Changing the Plot Begins with Moving into Love Apartment

Lin Wanyu

Qin Yumo

Chen Meijia is really unnecessary; she's just a lovesick fool who gives herself away for free.

Now it's clear that this story originated from Lu Zi; it's an urban life story interspersed with elements of cultivation and ancient martial arts. The beginning is exciting, but the later parts are just a bunch of rambling nonsense.

I couldn't keep watching until later. The Lin Group is no small company. How could they not investigate their daughter's boyfriend? The protagonist is juggling so many relationships, how could they possibly keep it a secret?

The idea of ​​a harem in "iPartment" is too strange. I personally don't like stories that break up original characters. If they're going to have a harem, they could have added other women, like Qin Yumo, Nuolan, or Wei Benxia.

I read one chapter but didn't finish it; it slowly took on a loser vibe.

I really don't understand why people like Lin Wanyu; she's so thin, like a stick, and looks malnourished.

What I'm saying is that if *Shadow Trace* doesn't prioritize quality and control quantity, it will inevitably fall apart later on. Either it neglects female characters, or the entire story is dominated by women, with the plot revolving around A today, B tomorrow, and C the day after. Moreover, the tastes of the female leads and supporting characters in these fanfictions shouldn't be hard to guess.

I'll give it a first subscription after seeing chapter 52, but I'll leave the review. There are genuinely a lot to complain about. The biggest controversy is the complete collection of all the shadow traces; it's indiscriminate in its content. The storyline before chapter 52 is the most messed up; it says it will be collected at the beginning, but it still ends up being mixed into the original plot. The romance scenes feel strangely written; it seems like the author lacks experience.