fantasy beast species, the form of Sun Wukong. The protagonist's name can be called ABC. D. EFG. Grab the Thunder Fruit in advance and give it to Sabo. Then he took Saab on the stage with him. He pretended to be cool in front of the camera and shouted: We are Luffy's brothers.

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the era of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirates and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?

Wasn't the hurricane fruit eaten by the dragon? You made two hurricane fruits?