My Liver Attribute Is in the World of Cultivation

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Moreover, even the bulls at the beginning are placed in forbidden areas, which is a bit retro!

1. Pseudo system 2. The school of physical warriors: warriors in the early stage, and warriors in the later stage who practice Qi refining, and become saints of the physical body (Qi refining as a supplement) 3. Multiple female protagonists 4. Non-fast-paced pretentious and slap-in-the-face stories, slow-paced.

How can the Grand Master grab water for the village? It's really not a good idea! Can I change the level? It hurts to look at it

The first chapter persuades you to quit and it is recommended to make major changes. In the third chapter of the golden chapter, you throw away the settings and they are all unused settings. The whole plot of the first chapter is that the protagonist goes to the Forbidden Mountain to let the cows sleep and the calf is lost. Then there is how dangerous the Forbidden Mountain is, how cold the mountain wind is, how difficult the mountain road is to walk. Then there is nothing else. The rest are settings of the general background. At the national level, what is the mess of the Ninth Grade Zhongzheng system? Does it have anything to do with you, a cowherd boy? Wouldn't you wait until the plot progresses before printing out the settings?

I can't read the content of a system panel for almost one chapter.

I watched your system fill the screen and left immediately. It was too verbose to understand.

I don't know what's going on in Xiuxianwen now, but all of them are extremely muscular men. . . It's better to just write about Gao Wu than to write about cultivating immortality 😰

The mortal stage is very well written, but when it comes to the world of cultivating immortals, it's very strange. It feels like a martial arts sect, without any feeling of cultivating immortals. The fights are mostly close-quarters and slashing with knives, not like immortals or martial arts.

Body, blood, muscles, bones, skin and flesh are all similar things

It didn't feel good, I felt drowsy after watching it.

I feel so suffocated when reading this book. From martial arts training - meat training - bone training - internal organs training - master - grand master - cultivating immortals, it is like studying elementary school - middle school - university - master's - doctorate. It is also a land of fish and meat with monopoly of various resources and difficulty in entering the system!

I read Chapter 40, it's too watery, the sea, you are all water

The writing is pretty good! But mortals take up too much! They were all put on the shelves, but the protagonist didn't even come across any cultivation secrets! Immortal cultivation system or something! Don't know anything! Although the writing is good, it just adds more points along the way, more points, more points! Not worth watching!

There is a chance for this. Why not tap the spiritual root? I really don't understand. If you tap the physical body twice, you can become a mage. Why do you want to be a warrior?

I can't complain, I came here to become a saint in my body. In Chapter 232, I said that I can't build the foundation normally and can only fake elixirs in the future, so I can go all out on the path of body refining.

It's broken, I want to see some awkward things happen between the protagonist and Orochi🤓🤓

I just like to see big snakes, which is also the meaning of this book.

This book is an institutional document wearing a vest of cultivating immortals.

I didn't expect Heifer to be the heroine

You can post your plot ideas and supporting cast names here!

The author doesn't know how to write fighting scenes, so he can write less. It's a bit embarrassing to write like this. If it doesn't work, you can refer to Wubai or Squid's writing style. It looks like a fight between street gangsters. There are no moves, just slashing and slashing.

This is not a brainless and cool article, it is explaining that cultivating immortals is not about fighting and killing, but about human nature and sophistication.

Personally, I feel like I don't like reading harem stories.

Gua Xiao is still so hard-pressed, and the plot is surprisingly smooth. It is not a brainless and refreshing article I conclude that the author is confident This book will definitely not enter the palace! Chasable! !

Why is it that the sect also captures the flag? Is it a management system passed down from above?

The pig's feet haven't exerted their strength yet and are still so weak, so there's no need to read on. It's just fun to read and see the pictures.

I feel that there are some places that should be written in detail, but they are brushed over in one stroke, resulting in insufficient refreshment. There are also some places that should not be written too much, but are too detailed.

Let me tell you one thing: the early stage of half-step foundation building and the peak of Dzogchen.