Becoming an Immortal Starts from the East Becoming the West

There is no difference at all from watching the original work.

Let's talk about it. They say there are three golden chapters. Sometimes you can tell the clues in the first few chapters of a novel, so I'll also talk about my feelings about these three chapters. 1. It can only be said that I was discouraged from the beginning. It would be too troublesome to travel to a place similar to the main god's space and go around in circles. Of course, the author may have his own ideas or foreshadowing, but for me personally, after reading three chapters, I no longer have the desire to read any more. 2. We are all young people. Let's make an old man knit. Everyone actually hopes that they will enter the world as a strong person, in good health, and have a good sense of substitution. Of course, you don't have to worry about this. But if you describe the protagonist as someone who has lived for decades and ascended, then in the subsequent plot, you have to control the protagonist's thoughts very well. After all, you have lived for many years, and you have seen through all kinds of things, otherwise it will be a poisonous point. 3. And when it comes to the plot, it is now popular to wear soul wear. After all, everyone has some differences about soul wear, so it is better to avoid it as much as possible. I won't say anything else. The way it started didn't suit me, so I had no connection with this book. This review only represents my personal opinion. Everyone has different opinions. On the one hand, it would be my honor to be able to help the author. On the other hand, it would save readers' time so that they can have a general understanding of the book through comments. After all, it's not easy to find novels that I can read now, so I'll say goodbye.

The setting is very good. What's the point of always following the plot? Creating a new plot yourself is innovative. Writing a book is about writing in your own style. The author's writing is very good. Come on!

The version of Wang Chongyang that wears the east and becomes the west is really brave. This version of Wang Chongyang is gay. The memory of the original version is disgusting, but without the memory of the original version, the secret is revealed immediately.

Are you writing about movies and TV series? The protagonist's presence is too low!

The first dungeon was inexplicable. What is the protagonist pursuing? What is the protagonist's involvement in the plot? What is the protagonist's attitude towards each character? Messy

The beginning is inexplicable 😅

My mind was buzzing after reading this introduction! One moment he was Wang Chongyang, the next he was studying blessings, and the next he was a master of heaven? So I feel like our way of thinking may be different and I can't read your book!

After reaching the third chapter, I couldn't hold on any longer and withdrew.

The beginning is just like a movie script. Even the main character says the same thing. It's better to just watch the movie.

Let's not talk about the writing first, the combat power system and levels are a mess. The main character's original world spirit ascended, and he used lotus roots to reshape his immortal body, claiming to be an earthly immortal. Then he was intercepted on the way to the main god space. The Yuan Shen went on a mission to Wang Chongyang, who had accomplished everything, and said that Wang Chongyang was at least an immortal. Then a few outsiders popped up to steal resources, and they were stuck there 😒. You have so little fighting power that you can become a chicken fairy, so why not just go to sleep.

What a mess. I feel like there is a section here and there, and I can't understand it at all. Now Li Yuan is in A Chinese Ghost Story.

I just got interested and you're done? ? So short

Did the author forget to add it? The writing is quite good. It is consistent with the content and background of the original work and at the same time innovates the content and form. It has its own style and characteristics. It is a rare good book

I can't stand the second chapter anymore. Delete the first two and start with the third one.