Oscar, the Ever-Changing God King of Douluo

After reading Chapter 115, the only regret is that the heroine doesn't like it. No matter how good your writing is, it can't offset the impact of the original work, because readers all know that what you wrote is just a whitewashed version. Sister Snake is just one level behind in appearance and talent, but you still can't. There is no emotional basis, and choosing to be together is a failure. Even if you choose Ning Rongrong, Hu Liena, or Angel Girl, they are all top-notch. But if you choose a second-rate girl, you still pretend to like her very bluntly and brainwash yourself, but you can't brainwash the readers. Is this true love? It feels worse than arranging a marriage and giving him a random girl. The overall score for the book is 70, which is a bit higher than a few points. It's readable, but it's poisonous. Ma Hongjun can hold it in. Don't be ridiculous. The original book can't be changed in 10,000 years. The technology of the entire continent can't change Ma Xiaotao. You made Ma Hongjun hold it in, awesome, the readers can't hold it in anymore.

Let me tell you the 13 poisonous points of this book 1. The protagonist is Oscar 2. Actively expose the attached soul bone 3. Help Shrek get rich 4. Banzheng Ma Hongjun 5. Treat Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan 6. Refining elixirs to send to teachers and friends 7. Taking the little white tiger to Star Luo to rescue Kitten 8. Recommended Ning Rongrong to Ma Hongjun 9. Successfully misled Tang Xiaosan 10. Destroyed the friendship between Gang and San 11. Intimidated and lured the little rabbit 12. No harem 13. Updated once a day (That's all for now, if there are more in the future, you are welcome to help me follow the lead)

My evaluation is that if the original character is the protagonist, don't mix it up with the same character. Most people will not be able to accept it. You let Ning Rongrong be single and no one said anything about you, but if you blame Ma Hongjun for being single, isn't this hurting her?

The protagonist goes hunting for souls with Zhao Wuji alone, gets the attached soul bone, and then explains it to Zhao Wuji in detail, as if he has been possessed. Don't be afraid of being killed and robbed, this is the soul bone attached to the outside. Hey, Zao Wuji is your father.

The second soul skill is already a bug. Give an example. Tang Shenwang: Undetermined storm. Forcefully stuns the enemy for eight seconds regardless of level. The protagonist takes out the yellow soul ring sausage: Immune to all negative status and restricted skills for five minutes. He said calmly: How will you respond when my second soul skill comes out? It's too strong. It's recommended to cut it down. It's almost in line with the protagonist's level.

😅 Author, your soul skills are all plus versions of the previous work. It feels like bringing into the perspective of a rich man. Shrek is inherently bad. Although it has been downplayed (I hope the subsequent character conflicts will be smoother), some short stories can enrich it.

The protagonist is under a hat, so don't watch Venom.

This introduction is about Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing, and then there is a pure love single heroine Dugu Yan? It's weird

Speechless😅, the mid-level 23 soul power has come out, you are cultivating immortals, do you still have the peak in the late 23rd level?

It finally poisoned me to death. It's a shame I didn't send Ning Rongrong away. Even if 666 is single, I shouldn't send him away. I retreated.

I have just read half of the book. Brother Ma Liang in the book review section really opened my eyes. I don't want book friends to say anything bad about the author. When others use the original book to argue with you nicely and rationally, if you can't say it, they start to curse.

I'm speechless. Can you lick Tang San well? How can you force someone to take the fairy grass? There is really a way to kill him. He went to save Zhu Zhuqing. Dai Mubai said that women are not human beings anymore, they are supplies. What are supplies? You don't understand? You didn't even know to call him when you ran away. It's really funny that you go back to save him yourself. And that one made me laugh. I don't even think about it, I'm only at level 25 and can run so far. He couldn't die inside originally, but when he ran out, he didn't even have his fiancée. If he really wanted to kill, could he escape? Both of them.

Change your name to Time Travel Douluo and I will be Ma Hongjun's dog.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I really can't stand it 1. I suppressed Ma Hongjun's evil fire, and the evil soul master reserve team can train you? What about Ma Xiaotao? The apprentice of the dean of the outer courtyard is not diligent? Are you in your twenties and sixties without hard work and perseverance? It's better to be blocked than to be comfortable. It's better to be blocked like Dou Erma Xiaotao. The evil spirit of the evil spirit master is evil. Otherwise, why would the Wuhun Palace and others suppress the evil spirit as soon as they discovered it? I have read hundreds of Douluo fan stories, and I most agree with "The Ultimate Transmission Terror Beast Stands in Douluo...". 2 A lot of nonsense, with few interesting points and a little strange. No sense. 3 Hundred Years of Whale Glue has been praised by the author to the sky, saying that he has crossed ten levels of physique from Soul Master to Soul Sect (it was level 22 at the time), "????" Do you really think that a nobleman has never eaten it? Can't you find out that after using it to aphrodisiac, your physical condition becomes so much stronger? If it was really effective, how long could it have been hidden? 4 Many of the author's second settings are far from the original work. Since someone else's system is used, it is best to extend it instead of changing the settings thousands of times, which makes people wonder how many original works you have read. 5 I couldn't bear to read other people's book reviews and found out that Ning Rongrong is gone. That's not to say it's impossible. In everyone's established thinking, this is a couple. The protagonist is Oscar, and we readers naturally substitute Oscar. As a result, the whole thing is dead and the wife is gone. Who would be happy? Disgusting person, if you want Yanzi, what's the problem with having two heroines? ? ? ? ?

Licking the original character to the limit, forcibly whitewashing the original character as a bad person

One is Ma Liangdou, the other is Xiaoyao, and the two are big licking dogs. They are looking for a sense of presence under other people's posts.

Is this limited exemption? It fits my view of limited exemption.

This comment section is really speechless. I started talking about him being an orphan and being adopted. The protagonist is now a family member. What reservations do you have about your family? You also go to the medicine garden to pick up girls. Others originally went to the medicine garden. And what age they were at that time. You don't like the good-looking ones now, and this is not part of it. Other people's family members are titled Douluo. There are no sects and other big forces. Their only love is that the protagonist can lick them. What else can you say? You shouldn't be the nanny of the protagonist group, even if you are the best, how about having the Son of Destiny by your side, and you can kill the double standard. If they are arrogant when they first come, I can guarantee that the protagonist will let them die, and he is not a virgin. If you have any idea, after knowing that Tang Hao and the others are gone, don't you just go and take the resources that are rising behind the protagonist? The only thing is that the configuration of this soul ring is too different, and the effect is too heaven-defying, and it feels like a cool novel.

The antonym of pure love is minotaur, not harem. Don't be fooled by those gods.

This author is probably a Shrek fan😅

Born to be incompetent, he gave his wife to Ma Hongjun.

Is this Ma Liang's lost magic pen the author's trumpet? Do it yourself. Wash everywhere

I don't know what the author was thinking. He took a dispensable character and made her a single heroine, but gave up on Ning Rongrong. I can only say that I admire her. If you went to date Gu Yuena, but gave up on Ning Rongrong, you probably wouldn't have so many people complaining. In the original work, the role of Dugu Yan is not as outstanding as Bai Chenxiang. , This can be compared with Meng Yiran, there is no charm at all, and many novels with female protagonists will not even accept Dugu Yan, which shows how dispensable this character is. The main reason why others complain is that giving away a daughter is the second best, but at least you can find a heroine who is better than Ning Rongrong, right?

There is someone in the comment section who has been writing novels, and I can't help but feel emotional about his persistence. It's like being cheated out of money, and you can't accept it. You have to clean yourself up in the comment area while hypnotizing yourself.

A Douluo without self-created soul skills has no soul... I don't know which other device has created a kendo teacher...

Why is this novel so wordy? I feel tired of listening to books. I can listen to a piece of content with similar meaning several times.

It's poisonous and messy. It's best for other people not to touch this kind of thing. If you leave someone single until they die, no one will say anything.

After the 300th chapter, it's all trendy content. If you don't like the clone flow, you can just watch the rest of the plot! Please vote! ! !

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What's the difference between this and the original work? Thinking about it, there are some differences. The difference is that Shrek was whitewashed and the heroine was changed. There is no other difference. They just participate in the competition and then destroy the Spirit Hall.