Tongtian Immortal Clan

I've never understood it. A book is about three million words long, and many authors spend a third of the page on establishing the foundation. Don't you think it's very unreasonable when you write an outline?

I have a suggestion. The space of 10,000 spirit stones in Chapter 16 is expanded by one acre. The expansion of space should be linked to the realm, not the spirit stones. The concentration of spiritual energy is linked to the spiritual stone. This will not make the golden finger perform too well, and there will be room for improvement later.

Really, society is developing, and maybe we have seen too much female boxing in Great America. Today's little fairies really don't have heads. Talking back to why the ancestor of the Lin family faced the sect before dying and left the Three Life Stone? (Just read the first few chapters) It shows that I still feel guilty and regretful So since the woman has always liked the man, why didn't the man marry the woman and start a family together after he gave up his spiritual path? If the concubine is really interested and the man is interested, and both parties are at the same level of qualifications. There must be no problem My guess is that 1. The man has limited qualifications and can only live in the purple house for life 2. The woman can expect the golden elixir or even the Nascent Soul in the future With such a gap, no high-level person in any sect would let two sons be together Some people would say that they can elope and judge the sect... You probably don't know what a golden elixir and Nascent Soul seed means in a world where one person combines great power, right? In a matter of minutes, the man's body was destroyed and his traces were destroyed. It's like you and the woman were your childhood sweethearts. The woman has been in love with you since she was a child. But you are not good at studying and your family situation is also poor. No matter how hard you study, you can only go to a pheasant university... After graduation, you can only find a factory to make screws... And the woman is tall, rich and beautiful, and she is also a top student. She was directly recommended to Tsinghua and Peking University in high school, and she can continue to study in graduate school after graduation... Do you choose to let go? Or should I accept the woman, fall in love with her in high school, and ruin her bright future?

In fact, the author can find some opportunities for the protagonist's family or relatives, so as to avoid readers feeling that the protagonist is dragging the whole family along. In family stories, each has opportunities and supports each other. Best looking.

Why do you think you added emojis? If the baby doesn't eat, it would have been starved to death in its previous life?

640,000 Words and still refining weapons, holy shit. I haven't been able to attack, so I don't know what's so great about refining qi.

It's too childish. Family stories are always written around the protagonist's family. If there are good things, you can't think of the family. When you need it, you know the family.

A family that has been inherited for hundreds of years relies on farming to support itself, and several foundations rely on the shock of a sect's golden elixir to maintain their third-level spiritual veins. The family does not have the combat power of Zifu, and only sees the inheritance of a second-level spirit planter. He doesn't have any of the four skills of cultivating immortals. Is the world of cultivating immortals as peaceful as a child holding gold? It feels like it was written about farming in ancient times. It's not like cultivating immortals. The family's spiritual beast only raised three birds. Planting so many magical medicines, but not raising spiritual bees, will the spiritual butterflies collect nectar and be pollinated?

Chapter 320 is a talent! ! ! !

Alas, I thought I could read it. The tide of monsters is over. What the hell is written? I don't understand watching football. Damn it.

As expected, it is a waste stream, a waste material with five spiritual roots, and cheating requires writing more than 300 chapters to establish the foundation.

The writing was pretty good until the fight against the beast tide. How many chapters did you write later on when you were visiting relatives? There is really no need to talk about everyday things over and over again. The protagonist has yet to build a foundation.

After reading this review for the first time, there is still a charge

390,000 Words, 26 comments. Has the author controlled the comments?

The five spirit roots are already a poison point setting

It's all swords, swords, swords, both villains and good guys use swords. What can't be controlled? Sun Wukong can use a stick to control the envoys and the heavenly soldiers and generals. You only have the sword here.

I always feel that the pig's feet you write are too vague. From the beginning to the end, the impression given to readers is that they only remember his name and what he has obtained. There is no telling the story of getting this thing.

Chapter 87 is simply speechless. I feel like the protagonist's character is a bit broken, or is this just an ambiguous romance or a stud novel?

A hasty ending? . ? That's it? Do I still want to order it all? I remember the author id

The author, the Bloodthirsty Thorn Vine can be used both offensively and defensively, and the Juyuan Tree is arranged at space nodes to coordinate space planting. Void Willow plans to grow into Willow God. The rest of the family will also have adventures when they grow up, especially my sister Chang Ling. How about my great-grandmother accepting a disciple? Haha, I am looking forward to it more and more.

After seeing Chapter 50, let me point out one, thunder attribute spiritual plant, weapon refining inheritance, mass production thunderwood sword

Rare spiritual roots, five spiritual roots!

Well written, please update more

Family, you have missed the eighteenth generation of your ancestors. If it were longer, there would be more.

There are too many modal particles like, eh, hey, ah, etc.

I gave you the monthly pass, Sugeng

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Sorry dear book friends: I have a cold and a fever, and I feel terribly uncomfortable. I need to take two or three days off!

This is a bit too slow. I read Chapter 320, Chapter 720, Chapter 720, Purple Mansion 🤐

Why did the voice of the book change when I started listening to Chapter 79? Several books had this problem before. Is there some problem between the author and the platform or what caused it?