Traveling Through Lin Chong: a Hot Start and the White Tiger Hall

To be honest, if you don't like it, the characters in Water Margin are all young people. You can't achieve anything by relying on them. The author should consider other people more.

One hundred and eight single generals of Water Margin are not as famous as Jinlian 😏

It feels quite funny, a group of people are not doing well in a peaceful environment. I still want to travel back in time and rebel in ancient times by modern standards, but the heroes of Liangshan are just bandits and robbers who cannot stand up to the stage. He also picks and chooses others, rejecting this one if he has a bad character, and killing that bad guy. If you really traveled back in time, you probably wouldn't be able to survive for three days. Two beggars hanging around with you would be a blessing. No matter how miserable the Water Margin characters are, they are still heroes. Song Jiang was able to recruit these people, and he didn't know how many times he exploded these boasts. Do you know what scholarly rebellion is? What does it mean to be useless and a scholar? To say that Wu Yong is really useless, do you know how many times Wu Yong lost with his tactics?

History and literature are integrated into Water Margin, there is no myth, it is purely about heroes fighting for hegemony, and the people are ruthless enough. Some of the paragraphs include "If you don't want to marry, you still have to be willing", "Be generous enough to the soldiers, arrange reasonable promotions, and have arrangements for salary and family affairs" etc.

The plot is okay, but the writing is too archaic and makes it a bit tiring to read. The book about Heavenly Killer Li Gui also has antique writing methods, but the processing is better. Websites are mainly plots, not writing styles. . Writing with a little style is interesting, but overwriting can easily lead to dyslexia.

When I saw the three mountains in Liuzhong, I felt that the battle with the enemy minions was too detailed and the killing was not fun enough. It is better to describe the beheading of generals in detail and slightly break the formation, highlight the main body, make the movements essential and smooth, use more renderings, and kill with one spear (almost being chopped down by a soldier is an absolute failure). I don't know what's next?

"Tongdian" states: "Emperor Xiaowu of the Song Dynasty was very jealous. Officials from various countries were not allowed to be called 'lower officials' to their own kings." This happened in Xiaowu Xiaojianzhong. Originally it was a name for the kingdom's evasive ministers, but now it may be called oneself. The term "high official" was first recognized in the Southern and Northern Dynasties during the reign of Emperor Xiaowu of the Song Dynasty (454-456). In fact, it is more than that and can be traced back further. "Gu Bu Gu Lu" by Wang Shizhen of the Ming Dynasty has detailed research on this: "Book of Han·Jia Yi Biography": "If a minister is dismissed because he is weak and incompetent, it is said that he is an incompetent official." "The word "Xiaguan" can be seen in this, but it is not a self-proclaimed official. "Book of Jin": When he became emperor, Yu Liang wanted to abolish the king's way. He and Qie Jianshu said: "The Duke and Xiaguan both entrusted him with the responsibility, and the traitor was not punished. How could he see the late emperor underground!" He calls himself "Xiaguan" since the Jin Dynasty. Similarly, the eldest sister refers to the daughter The lord refers to the father.

Do you want to write an original version of Water Margin? Unpleasant.

Lady Lin and Gao Yanei? Zhenyun calamity?

There are magic spells in Water Margin. I am debating whether to write about the spells. Of course, if I want to write about it, it will only be about the level of black dog blood and the evil spirit of the military formation.

Can you stop talking nonsense when killing people and fighting? You can just sum it up after the killing. Why give others time to react?

Is Ruan Xiaoer the third brother or the second brother? Ruan Xiaowu will call him third brother sometimes and second brother sometimes.

The author came over and recommended a book, Dang Kou Zhi, in which the characters are useful for your protagonist to conquer the world 🙂

Come on, update soon, just, just, don't stop,

Not bad, but a little too water-margin style

I haven't read the book, but I would like to ask, is it a fight or a merger?

This novel is so well written, and the name is great. You will definitely become a great author. Friends who are waiting for the update can also read "Rolling Ming" first, it is not bad.

I don't like people who travel through time without using their brains to fight with bayonets.

Go directly to Aguda. At that time, you could be the second-in-command in the Wanyan Department and there would be no problem.

No matter how useless you are, there is no problem in being an emperor like Zhang Bangchang.

It's been two days. Is this going to end?