Cultivation of Immortality: Start with Liver Proficiency!

The first few chapters are okay, but not so much in the later chapters. Upgrade articles should grasp the main theme, which is to become stronger, and learn to be brief about other details. For example, Lao Deng said that there is an alchemist competing with him, so he is irritable. In a normal sentence, it is enough to say that there is a competitor with a sad face, instead of writing a few hundred words to describe it sideways. Don't write explanatory text

The chapters starting from joining Fangshi are too awkward and substandard. Just read it from the beginning.

I went, it turned out to be three times a day

Your punctuation is not very good, your sentences are broken, and you gasp for breath in one sentence!