Martial Arts Time Travel: the Drunken Man

It's not my cup of tea. I'm just complaining.

I thought it was Zhao Wenzhuo's

Doesn't Drunk Man make a water and fire dragon ball?

Some people say that this book is ancient, but in fact it has no essence of Gu Long at all. Gu Long's novels are characterized by sharp short sentences, and a scene can be described with just a few numbers. This book is very long-winded and cannot advance much of the plot in one chapter. Of course, in my opinion, writing style is not a problem, everyone has their own style. I really can't stand the protagonist's character. He doesn't have that ability, but he is domineering and arrogant towards everyone. It seems that he is not happy without saying something mean, no matter the person or the occasion. Old Man Tianji saw that the protagonist's external skills were not good enough, and took the initiative to teach the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist, whether verbally or through the psychological activities described by the narration, disliked this and that, as if he was owed something by others. As long as you are cold on the outside and hot on the inside, talk a lot, and say a few sentences about how grateful you are on the inside, I can tolerate it.

There is no ancient dragon life, but there is ancient dragon disease

Either he's showing off, or he's on the way to show off, pretending not to be a high-class person.

The front is very good, but Xiao Li Feidao is starting to look like a lunatic, and he has to explain a lot, and is too embarrassed to back down.

The biggest problem with this book is that the prodigal is not written elegantly enough. Drunken Master and the Prodigal Son go well together, but you, the Prodigal Son, have to act like a prodigal son. What kind of prodigal son does Jiang Yuyan have if he has already found his heart early on? ? ? ! ! Take a good look at Lu Xiaofeng, Chu Liuxiang, Yang Guo before entering the martial arts tournament, Linghu Chong, Lu Xiaojia, Shen Lang, and Gu Long himself. This is a serious prodigal son. You are now reckless, infatuated, and full of conspiracies. Your character is too awkward and fragmented 🙄🙄🙄

The writing is good, but the main character has problems with his personality. He is the ultimate dog licker and an alcoholic. Such a person deserves to die. Even if he writes about it later, it cannot change the initial impression. Three golden chapters and one chapter cannot survive this book.

I don't want it to be written by the same person. The first one is Drunken Hero, which smells like cologne, and the second one is Dian Lao, which has no logic at all.

No modern person in their right mind would like an alcoholic.

I was very interested in reading the first three chapters, but the rest turned me off. You are an alcoholic, you can think clearly and logically, and you can talk to people without any problems. You are going to engage in a drama about recruiting girls later. I really don't know what to say. Neither subversive nor crazy enough, then if you want to write a novice novel and set up the previous settings, why do you just follow the routine?

He's just a lunatic, and he still pretends that everyone is drunk and I'm alone. It's really disgusting.

I tried my best, but after reading chapter 30, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I ran away

It was fine before, but it has changed since the detoxification. The evaluation is a reply. And there is a kind of clear ignorance like a virgin writing a book

I only read the first chapter of Xiao Li's Flying Knife, and I only read half of it and gave up. I want to imitate Gu Long's style, but I don't have the writing power, so the dialogue is a complete mess and incomprehensible.

Looking at the title, I thought it was a free and unrestrained character, but it turned out to be a lunatic. . .

Wenqing has endured it, but he still talks dirty words. How can he set up the character of Wenqing and be so out of the ordinary? The writing is good

Gua, I thought it was a drunk guy when I came in, but I didn't expect it was a magnetic field guy 😂

Lu Zhanyuan was confused. Xiao Li's flying knife is very cool, killing people like hemp, and not taking human life seriously. As a result, he suddenly became a Bodhisattva when he met a scumbag. I really feel sick to my stomach. What's wrong with you being compassionate towards scum? Li Mochou's performance was also a bit mean. Can't bear it anymore? I can't accept it, the characters before and after are too different.

Not good looking. The character is very awkward.

This is not even for eunuchs. The rogue Taoist magic art of marrying clothes is written by the author as a torturous martial arts. If you have not practiced it to the high level of the magical power of wedding clothes, it is a torturous thing. Go and read the original work.

The first twenty chapters and the rest were written by two people, right? Two different styles of writing techniques. The first author's writing style is quite good, but the second author's writing style is too awkward.

A typical time-traveling martial arts novel, The Eight Heroes feels like the pinnacle of the current four chapters of this novel. I hope Snowflake Goddess Dragon can improve a bit.

After reading Chapter 67 of this book, I might as well change the name of this book to "So, However, However."

If you want to learn cologne writing, you must have the ability.

Tit for tat! It's not a fight! Please pay attention to correction!

I said, why doesn't he marry the dragon girl himself? A strange thing

Can you write this quickly? It's so boring.

Comrade the author, has he ever written about Guan Shan?